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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 😃 i'll write an update first thing tommarrow.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Your fanfic is GREAT! ANd the longer the better!!! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 toooo good zaara! you have to continue soon! im dying to know whats gonna happen next!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara_13_9

OMy god i did'nt realise that the chapter got that long 😕 i hope you guys still read it! 😭

its ok dear, ur FF is really good, keep up your good work😛

love,

Janki

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow tahts really good i love it plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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your ff is great 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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lyk evry1's sayin zaara...the longa the betta 😉 😆cntinu sn it was rly gr8 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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***Chapter 2***


Everyone in the Bajaj household is sleeping , for good cause to since it's 4:29 a.m. Yet Prerna cant bring herself to fall asleep.

Prerna(thinking): Ma ne goos se me a ke pa ta nay Prem ko kya kadi ya. Ma oos se asi baat ka bih kas se saktih tih. patah nehi kahan hogah abhi tak ghar bhi nehi aya ore phir ay gah bhi kyon ma ne oos se mer ri gallati joe kah ore woh as se hi kas se man gay yah ke ma oos ko meri gallati maanti hoon. pata ne hi kis halat me hogah woh is waqt. ore agar oos se kuch ho......

Mr.Bajaj: Prerna kya baat hai tum soi nehi ab tak?

Mr.Bajaj gets up and walks to where Prerna is standing by the open window. The cool spring breeze brushing through her dark hair.

Prerna: Jis ma ka beta raat ke chaar baje (4:00) tak bahar ho wo chan ki neened kas se so sakti tih hai?

Mr.Bajaj: kya baat kar rih ho Prerna? Prem ghar may he ho gah. so gay yah ho gah woh abtak.

Prerna:Nehi Mr.Bajaj woh ab ghar nehi ay ye gah. Woh ab kabhi bhi nehi lo te gah. Ma ne ap na beta hamaisha ke liye koh diya hai.

Mr.Bajaj could see that Prerna was in the deepest distress and saw that Prerna was on the brink of tears.

Mr.Bajaj: Prerna tum ye kas si batein kar rehi ho? Prem ab barah ho chukah hai humaisha se toh apna khayal raktah ayah hai woh. oos ko kuch nehi hogah ye tumhara bramh hai ore phir........

Prerna:nehi Mr.Bajaj aj me re se bohatt bar ri gallati ho gay. Ghus se me a kar ma ne Prem ko woh keh diya jo ma ne kabhi sap ne me bhi nay socha ore woh bhi oos ke bar re me.

Mr.Bajaj:Prerna tum ye kas si batein kar rehi ho ore as sa kya keh diyah tum ne keh.......

Mukti: choti maa!

Prerna and Mr.Bajaj both turn around to see a very dishevelled and pained Mukti staggering into their room.

Mukti:"choti ma!" Mukti cried uncontriolably."Choti ma Prem!" "Prem kahan hai choti ma!"

Mukti looked like she was at a loss for words or just bring herself to say what she had inteded to. Prerna thought she looked really sick and that if this worried and hysterical Mukti did'nt stop her crying to take a deep breath soon she would surely drop umconcious.

Prerna: Mukti ye tu je kyah ho gay yah hai? teehk to hai tu. Ore ye tu kas si batein kar rehi hai.

Prerna tried to get a hold of the crying and wimpering Mukti but Mukti only moved further away from her.

Mukti: Choti maa! aup bat ta tih kyun nehi hein ke Prem kahan hai! hum me abhi isi waqt Prem ke pas jana ho gah!choti ma.....

Prerna: ye tuh kyah keh rehi hai? Ore tujeh Prem se kyun milna hai?woh bhi isse waqt?tuh soi kyun nehi ab tak? Kyah tu ne ake borah sap nah daikha kyah?

Mukti: Nehi choti ma! Ma ne Prem ko dekha tah ore woh isse waqt bohatt masibatt me hai! choti maa hame prem ko dundh na ho gah!

Prerna once again tried to get Mukti to sit down but Mukti simply refused by brushing Prerna's hands away.

Prerna: Mr.Bajaj mujh je lagta he ke Mukti ki tabaiyat bohatt karabh hai. App ja yein ore Dr. Mithal ko bal la lijeyein.

Mr. Bajaj who had faded in the background amongst all the trauma seemed to have snapped out of his querry.

Mr.Bajaj: haan Prerna mujeh lagtah hai ke yehi teehk ho gah.....

Mukti: Ye app loke kyah ke rehe hein! Ma bil kul teehk hoon! Hum me Prem ko dundh na cha hie ye! oos ki jaan ko khatarah hai! choti ma app meri baat....

The Phone rang and broke Mukti off in her desperate plead for help.

Mr. Bajaj: Ma dekh kar tah hoon.

Prerna nodded to him and once again attempted to calm Mukti.

Prerna: Mukti ye tuh kyah kar rehi hai? kyah haal bana yah hoa hai tun ne? tu je araam.....

Mukti: Nehi choti ma! APP SAMAJH NE KI KYUN NEHI KOSHISH KAR TIH HUM ME PREM KO DUNDH NA HO GAH! PREM KI JAAN KOH KHATARAH HAI! HUME..............

Prerna: BAAS! BAAS KAR MUKTI! TUH PAGAL HO GAY HAI KYA!KAS SE BATEIN KAR REHI HAI PREM KO.....

Mr.Bajaj: Prerna Mukti sach keh rehi hai.hospital se phone tah. Une kah keh na hai keh aik Prem naam kah larka abhi une ke hospital me bartih hoi ya hai ore jis admi ne oos ko bachiyah tah oos ne hi oon ko hamarah patah diyah.

Prerna did'nt trust her ears to tell her if what she was hearing was true. She tried to absorb what had been said but all together everything had come to a stop. She stood there speechless and thoughtless terror creeping through her gaining momentum with every passing second.

Mukti had no way to understand what had just been said other than to realise that what she desperately wanted to tell Prerna she even more desperately wanted it to be wrong . She hoped beyond hope that what she heard was another one of her hullicinations she hoped even more that Mr.Bajaj had'nt really said that Prem was in the hospital this very moment while she Mukti was here instead of with him where she belonged.

Mukti did'nt realise when her concern for Prerna's son had turned into her personal concern for someone she had already excluded from her life. She did'nt realise when she had awakened from her nightmare and had actually started crying and worrying for the one person that she wished beyond hope that she could learn to hate.

Mukti tried to stay strong tried to clear her mind of confusion but weakness took hold of her and she collapsed at Prerna's feet and began to cry even more.

Prerna , who was in silent tears still in shock, saw the state of her daughter and realised the truth and reality of what she had just heard.

Prerna: Mr. Bajaj hum me abhi iss si waqt hospital janah ho gah.

Prerna spoke in between pauses still trying to believe that what she heard was true.

Mr.Bajaj haan mai abhi gari lai ke atah hoon tum Mukti ko lay kar bahar aoh.

And so very worried father and concerned husband left leaving his wife to console his sobbing daughter.

Prerna bent down and taking Mukti by the shoulders tried to make her snap out of her hysteria.

Prerna: Mukti! Mukti hosh me a! hosh me a Mukti!

she shook the soobbing and pained Mukti vilently trying desperately to get a response.

Mukti: choti ma prem koh kuch ho gah to nehi? agrah Prem ko kuch...

Prerna: Baas Mukti! asa kuch nehi ho gah! ab chal hame isi waqt hospital janah ho gah. utoh Mukti hame PRem ke paas janah ho gah woh hospital me hai.

And so with all the energy that Mukti could muster she stood up and walked with Prerna getting weak with each step and growing tired with every movement she made.

AT THE HOSPITAL

Mr.Bajaj Prrna and Mukti reached the hospital and once in they were immediately met by the doctor who announced that he would be operating on their son.

Doctor: Mr. and Msr. Bajaj mer rah naam Dr. Mehra hai ma hie Prem ka elajh kar raha hoon....

Prerna: Kyah mera beta teehk hai doctor saab kyah hoa hai oos se woh yahan hospital me kas se ponchah???

A nurse comes and tell them that they have to sign a form to agree to the operation that was going to be done on their son.

Mr.Bajaj: Prerna ma daikh ke atah hoon tum yahan Mukti ke saat raho.

Mr.Bajaj leaves and makes his way to the nurses quarters.

Prerna: Dr.Mehra app chupeh kyon hai kuch keh te kyon nehi kas sa hai mer ra beta?

Dr.Mehra: Mrs.Prerna hum apni taraf se purih koshish kar rein gaih. Aup ka beta isse waqt critical condition me hai. Police kah keh nah hai ke woh highway pe apni gari nashe ki halat me chala rehai teh or tabh hie oon kah accident hua. ore itna hi nehi laikin jo innko yahan laikar iyaih teh woh bhi bohatt buri halat me hain.
Hum apni taraf se oon ko bacha ne ki pori koshish karein gay.

And so doctor left leaving behind a stunned and heart broken Prerna. Prerna seemed in the utmost shock at the thought of a dying son. she tried to speak say something anything but she could not even bring her self to take in a clear breath; so she walked not knowing where but knew she had somewhere to go that she had an obligation to make had something she wanted to say to god something she wanted some things she wanted to ask and.

Mukti had'nt realised when her choti ma had left her alone in the hall way. Had'nt realised when when her bad luck had turned to worse when the docte rhad said that Prem was in danger of losing his life all she knew was that.....

Mukti: PREM! PREM!

Mukti finally broke out of her shock when she saw prem being taken past her to an operation theatre. His face half hidden beneath a blanket of blood his clothes soaking in blood. "Is that his blood", Mukti thought in terror. It's so much blood is that Prem's.....

Mukti: ye app kahan le karh ja rehein hein Prem ko chori yein daikh nehi sktai kitnah khoon beh raha hai oon se! choriyein prem ko!

Mukti tried desperately too stop these men who were trying to take Prem away from her. she tried to to stop them but they made their strict and fromal way to the ICU. Mukti tried desperately to explain to them that he was her....

Mukti: "choriyein Prem ko!" she cried tears bruning her eyes at the sight of Prem, who for once had nothing to say he seemed to her very far away . He did'nt seem like Prem but like an imposter who had been placed in her Prem's place. This Prem was too quiet to be Prem he was to quiet to be UD.

Mukti: Prem! Prem kuch kehtai kyon nehi inko!

someone had taken a hold of her and was hugging her consolingly. Mukti began to cry even more at the sight of Prem being taken into the operation theatre and the doors closing behind him.

Mr.Bajaj tried to stay brave taold himself that he had to stay calm for his daughter and his wife had to take care of them. so he hugged Mukti trying to calm her and letting her know that God would'nt take Prem away after giving him back.

Mr.Bajaj:Mukti chupeh ho jah beta Prem ko kuch nehi ho ne walah woh bilkul teehk ho jiye gah. PRem koh kuch nehi ho saktah.......



Okay guys! i hope you like it even thougth PREm was not in it but i promise in my next update i'll include Prem and Mukti of course!

Edited by zaara_13_9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oky guys i made this post really long because i wanted to finish most of the hospital scenes in this chapter and make the next chapter anout Prem and Mukti so tell me if i should continue.😃
Edited by zaara_13_9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awwwww!!!!!!!!! I love it!!! They are one of my favorite jodi's!!! cont. sooooon!!!!!!!!

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