FF(PRB,udi) ( Pt 18 updted on Pg 33) - Page 17

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: bajajnprerna4ev

woow its gr8 and thanks Neha for his wonderful FF actually i use i to read it in Ronitroy.com i never knew it was here and thanks again .pls cont soon 😃 😊 😊

Vanessa



thanks vanessa 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja(5711)

its a gr8 part neha
but plz yaar let rish &niharika be alone &romancing by chance ,
plz dear make it na



thanks pooja :)
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nuts4kzk

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I want prerna going after bajaj like the1st time when she was going2 anu house and he was whistling eliv song and she kept on thinking abt it...... I loved that................... plsunlike real kzk dont seprate my bp..... yh 4 time bieg u can show nihar-rish romance.....

vaise pooja neha will kill us4 telling her what2do😆 kidding babes........................ pls i love ur style of writing so u cont ur style and I loved the part where he just puts blanket on his face😆.................. bajju is acting like a stubborn kid......................


thanks namzy for liking the FF!
real kzk mein to pata nahi kya chal raha hain! in a way i am glad ronit is not part of this mess! i hope bajju never comes back in real kzk.
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh I dont care abt kzk abt bajju abt prerna any more... I only come online2 see ur guys ff............... which is more close2 my heart now... and I mean it...... swear...................
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow namzy hv u stopped watching kzk? 😃
welcome aboard! the last episode of kzk i saw was the one in which sam tells prerna that she will choose her lover over her pati 😆 after that, i blocked out entire star plus from my tv 😆

but what i find FUNNIEST is the way AP fans are gloating after the leap abt AP's 'true love'.

I was like- hello? if Prerna really loved Anurag, if she wud hv really known anurag, she wudnt hv killed him na..she wudnt hv thought of him as a murderer. at least she wud hv given him sm benefit of doubt. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 10 Recap: Rish refuses to go on a holiday with Prerna.

Part 11

Niharika stormed into Rishabh's cabin next morning.
"Why did you refuse to go on a holiday???"
He looked at her. She was looking as pretty as ever, and looking even more beautiful as she was so angry.
He smiled.
"Whats so funny?"
"Nothing..u look so sweet when u are angry."
"RISHABH! I am asking u something. you HAVE TO go with Prerna on holiday."
"No way."
"Itna bhi kya kaam karna hain. Bajaj Group wont shut down if u r away for 1-2 weeks."
"Bajaj Group is doing fine. It wont shut down even if I am away for 1-2 yrs." Rishabh said proudly.
"Then? you told prerna that u had lots of work.."
"I lied."
"Kyun? aur sach kya hain?"
"arre kyun jau main uske saath! business ka kaam tha to baat alag thi. but i am not interested in going anywhere with her."
Niharika stared at him helplessly. "Aap nahi maanenge? Plz go for the holiday na.."
"Don't ask for this. I can't give this to u. Ok-wait, I'll go on one condition- you will also come with me. Let's go!"
Niharika shook her head. Rishabh's stubbornness had started to annoy her..

Prerna was at Basu House. It started raining heavily. Sam said "Prerna, it's raining so much, why don't u call mr bajaj and ask him to pick u up?"
Prerna knew that he was at home. She called him up. "Mr bajaj, come to basu house to pick me up."
"Its raining very heavily prerna.." Rishabh said lazily.
"I know, that's why.."
"Ask anurag to drop u na..ya phir, wahin pe reh jao, kal subah aa jaana."
"Aap kyun nahi aa sakte?"
"Aise hi. I mean-I am feeling veryy sleepy..aise mein car chala nahi sakta." Rishabh said.
"Driver ko leke aa jayiye."
"Driver ko bhej deta hu na! Arre Gangaram, madam ko lene jao basu house."Rishabh shouted.
Prerna was getting angry. "Give the phone to tushar."
"Use mat bulaana. Abhi abhi kaam se lauta hain, so raha hoga..." Rishabh said.
Prerna was getting irritated.
"Accha Gangaram is ready. Aa jaega wahan pe tumhe lene. OK? Bye!"
"Mr Bajaj aa rahe hain?" Anurag asked prerna.
"Nahi..he is very tired." Prerna muttered.
"Main aa jau tumhe drop karne?" anurag said.
Sam looked at him angrily.
"Ok..lets go." Prerna said.

Rishabh was all set to hit the sack. His target was to fall asleep before prerna comes, so that he wont have to talk to her. That's when his cell rang.
"Rishabh?"
"Niharika..bolo na"
"I am in a problem. I had just gone to Bandra for shopping and my car has some problem. Worst still, it's raining. I don't know what to do.."
"Stay right in the car..I'll be there soon."
Rishabh didnt even bother to change into formals. He jumped into d car in his white kurta and salwar , and drove fast up north of the city.
Niharika was relieved to see Rishabh. He had already informed his trusted mechanic, who came and took away niharika's car. They headed towards her house.
"Itni raat ko akele yahan aane ki kya jarurat thi? Lekin aap ko shopping sab se important hain!" Rishabh scolded her.
Niharika realised he was really mad at her, he would address her as 'aap' only when he was angry.
"I didn't realise how I got late..I was planning to leave early.but u know how much I love to shop-"
"Next time, tum mujhe saath lekar jao."
"No way, you will irrirate me a lot." she said. He kept quiet.
He was looking so different in the salwar kurta..she was used to seeing him in suits at office. Now he looked more traditional and just so handsome.
"This kurta..this indian look looks so good on u.." she said softly.
Rishabh almost blushed.
"Thanks.." he said as if it didnt matter to him but he was basically delighted to receive compliment from her.
"Thanks to mujhe kehna chahiye. u rescued me in the rains."
"This is my duty." He said.
"No..but it's really nice of u to come up all the way for me..in this torrential rains"
He smiled. "If it means so much to u, can I ask for a favour in return?"
"What?" she asked suspiciously.
"Dont worry..nothing to get suspicious abt..can I take u out for coffee?"
She nodded.
"I'll take u to my favourite coffee shop." Rishabh said.
Rishabh and Niharika were sitting in the plush coffee shop. The coffee shop was done up in bright hues , with transparent glass walls, and it was almost empty at that hour.
Prerna and anurag were passing from there.
Anurag looked at the coffee shop. He felt like asking Prerna for coffee. He stopped the car. and then he saw mr bajaj sitting there.
"Anurag, car kyun roki?"
"uum...Prerna..is that mr bajaj?"
"where-"
She looked towards the coffee shop and she spotted Rishabh. But she cudnt spot the person sitting next to him as a wooden bar was obstructing her view.
"start the car anurag."
"You don't want to go in?"
"Nahi. mujhe ghar jaana hain."

Rishabh returned home much later, after dropping Niharika to her house.
"Mr Bajaj, aap kahan the?" Prerna said.
"I was with a business associate at my favorite coffee shop." Rishabh said.
"When I called u, u were sleepy. When someone else calls u.."
"Prerna, mujhe pata tha, ke main nahi aaunga to anurag tumhare saath jarur aaega. Lekin main jinke saath tha, unko is waqt sirf meri jarurat thi. Agar mujhe lagta ke wahan tum bilkul akeli ho, ya tumhe sirf meri jarurat hain, to main jarur aa jaata."
Prerna looked at him suspiciously.He shrugged his shoulders.
"By the way, the driver came back saying that u had already left with anurag. You should have told me earlier na, i had to unnecessarily waste petrol."
"Business ke kaam le liye aap suit ki jagah kurta pahen kar gaye the?" She asked.
"Oh haan...I was in a hurry..to..waise aaj ke baad to, main office mein bhi inhi kapdo mein jaane ki soch raha hu." Rishabh said.
"Kyun?"
Rishabh just smirked.
Prerna was still confused. He shrugged his shoulders and said "tum itna kyun tension le rahi ho..isnt the weather nice..be happy prerna, the rainy season has started."
Prerna just looked at him- what was so great about the rainy season..
For him, it was indeed special..a coffee and convo with niharika right during first showers of the rainy season..looks like the nature is playing cupid for him..
Edited by nehavarun - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
aawwwwwwwwwwwww this was oh so romantic n yet sooo funny
gangaram was the best 😆 n not to waste petrol 😆
well prerna is getting jealous hehahahahahah...this is just awesome neha...loved it 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was sweettttttttttttttt and it had more of my prerna and my bajju....................
lolz kurta and salwar 😆 😆 😆 neha its caled pajyama for men 😆 😆 but it was cute.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks so much neha and it was gr8 👏 . BTW sammie or namzy or neha do u guys know when is sukhi coming back fron her vacation??? 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
PART 12

Next morning, Niharika and Prerna were having coffee together. Prerna was a bit upset. Rishabh's cold and distant behaviour had really started to get to her.
"Prerna, what's the matter? You look upset..any business problem.."
"No..nothing."
"Come on, u can tell me."
"Well..it's nothing related to business."
"Then? any of the kids acting smart?"
"I have already given up on Prem and Kasak. They are never going to listen to me, I know that."
Niharika kept quiet. She was not really fond of the over-pampered and evil brother-sister duo. She was of the opinion that instead of treating Prem and Kasak as some sort of little angels, Rishabh and Prerna should give each one tight slaps and lock each one up in his/her room for at least one year. But she knew parenting was a private matter, so she never expressed her opinion to the Bajajs.
"Aur ab to Mr. Bajaj bhi kuch alag hi tarah se behave karne lage hain.."
Niharika almost dropped her cup of coffee.
"Kyun..Ri- Mr Bajaj ne kya kiya?"
"Aaj kal woh mujh se baat hi nahi karte. Sirf office mein business ki baatein, ghar pe bacchon se related kuch baatein..that's all. Otherwise he behaves as if I am non-existent."
Niharika was embarrassed. Her heart went out to Prerna.
"And sometimes when he speaks, I don't understand it. Like, yesterday he said that he wanted to start wearing kurta-pajama to office. Does this make any sense to you?"
Niharika blushed.
"Uum..no..no..it really doesn't make much sense. Prerna, maybe he is angry with you about something. why don't u try to be more nice to him and win his heart?"
Prerna didn't like this suggestion. In fact, she didn't get it in first place. She had never worked to win a man's heart. She had both Rishabh's and Anurag's hearts at her feet no matter how much terribly she behaved.
"You could do well with a makeover u know..u hv put on weight..consider joining a gym..or yoga maybe..? Try a new haircut rather than the same boring long straight hair. If u want, I can help you in ur makeover."
Prerna looked at Niharika. Thought she didnt like Niharika's critical comments, looking at Niharika's svelte figure and young, trendy look, Prerna wanted to be more like her.
"Thanks Niharika. Pata nahi agar tum nahi hoti to mera kya hota..I don't have many friends. And no girlfriends at all. But now I have found you..I can share my problems with you."
"Anytime!" Niharika smiled.

Rishabh had a hearty laugh when Niharika informed him that she was giving a 'makeover' to Prerna.
"Tumhe aur kuch kaam nahi hain?" He said.
"There is nothing funny about this." She said angrily.
"Ok! Let's stop this topic and get some work done."
"Wait and watch- Main bohot jald tum dono ka patch up karwa doongi."
"I am telling you for the nth time, STOP interfering in my marriage. My marriage is hopeless.And no matter how much u try, things are not going to improve."
"Rishabh but why are u so negative?"
"Not negative, just realistic."
"I just feel sorry for Prerna u know..she has so many problems. Her kids are unruly, and you don't support her at all-"
Rishabh looked up.
"My kids are not unruly." He said.
"But they are!!!They are sweet, but they just behave the way they want to. I am sorry to say this Rishabh, but you need to somehow discipline them. Sometimes love isnt good enough, only discipline works." He was listening carefully.
"Anyways, it's really ur personal matter, and I shouldn't be commenting on this." Niharika focused back on her work. When they finished their work,it was already 9 pm.They went out for dinner and Rishabh then went to drop her home.
He stopped the car in front of her bunglow. Niharika was surprised to see the lights on inside.
"Is waqt kaun ho sakta hain? The servants are not there..I know that. What if there is a thief?"
Rishabh went ahead and opened the door. He entered cautiously , followed by Niharika.
Scared, she held his hand tight.
Rishabh smirked. "I must thank that thief." he whispered. She blushed.
A man was sitting on the couch and reading newspaper.
"Priyan!!!"
He raised his head above the newspaper and smiled. Then he got up.
"Aap kab aaye!" Niharika smiled.
The man turned to Rishabh and exclaimed- "Mr Rishabh Bajaj!What a pleasant surprise!!!"
Rishabh smiled. He knew Priydarshan Mittal- he was an old friend...But what was Mittal doing in Niharika's house?
"So u two know each other? Still, let me have a formal introduction- Priyan,this is Rishabh Bajaj, I am working with Bajaj Group these days. And Rishabh, this is Priydarshan..my husband."
Rishabh and Priydarshan shook hands.
"I am so happy to see you yaar!" Darshan gave a warm hug to Rishabh.
Rishabh would have been equally happy to meet Darshan like that in any other situation, but now his old friend was also related to Niharika..
"Ab to main isi shaher mein hu, lets meet up sometime. There's so much to talk..we must be meeting after ages."
"Yeah..sure.."
Rishabh left their house.
Though separated due to lifestyle and attitude differences, Niharika and Darshan were still legally married, and were on cordial terms.
He owned 50 % of their Mumbai house, and stayed there on his business trips.
"I am so hungry! Tell me where u want to go for dinner.."
"uumm..I just had my dinner with Rishabh.."
"Ohh..I was waiting for u..anyway, I am not that hungry."
"You just said u were very hungry. If u don't want to go out, I'll cook up something for you..give me half an hour."
"OK!"
Niharika went to kitchen to prepare dinner for him. Priyan was tall, fair and handsome, but she thought he was looking troubled..and worried..he had lost a lot of weight, which was surprising since he was a foodie..she wondered what was bothering him..
She served him dinner, they discussed about their son, other family members, work etc. He told her that he had come to Mumbai for a very very important project and had no idea about the duration of his stay. "Anything between one week and one year" He said.

Rishabh was driving back home. Somehow, Darshan's presence had unsettled him. Especially Niharika's words- 'My husband'..'My husband' as in NOT 'my ex-husband'???

Next day, Darshan called him up.
"Rishabh! Let's meet for dinner sometime.."
"Yeah..we will..but I am quite busy this week.."
"Niharika said you do not have any meetings on wednesday evening.."
"well ya but-"
"So wednesday it is! I'll book the place and pass on the details to you. Actually, I am not going to invite Niharika and your wife Prerna for this dinner. Because I want to talk something extremely personal with you. I..need your help.."
".."
"thanks rishabh."
Rishabh disconnected the phone and wondered what sort of help Darshan wanted. Darshan was egotistical, and hence, he must be in some major trouble..to ask help from somebody else.

Prerna looked in the mirror one more time. She liked her new look. She had styled her hair differently, a new cool asymmetrical hair cut instead of her usual straight hair, new make up, new diamond earrings and pendant. The shirt and jeans she was wearing werent exactly flattering- as she had put on weight, but she liked the change in her look.

Udi had come to Bajaj House to meet his sisters. He was shocked to see new look of Prerna.
"Mother India???Yeh aap ne kya kiya hain? Aap ki tabiyat to theek hain?"
"Maine kya kiya?"
"Kuch nahi- I mean-" he supressed his laughter.
"Aap ne is umar mein 'make-over' kyun kiya hain?"
"Aise hi."
"Ab aap ko Mother India bulau ya Mother America!"
"SAD JOKE bro!" Kasak came there.
"Kasak, how do you like my new look?"
"What difference does it make! You were already embarrassing enough, and now even more-"
"KASAK!" she got a tight slap from her father before she could finish her sentence.
Rishabh and Niharika had walked in.
"This is not the way to talk to your mother. Tum sab log sirf bigadte ja rahe ho. Khaas kar ke tum dono." Rishabh pointed a finger at both Kasak and Udi.
"Daddy Cool!!! I am so surprised to see you and Niharika aunty here!!! Waise, aaj Eagle Coffee Shop band hain kya? Ya phir -"
Rishabh stopped Prem mid-way in his sentence.
"Dekho Prem, tum yahan is ghar ke logon se milne aaye ho, yeh bohot acchi baat hain. Lekin- yeh Basu House nahi hain, jaha par bacchon ka badon se badtameezi se pesh aana chal jaata ho. Is ghar se kuch usool hain, sanskar hain- aur jab tak tum is chhat ke neeche ho, tumhe in sanskaron ka khayaal karna hoga. Aayi baat samaz mein?" Rishabh said coldly.
"Prem, lets go to my room and call everybody else there." Kasak and Prem left.
Prerna looked at Rishabh teary eyed.
"Mr Bajaj, thanks for handling the situation." she said.
"Mujhe yeh bohot pahle karna chaahiye tha.Sometimes the kids just need discipline, and someone has made me realize this." Rishabh said and went to his room.
Niharika smiled to herself. "If he listens to me about dealing with his kids, hopefully he will soon listen to me about patching up with Prerna." she thought to herself.

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