New ff.Part 4 updated pg 4

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Hey guyz!!Guess what??

Me and Pavan are making a new FF!!!!!Its about Maya,Bajaj,Apo*na and Prerna.In this FF...there is no Aditiya Pratap Singh.Yay!!Lol...anyways.The characters are the same.

Concept: Apo*na is an old enemy of Mrs.Prerna Bajaj,her husband Mr.Rishab Bajaj and Mr.Anurag Basu.In revenge Apo*na kidnaps Prerna and replaces her by a look alike;Maya.Maya is young woman who would do almost anything for money.Apo*na promises her 50% of the property they will get after they wreck Bajaj family.And that is the only reason Maya listens to Apo*na,if she didn't promise her the property...then Maya would never ever listen to Apo*na,for that fact she would never listen to anyone.Now all of you guyz will see whether Maya can find out how hard being Prerna can be,and if she does...will she change?Will she to get rid of the enemy neither Prerna,Rishab or Anurag could never get rid of?

Only one teensie little problem....we arent sure of the name yet...soooo....this is just New FF...for a while k?Ill edit it when me and Pavan decide on a name k?

C ya!!!

Hope u like our new ff

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Posted: 18 years ago
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No onw likes it??Lol reminds me when no one replied to my FF the first time
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wow! nice!👏👏
Edited by tonyparkerfan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWESOME concept - all the best to you and PAvan.. really looking forward to your FF.. :-)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its nice yar, cont so we cant tell u more, how is it? cont now
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i know namzy...jst wait a while.why dont u update ure FF.U ve kept us in suspense long enuf.Why is Anu baba calling??
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i will...i will
Patience...im just getting the update ready now ....and its ready!!!!!

~*~*~*~Part One~*~*~*~

In a dark room:

Maya:Ab hum uskey barey main kya karengey

Voice:Tum uska fikar mat karo...main sambhaloongi....tum sirf aapna kaam karo.

Maya:Theek hai...lekin mujhe woh property chahiyeh Apo*na!

Apo*na:Maine kaha naa...main sab kuch sambhaloongi.Tum sirf Prerna ki acting karo.Tum bohaut achi actress ho.Kisi ko shaq bhi nahiin hua key tum Prerna nahiin Maya ho.

Maya:Maloom hai....lekin kitni dher kiliye mujhe yeh natak karna ho ga?Main us aadmi key saath ek minute bhi nahiin guzaar sakti!

Apo*na:Main bhi nahiin guzaar sakti...lekin karna parega.Warna kiss ure property bye bye.

Maya:Sach main Apo*na...tum to Komollika say bhi badkar nikli....

Apo*na:Haan...aur phir...agar tum nahiin hoti naa.Toh mera saraa plan barbaad hojata.

Maya:Haann...log kehte hai key jab kisi ko madat chaiyeh...aur woh bhi paise kiliye.Toh Maya ko bulana!

And they both start singing:

Ajeeb dastaan hain yeh...kahaan shuru kahaan khatam.Yeh manziley hey kaunsi....na woh samaj sakeyy na hum!!

And start laughing.

Maya's phone rings:

Maya:Hello?

Person:Woh Maya ji.. Mrs.Bajaj ko hosh ageya

Maya:Acha theek hai...

And she hangs up the phone.

Maya:Lo...ab ayega mazaa.Humari Prerna bhi hosh main agey hain

Apo*na:Excellent...theek hain.Main jaakey miloongi.Tum yahaan pey rehna.Agar kuch hogaya...toh mujhe phone karlena okay?

Maya:You got it...and she walks out of the room.But not before her and Apo*na have another laugh at their plan.

In Prerna[Maya's for the mo] and Bajaj's room:

Bajaj:Prerna

Maya was combing her hair and didnt respond.She still wasnt used to being called Prerna yet..

Bajaj called again:Prerna

Then Maya realised that she was supposed the be Prerna:

Maya:Hmm?

She is thinking:Uff...kya Prerna key baghair ji nahiin sakta kya?Roze uska naam pukara ha hai.Ajeeb family hai yaar...

Bajaj:Kasak agey kya?

Maya thinking:Kasak???Who the hell is Kasak...shit yaar.Yeh Apo*na forgot one of the family members...

Maya:Uhh mujhe nahiin pata.Main busy thi.

Bajaj:THeek hai...main usko phone karloonga and he goes into the bathroom.

Maya takes advantage that he is in the bathroom and runs to Apo*na's room.

Apo*na opened the door for her and locked it when she came inside.

Maya:U forgot a family member!!That Bajaj was asking me about someone called Kasak...who the hell is this Kasak?

Apo*na:Kasak...Kasak.Oh yeah Kasak.Kasak Prerna aur Bajaj ki beti hai...she is coming back from America in a few days.

Maya:Excellent...okay see you.

But when she unlocked the door and opened it she gasped!!!!!

I felt like cont cuz im bored.So ill cont and then Pavan can cont from there.

Maya:Mr.Bajaj!!...main bas Apo*na say baat karne aahithi....

Apo*na:Haan...woh bas baat karne aahithi.

Bajaj:Koi baat nahiin...woh Prerna maine Kasak ko phone karliya...woh kal arahi hai.

Maya:Haan theek hai....aap chalen..main abhi aati hoon.

Maya closes the door and sighs.

Maya:Mujhe laga main marne wali hoon!Thank god usney kuch nahiin suna

Apo*na:Haan...lekin ab we have to be more careful.

Maya:You can say that again..im too young for jail!

Apo*na:Tum aapni age ki fikr maat karo.....maine kaha naa...tum bas aapna kaam karo.Main kal subha Prerna sey miloongi.

Maya:Okay..good night.

Apo*na:Good Night...oh and shyad Anurag ka phone ajeyga..dont be surprised.Woh roze aapni favourite ex ko phone karta rehta hai.

Maya laughs:Haan...jo stories tumney mujhe bataya...mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai.Lekin agar usney mujhe raat main phine kiya naa...toh main batadoongi key main Maya hoon.

Apo*na:Haan aur phir woh sab ko batayga key tum Maya ho...aur koi uspey vishwaas nahiin karega....

And they laugh again and Maya leaves..........

Okay...not becuz of my Namzy Di...[she is forcing me to add something] i am adding a small part.Just to make Namzy happy.U guyz dont no how stubborn she is.And a very good blackmailer😉

Maya goes into Prerna's room...she looks around.

Maya thinks:Uff...gharwaley old fashioned hai..aur ghar bhi.

Bajaj:Prerna..tum abhi tak sohi nahiin?

Maya:Uhh...nahiin.Main bas..abhi soney waali thi.

Maya thkns:Main sach main kerahi hoon...yeh Bajaj Prerna key picheh para hai..God knows how prerna llives with him.And I hope woh Abhi-no what was his name??Haan Anurag Basu mujhe raat ko phone nahiin karta hai.I need my beauty sleep😆

Maya was about to go to sleep...when Bajaj grabbed her.

Maya thinks:Now he is really freaking me out!What does Prerna see in him?

Maya:Mr.uh Bajaj...mujhe neend arahi hai..toh main sojaon?

Bajaj:Ismey poochney ki kya baat hai?

Maya:nahiin woh...agar aap mujhe chorengey...toh main sohsakooongi naa...

Maya thinks:Yess..leave me..please??Is it working??

Bajaj:Prerna..and he lets go of her.

Maya:Thanks...and she goes to sleep.

Maya thinks:Apo*na owes me BIG TIME!!!!!!!

There Namzy....i hope that made u feel better..

Edited by Sara_K95 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ummm seems nice 😊 do continue....will be looking forward for it 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was nice..
waiting for the nexct!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tell that to Pavan...she said i culd do the first part and she'll cont

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