bajajprerna fan fic-last part on page18 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very few ppls commented, I m not cont......... 😭 😭 😭 I know I m bad at this. But Saru forced me in to writing it......... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG it was HOT to the core- real groovy stuff namzy!! rockin!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Cont........
In the morning as the sun light filters through the window and falls on the face of Rishabh

Prerna stirrs and feel the wieght of Rishabh's hand on her waist. She turns her face towards his and for a long long time try to drink in the softness and kind of calmness and innocence( 😆 dont mean to sound him as a girl, its the way she is seeing him)he had right now while sleeping😳..... She always loved him like this and somewhere down in her heart, she wanted to just give him all the happiness and peace she could😳. Suddenly Rishabh stirred and she came back to reality and she turned her tear smeared face to other side.

Bajaj opened his eyes and in semi sleepy state pulled Prerna closer and started kissing her neck but suddenly he stopped as he heard the sobbing sound. He pulled him self on his 1 elbow and turned Prerna's face. He was totally silent and he felt a sudden pain in his chest as his heart was wrenched, seeing his love crying like that.

Bajaj( hoarsely):Prerna please dont. Dont do this Prerna. How has this happened.. How???? Prerna lets start a new life, with only you and me...... I love you and I know you also love me..... I totally hate my self for what I did to you yesterday night. I promise I will be the person, whom you loved. You just promise me that you wont meet Anurag.
He pulls her closer tenderly but at the mention of Anura's name 😡 she stiffens

Prerna: You always doubt me...You know that I only love you, you are my life..... Anurag is just a DOST........ I just cant.............

She tries putting her fingers tenderly on his face but as she said this word DOST, he threw her hand away and got up.....

Bajaj: Mrs.Bajaj mein app per ek baat saaf saaf zahir kar dena chahta houn ke agar ainda kabhi mein ne Mr.Basu ko iss ghar mein dehkha ya kabhi tumhare batoon mein un ka zikar bhi suna tu tum dono ke liye mujhe se bura aur koi nahi ho ga.


Bajaj bent towards her and pulling her closer while his arms bit on her arms said: Tum mujhe majboor kar rahi ho woh Mr. Bajaj banne mein jo tumahre aane se pehle thaa.....Meine kai martaba Anurag ka naam hum dono ki nizzi jindagi mien suna hai aur kai martaba Anurag ne humari zindagi mien dhakal diya hai . I wont let him come in our life again.... You have made me totally despise this word 'DOST' ...... It is a beautiful word and a sacred relation...... But you and Anurag have made this relation totally...... despicable

Bajaj leaves her and storms out....

Prerna is shocked at this sudden transformation of her hubby who a minute back was ready to start a life fresh and had promised her that he will always be the man, whom she fell in love and not the 1 whom she married forcibely for the first time.. ........... She was totally confused........

At that time she comes out of her trance and the phone rings. She lifts and at the same time Bajaj lifts.. Its NONE OTHER THEN THE GREAT Anurag Basu.....


Edited by nuts4kzk - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Woooooooahhhhhhh!!!

Mazaa aa gaya yaar! super cool!! Love this ruff-n-tuff Rishu! way to go namzy!!

Love ya! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks Sukhi, man u have an exam tomm. so I hope it was a good change for you........ All the best..... I tried making him little subdued coz Sammie dint like him so possesive and litle ruthless in my last part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowow Namzy di...awms stuff...keep up the good work... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Arre dont worry re namzy- I am 95% done for my exam tomm!! chill and keep up the good work:)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

Arre dont worry re namzy- I am 95% done for my exam tomm!! chill and keep up the good work:)

Madame prachi had 4 chapters left when she called me around 7pm can u belive. good u r done... I m ur well wisher😆 Thats why little concern for you........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WAH WAH WAH....zabardast 👏
Namzy u Rock!!! mannnn 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanx for the link u gave in teh HUB Namita di..will read it now!

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