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Posted: 18 years ago
Prem-Maa,mujhe aap se kuch khena hai.
Prerna-bolo beta.
Prem-Maa yeh sab se sun ke,app shock zuroor hongi.
Prerna-Baat kya hai Prem.
Prem-Maa,Mukti ko brain tumor hai.
Prerna-Kya?
Prem-Haan maa yeh sach hai.
Prerna-Prem iss ke liye to alaaj hai.
Prem-Ji Maa.Iss slisilay mein aap se baat karna chaatha hun.
Sneha-Does Mukti she has a brain tumor?
Prem-Haan.
Kaajjal-that's why we have to leave by next week.
Prem-Hum aglay haftay nahi,balke kal ko hi jaa rahey hain.
Kaajjal-It's fine with me,I'm sure Mukti di won't mind.
Prem-Great,to tum jaa key apni packing kar lo.
Kaajjal-Who else is going?
Prem-Just you and me.
Kaajjal-It's impossible.
Prem-Why?
Kaajjal-Di khabi Aman aur Payal ke beghar nahi jaayein ghi.Woh ek pal bhi un ke beghar nahi ghuzarti.
Sneha-Tum unn ko bhi ley jaaoon.
Prerna-Eh bagwan meri beti ki raksha karna.
Sneha-MAA DON'T WORRY.
Prem-I promise she'll be fine.Maa we'll leave in the morning.Mein ne tickets book kara li hain.
Prerna-Teek hai Beta.Ab tum log jaa ke so,varna subha late ho jao ge.

In the morning.The sun has already risen.
Prem looks at the time-Oh shit we are doomed.He gets ready,and goes straight to the living room.
Prerna-Good Morning beta.
Prem-Good Morning mom.Maa Mukti?
Prerna-mein ne usse flight ke barey mein bataya tha,to iss liye woh tayaari kar rahi hai.
Prem-Maa i think we are late.
Aman-Don't worry dad.
Payal-Jab tak hamari Mom hamaray saath hai tab tak hum khabi late nahi hon ge.
Prem-Really?
Payal-Yes Papa.
Prem-Okay app logo ne breakfast mein kyaa kaya.
Aman and Payal-cereals.
Sneha-Prem tumay pata hai ke,Tumaray bachey apni maa ke beghar kuch nahi kahtey.
Prem-That's cute.Okay meri choti Princess kahan hai.
Aman-Kashish,woh to subha se mom ke saath hai.Kashish comes running downstairs.
Kashish-here I am Papa.
Prem-Oh come here my princess.
She runs to Prem.
Prem-okay my princess,there is something i have to tell you.
Kashish-What is it?
Prem-You have to stay with your dadi and bua for few days.
Kashish-Kyun Papa?
Prem-tumhari Mamma ko aur Aman aur Payal ko New york jhana hai.Aur mein chaathha hun ke tum Dadi ke saath raho.
Kashish makes a sad face.
Mukti-Prem uss ki zaroort nahi hai.
Prem-Kya matlab.
Mukti-KASHISH bhi to meri beti hai,aur woh kyun na hamaray saath jaaye.
Kashish-See dad mom is smarter then you.
Prem-Par Mukti Kashish ka school hai.
Mukti-Koi baat nahi,I'll teach her everything she misses in school.So there is no problem.
Prem-Maa mujhe lagta hai ab hamay jaana chaiye.
Prem and Mukti touch Prerna's and Bajaj feet together.
Prerna and Bajaj-Khush raho.
Prerna-Mukti beta jaaldi wapas aanna.Mein tera intezaar karon ghi.AB TO mujhe uss din ka intezaar hai jis din tu dhulan ban kar iss ghar mein aaye ghi.
Mukti has tears in her eyes.
Mukti-choti ma,mein shayad hi aaoon.
Bajaj-Mukti beta aisa nahi boltay.Bagwan sab kuch sahi kar de ga.(By the way,Prerna has told Bajaj about Mukti's brain tumor)
Sneha-Jaaldi anna,abhi to tum ne meri bhabhi bhi bana hai.
Mukti-Aman,Payal aur Kashish dadi aur dada ka arshiwad lo.The kids go running to them.
Sneha to kids-Have fun.Kashish khoob se masti karna.

They are about to leave when SUDDENLY Kaajjal's cellphone rings.
Kaajjal-Hello.
Avinash-Kaajjal mein Abhi.
Kaajjal-Haan bholo ABhi.
Avinash-I heard you are going to NewYork.
Kaajjal-You know.Mukti ka operation.Prem chaatha hai ke yeh jald se jald ho.
Avinash-Great mein bhi tumharay saath hi aa raha hon.
Kaajjal-Kyun?
Avinash-MAA aur dad NE bhulaya hai.
Kaajjal-sab kuch teek hai na.
Avinash-Haan,bas zara dad ko business ke bharey mein kuch madad chaiye.
Kaajjal-Acha to phir,We'll wait for you.
Avinash-Luv yOU.
Kaajjal-Me too!!!
She hungs up.
Mukti-What happen?
Kaajjal with a smile on her face-Abhi bhi aa raha hai.
Prem-Yeh to achi baat hai.
The kids-Great Buddy is coming too,this is going to be fun.
Aman-ARE WE GOING on a trip Mamma?
Prem-You can say that.
Payal-Mom I like India.
Prem-Lets go,I don't want to miss the flight.So they head for airplane.


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Posted: 18 years ago
I know this is so short,but i am working on it.Hey guys i have another fanfic name Chand sa Roshan Chera,I think u guys have heard about it.SO do read that one also.
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice update 😊 it was really sweet i still can't believe how much prem cares bout mukti 😳 n da kids i no i say this everytime i leave a comment but there really really sweetttttttt 😳😆 update soon n it wasn't short at all 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
really good hun! both your fanfics are great, please continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
continue soon and it is great 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
I will update tomorrow,Oh my god Skools r opening.I HATE SKOOL.OH GOD!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
jus read ur fanfic!!!!!! cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
At the airport.
Mukti-He'll come Kaajjal,don't worry.
Kaajjal-Di he has never been this late.
Prem-He must be stuck in traffic.
Aman-Aunty look over there.There he is.
Kaajjal-Thank God .
Avinash-Hey everyone.
Kaajjal-where were you?Pata hai meri jaan ja rahi thi.
Avinash-I'm sorry.It's not my fault,it's cause of the traffic.
Kaajjal-Please ainda aisa mat karma,phone to kar sakte they.
Payal-aunty jaane do na.Buddy won't do it again.
Aman-Now can we please leave.
Prem-Sure beta.

Prem and Mukti sit together in the airplane.
Prem-Mukti tum ne mujhe maaf kar diya na.
Mukti-Haan Prem.
Prem-Mukti,I am really really sorry,ke mein ne tume itna dard diya.
Mukti-tum saari purani baatein bhol jao Prem.
Prem-I've tried it,but never worked.
Mukti-Now I'm here.Everything will be fine.
Aman-Mom I can't sleep.
Mukti-Come here,you can sleep in my lap.
Aman-Thanks Mom. Aman falls asleep immediately in Mukti's lap.
Prem-Arre Mukti yeh to itni jaldi so gaya.
Mukti-Aman ki purani adaat hai.Jab use need nahi aati to who hamesha mera pass aatta hai aur apna sir meri gaud mein rak soh jata hai.
Prem-Cute.You know Mukti jab muhe bhi neend nahi aayi ghi na.To mein bhi tumharay pass aa jaye karon gha.
Mukti-Prem abhi ka to nahi pata,par shaadi ke pass tum meri gaud mein so sakte ho.If I live.
Prem-Mukti how many times do I have to tell you stop talking about death.You are not going away.And when we get married,I will sleep in your lap.
Mukti-teek hai,Par ab to tum so jao.
Prem-can I lean my head on your shoulder?
Mukti-Sure.
Prem-You know Mukti I've always waited for this moment,You and me and our kids.
Mukti-really,mujhe nahi pata tha ke tumay pyaar bhi hoga.
Prem-mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ke mein tum se itna pyar karun gah.
Mukti-I always loved you Prem.
Prem-me too.

The flight went so fast,The family has now reached their house.
Kashish-Mamma app yahan rethi ho.
Mukti-haan.
Kasish-it's beautiful.I love all the flowers.Papa aren't those flowers beautiful.
Prem-Yes just like your mom.
Payal-You Know Kashish.Me and Mamma grew them.
Mukti-lets go inside.
Prem-Mukti,tum ne ghar to bohat achey tareekey se decorate kiya hua hai.
Mukti-thanks.
Avinash-Mukti ab mein chalta hun.
Mukti-No,Stay for dinner.
Avinash-I can't.You know Mom gets worried easily even though I am grownup man.
Kaajjal-Hey Abhi don't say that.She is your mother.
Avinash-But I am man now,and soon I will be married to you.
Prem-Your mom loves you that's why.My mom does it too.I don't mind.
Mukti-lier.
Prem-how?
Mukti-as far I know,tumay to hamesha chir aati thi when choti ma use to wait for you.
Prem-well yea old time,I was Yudi then.Now I am Prem.
Avinash-Bye everyone. He kisses kaajjal saying Love you and leaves.
Kids-OOOOHHHHHHHHHH.
Kaajjal-He is my fianc.
Mukti-It's nothing.So what if your buddy kissed Kaajjal aunty.
Prem-Yea so what. Prem kisses Mukti on her cheeks.
Kids-Dad,app ko sharam nahi aati.
Mukti-Prem.
Prem-No.There is wrong with it.
Kids-yea there is.You guys are not married.
Prem-But I love her and I can kiss her anytime I want.
Kaajjal-di mein abhi change kar ke aati hun.
Mukti-okay.Aman and Payal tum log bhi apnay kamray jaa ke chang kar lo.
Aman and Payal-OKay mom,see you later dad.
Mukti-Payal take Kashish with you.
Payal-Okay mamma.The two girls heads to their room.
Prem-Mukti mera kamra.
Mukti-tumhara kamra.Go straight and take a left.
Prem-Mukti why can't we share room?
Mukti-Prem tum khabi nahi sudro ge.
Leave comments Please!!!!!😊
Edited by bhattyhuda - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aww so cute!!!PLz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww pm r so cute 😳 i luv da new n changed prem hez so sweet 😳😆 continue soon 😉

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