kmph updated pg65....lovers apart! - Page 34

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Posted: 18 years ago
omg im soooo excited now! ohh how i love romantic pm scenes! they are the best! hope you can update soon hun, ill be waiting!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
plzzzzzzz continue soon its GREATTT
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Posted: 18 years ago

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how sweet!😳 thanks bisma! anyways guys thanks for the lovely actually extra lovely comments i will update tommorow for sure!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
yay...u'll update tomorrow!!! i've been going crazy waiting for an update! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi sania!!!!......finally finished reading watever i missed during my exams!!!!.......ur ff TRULY ROCKS!!!!!!!.....probably u shuld substitute ekta!!!!..... 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
😭 😭 no update over the weekend
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
At night
Mukti wears a white shirt a blue skirt and black leggings
Anju wears a white shirt and a long pink skirt
Bajaj house-
Prena- hi mukti anju
she hugs gauri
Mukti goes inside
Mukti- hey kasak
Kasak- hi why isn't he here yet?
Mukti- wait a sec I will find out
Mukti- hi prem
Prem- hey mukti
Mukti- where is dev u did invite him right?
Prem- yeah
Mukti- well then why isn't he here yet
Prem- he will be here in a minute I just got a call from him
Mukti- good now do exactly as I tell u 2
Outside
Dev comes
Mukti- hi dev
Dev- I didn't know they changed the watchmen
Mukti- excuse me do I look like a watchmen 2 u?
Dev- ya
Mukti- how rude
Dev- I was just joking
Mukti- I know now I want 2 talk to u
Dev- if it is about kasak then no I don't want 2 talk 2 u
Mukti- just 2 mins please
Dev- fine 2 mins
Mukti and dev r sitting on the trunk of the car
Mukti- dev sometimes it is hard to understand if u want 2 get married or not
Dev- well we both loved each other at least that is what I thought
Mukti- she does luv u more than her life but marriage is a very important part of ur life a very important decision and u need time to think about it
Dev- well she could have told me that she needs time but she said no
Mukti- dev no one is perfect and anyways if u just go up 2 her and propose her she is going to be confused and just say anything
Dev- ok I agree
Mukti- well now I want u 2 propose 2 her again
Dev- so she can say no again
Mukti- don't worry this time the answer is not going to be no
Dev- ok
Mukti- follow me I will show u where kasak is
She takes him to a room the lights r off there r candles everywhere
In the middle is kasak standing wearing a white dress which comes up to her knees
Mukti indicates dev 2 go up to her and then she goes outside and stands beside prem
Mukti whispers- did u do everything like I told u 2
Prem- don't worry I did everything
Mukti- thanks
Prem- no problem
Dev goes up to kasak and stands on his knees takes out a ring box from his pocket opens it and says
Dev- kasak will u marry me?
Kasak- yes
He puts the ring on her
The lights go on ad everyone claps
Dev and kasak r both surprised happy and shocked
Anju- congrats kasak
Kasak- thanks
Kasak- mama I am sorry
Prena- don't worry kasak I know this is the age when u fall in luv and dev is a very good guy so we approve him
Kasak- thanks mama
Kasak- dad
Rishab- don't worry beta I agree 2 this marriage
Kasak- thanks
Everyone congratulates kasak
Kasak- ok but where is the person because of who I am able to see this day
Mukti- right here
Mukti walks inside
Kasak- thanks
Mukti- no problem
Jai- I never knew my daughter took the job of cupid
Mukti- dad u r impossible
Gauri- I am very proud of u
Mukti- please I am so not interested in hearing lectures
Prem- u r only interested in eating
Mukti- u……….
She runs after him
Prem runs away from her
They go outside
Mukti- u r so scared of me that u r running away from me
Prem- of course I will be scared of a witch
Mukti- oh….what! How dare u call me a witch!
Prem- I just told u the truth
Mukti gets mad
Prem- come on mukti I was only joking
Prem- ok u can punish me if u want
Mukti- ok then do 100 uthak bhatak
Prem starts doing it
He holds his ears and goes up and down
Mukti laughs at him
Mukti- ok k that is enough
Prem- thank u
Prem- so mukti thanks
Mukti- for
Prem- for helping kasak out
Mukti- ok I would really luv it if u remembered 2 things
One is that she is my friend
Two that in friendship there is no thanks or sorry
Prem- ok sorry
Mukti- and that rule applies 2 u 2
Prem- so am I only your friend
Mukti- y...ea...h
Prem- really
He comes really close 2 her they both can feel each others breath
Mukti- really
Prem- u know u aren't a very good liar
Mukti- I a…m…..no…t….lie…ing
Prem- than why r u stammering
Mukti- be…because
Prem- because u r lieing
mukti runs away from there
she comes inside blushing a lot
anju- oh there she is mukti where were u
mukti- outside
Anju can see that mukti is blushing like crazy and knows the reason (prem)
everyone else can notice that 2 and then someone comes inside
sameer
everyone thinks mukti is blushing because of him

i hope u liked it!
when do u think the misunderstanding will be cleared?
when will everyone find out about mukti and prem?
keep waiting to find out!
i am so sorry for the delay the secound semester started and some of my classses changed so i was busy with that but i will try to cont more often know! 😛
please leave comments! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was really good
i was like smilin the whole time i was readin it then at the end im like wat just happen !!! so now i want u to update soonnnnn because i cant wait
good job 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great update 👏 Please continue soon! It is so good! I hope Mukti sets them straight about her and sameer

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