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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pm4eva

sorry i haven't read this for a while but I was gone for the week! for me school starts on monday 😃 😃

anyways great u[pdate

lucky u i didn't go anywhere outside the state this time!and lucky u again u got an extra week!thanks!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: baqwas

👏 👏 hi i am new to the forum and i just love ur fanfic. update soon 😉

welcome i hope u enjoy reading the other fan fics 2! and thanks!

Edited by prem-mukti#1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome.. 👏 👏
plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
really great update!cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: popgirl

plz continue soon!!!

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i will try to cont this week but if i can't then i will update after the 22cd i am really sorry!

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Posted: 18 years ago
She feels very uncomfortable so does prem he is thinking mukti was scared but I was in full sense why didn't I do anything what happened 2 me then he looks at mukti and mukti looks at prem they r 1 feet away from each other they feel something that is pulling them to each other both of them walk one inch closer look into each others eyes then another inch mukti is thinking she should stop another inch closer but she cant help it another inch closer prem is also feeling the same but doesn't walk back now they r one inch away from each other they can feel each others breath they r about to kiss when……when……..when the lift door opens they walk back to reality and leave mukti runs to her room she lays on the bed thinking
"Omg what was I about to do kuchh ho jata toh I would have never been able to face myself"
Prem is in his room thinking
"What the hell is happening to me why I am I feeling so attracted towards mukti whenever I see her I get lost in her beauty do I lo…v…."
Dev and kasak come back at night really late when they r in the elevator
Kasak- omg mukti is going to ask me a million questions dev u r 2 much u made me so late
Dev- well it is your fault 2
Kasak- whatever now lets not fight
Dev- agree
Kasak- k bye
Dev- bye
Kasak entered the room to her surprise mukti was not there she wondered where mukti was she went outside to find dev there
Kasak- dev what r u doing
Dev- I was wondering where prem is I mean he is not in the room
Kasak- mukti isn't either
Dev- maybe they went somewhere together
Kasak- I hope
Dev- relax till then go freshen up
Kasak- k
Outside an ice cream parlor u can see prem and mukti sitting in the car and eating ice cream
Mukti- yummy
Prem- I know I love ice cream
Mukti- same here
Prem- so what else do we have ion common
Mukti- I love to party
Prem- same here
Mukti- I luv adventure
Prem- same here
Mukti- I hate waking up early
Prem- same here
Mukti- I enjoy going out without informing anyone
Prem- same here
Mukti- I always get my dad in trouble
Prem- same here
Mukti- I hate prem
Prem- same here
Prem- u
Mukti started laughing
Prem- ok ok u got me now please stop laughing
Mukti stopped laughing
Mukti- ok sorry
She started laughing again
Prem- shut up
Mukti- Ok sorry
Prem- ok now lets go back before dev and kasak go crazy
Mukti- they should they left in the afternoon and it was 8 and they were still not back
Prem- u won't understand when u r in luv u want to be with that person 24/7
Mukti- wow u know a lot about luv
Prem- I do any problem
Mukti- no probs except I think your wife will be very lucky to have a loving husband
Prem- so will Ur husband because he has such a cute and naughty wife
Mukti- thank u (blushing)
They reach at the hotel
When mukti enters the room
Kasak- where were u?
Mukti- we were eating ice cream
Kasak- who we?
Mukti- me and prem
Kasak- oh u and prem
Mukti- stop it I was really mad I was bored u were suppose to be back in at most 2 hours
Kasak- ok sorry now mom called she told me that u have 2 stay at our house tomorrow night
Mukti- why?
Kasak- I don't know she said it was important
Mukti- k
The next day everyone left
Sunday night
Everyone entered the house
Mukti saw her mom and dad there
Mukti- mom dad she ran and hugged them
Mukti- how come u all r here
Kasak and prem touched both of their feet
They gave them blessings
Mukti- hello dad answer
Gauri- its time for u and prem 2 answer
Mukti- what?
Prena turned the TV on
News channel
Reporter- we have gotten prove that famous business man Mr. Rishab bajaj's son prem Bajaj and famous business man jai kapoor's daughter mukti kapoor r having an affair
Mukti and prem were shocked
Reporter- we have been sent some pictures that prove it
They showed the picture of prem and mukti outside in the garden at night when prem was wondering why mukti came downstairs then they showed a picture of them in the lift hugging each other and the other pic when they were one inch away from each other and the last pic was when both of them were eating ice cream
Mukti- this is not true
Prem- yes this is not true
Prena- how do we trust u both?
Prem- believe us mom
Gauri- how
Mukti- mom that is all a lie those pictures r true but u don't know the situation
Gauri- like
Prem- the first pic was when we were talking
Prena- at night
Prem- mom u know we both don't sleep early and we cant go anywhere because of it being a school field trip
Mukti- and the second on is when we were stuck in the elevator and the lights went off and their was a cockroach there
And they explained everything
Jai- ok k we believe u
Mukti- finally
Gauri- ok no we will leave see u tomorrow
Prena- bye
Monday morning
Mukti woke up and quickly got ready she wore blue jeans and a green tank with long green earrings her hair was half up and she had high heels on
Mukti went downstairs
Mukti- good morning
Everyone- good morning
Mukti- if everyone one came why didn't dadi and angad come?
Jai- because dadi got sick and angad is taking care of her
Mukti- oh ok anyways bye lets go anju
Gauri- but have breakfast
Mukti- not hungry anju and mukti leave anju is wearing a pink churidar with long earrings and her hair is straight
They reach college as soon as mukti and anju get out of the car everyone comes up 2 mukti 2 tell her they r glad the misunderstanding was cleared
Mukti thanked them all for showing so much concern and then went 2 first period anju only had 5th period with her which sucked but mukti was ok
Mukti went 2 1st period and sat beside prem and did not say a word
At lunch mukti went 2 kripa
Mukti- hi Kripa
Kripa- hi mukti
Mukti- come with me
Kripa- where
Mukti- follow me
Mukti took her 2 her table which included prem, mukti, kasak, dev, sneha, omi, and anju
Mukti- from now on u will sit with us
Kripa- k
Mukti- so anju how was ur 1st day
Anju- ok missed u
Mukti- same here
Anju- umm so did u talk 2 him
Mukti- nah
Anju- but u know that everything was false then
Mukti- well I don't want it to happen again
Anju- that's not the real reason
Kasak- hi mukti
Kasak- anjali
Anju- hey kasak anju and kasak hugged
Sneha and kasak also hugged
Prem- hey ka…. Anjali
Anju- omg prem u have changed so much!
prem- yeah I look better now
Anju- nah in looks u still look like a monkey
Prem- an…
Anjali- I was kidding
Prem- better be
Sneha- ok lets have lunch before time is over
Sneha sat across from kripa kasak sat across from mukti prem sat beside kasak and omi sat beside sneha dev sat beside anu and anju sat beside mukti
Mukti received a text message
Text message means tm and = means they r talking in tm
- means talking
"Means thinking
Prem= mukti meet me outside
Mukti- no
Prem= why what did I do
Mukti= nothing
Prem= then
Mukti= ok will meet u outside lets go
Mukti- umm I will be back
Prem- me 2
Outside
Prem- ok tell me why r u ignoring me?
Mukti- because I don't want anymore misunderstandings
Prem- but u know it was not true
Mukti- that's why I said misunderstandings
Prem- but I thought u were a girl who did not care about what people say
Mukti- I am not
Prem- then
Mukti- I don't know but for now leave me alone
Prem- fine
Prem left mukti felt suffocated
Mukti left college and went home
Mukti entered the house
Jai- u back so early
Mukti- yeah I wasn't feeling good
Gauri- everything fine?
Mukti- yes mom just going 2 rest 4 a while
Mukti went upstairs
Mukti was in her room thinking
"Why is this happening 2 me what do I feel towards prem, why do I always want be with him!, why do I always think about him even at night I cant sleep. And when I am with him why do I wish for the time 2 stop right there?
Mukti just goes 2 sleep she wakes up at 6 she sees kavya and anjali sitting there she tries to sit up but can't
Anju- keep sleeping
Mukti- what is wrong with me?
Anju- well u went 2 sleep but woke up again and fainted so we called the doctor he said u r very week and u haven't eaten for a couple of days and if this keeps on happening u will soon be in the hospital so mukti from now on I will always stay with u
Mukti- no don't worry I am fine
Kavya- no u r not the doctor also said u have a high fever and u have a lot of stress what stress now everything is cleared
Mukti- I don't know kavya
Kavya- k don't want 2 tell me fine with me anyways I am going 2 go get your medicines from the medical store
Kavya left closing the door
Anju- tell me mukti what is the problem
Mukti started crying
Mukti- I don't know anju
Anju- relax and gives mukti water
Mukti- thanks ok well lets change the topic how did u find out kavya was the one u luv?
Anju- well I couldn't sleep I always thought about him I always wanted 2 be around him it was like so weird I mean I didn't understand I was in luv until finally I figured out I was in luv and well that's how it happened
Mukti- so if u always think about one person then u r in luv
Anju- yeah if it is a guy and u always want 2 be with him yep
Mukti- nice anyways I will go 2 sleep so bye bye
Anju- bye I will come 2 check on u later
Mukti kept on thinking all night if she was in luv with prem or not but she couldn't figure out!
The next day in college
Mukti walked in college she was wearing a long skirt (pink) and a blue four inch sleeves blouse long earring light make up
She was early today so she saw prem and when she did their was a feeling inside her that made her feel so weird then when prem saw her the time froze the wind was blowing mukti's hair prem came near her he moved her hair and kissed her on the neck and then hugged her
Prem- I missed u
Mukti- same here
Then someone snapped at mukti
Mukti- huh what
Anju- where were u lost
Mukti- no where
Anju- k lets go
At lunch
Mukti- hi kasak who si that new guy in our class
Kasak- why u think he is hot!
Mukti- no!!!!!!! I was just wondering
Kasak- he is…..
Prem- sameer
Mukti looked up and saw prem
Prem- this is sameer my brother and sameer this is mukti kasak's friend
Mukti- hi
Sameer- hi
For the whole lunch time sameer kept on starring at her mukti felt really uncomfortable but someone else was also noticing this anjali
Home
Mukti's room
Anju- knock knock
Mukti- since when did u start knocking
Anju- when u started hiding facts from me
Mukti- what did I do
Anju- mukti u r behaving really weird lately I mean it have been here for 2-3 days and u r not the same mukti
Mukti- who said
Anju- no one I just feel this way
Mukti- well stop making stupid opinions like that and please stop bugging me I am not interested so bye!
Anju left
Anjali's room
Anju is crying
Kavya- whats wrong
Anju- nothing
Kavya- then why r u crying
Anju- because…I miss my parents
Kavya- they live right here
Anju- well they went on a yatra
Kavya- and that is why u r crying
Anju- the!
Kavya- ok so stop crying and listen u r not a very good liar so don't even try and if u feel I should know the truth then tell me other wise….
Kavya left
Mukti came in there
Mukti- hi
Anju- bye
Mukti- u r really mad aren't u
Anju- what do u think
Mukti- yes
Anju- there
Mukti- ok anju listen I am really sorry
Anju- mukti we have been friends for like always and u have never done this 2 me then why today
Mukti- anju I don't know what is wrong with me I feel like I am going to die
Anju- why
Mukti- because I need an answer to my ?
Anju- what ?
Mukti- I don't know if I am in luv or not
Anju- what…what?
Mukti- ok I keep on thinking about him I can never sleep its so weird I always want to be around him
Anju- one word "luv"
Mukti- but I am scared that what if he doesn't luv me?
Anju- how will u know without asking him
Mukti- I don't want to make a fool out of myself
Anju- well then u can do one thing
Mukti- what?
Anju whispered something in mukti's ears
Mukti- awesome! Who said u are a goody goody u r one naughty person
Anju- when it comes to guys then yes I am!
Mukti and anju laughed
Mukti- sorry
Anju- it's ok
Mukti and anju hugged
Mukti- ok now there is someone u have to say sorry 2
Anju- who?
Mukti- kavya
Anju- oh yeah
Anju said sorry to kavya and told him another lie but with confidence

i hope u liked it! 😛
now i will cont after the 22cnd becuas eof my exams
anyways sorry for the late update but i have been very busy!
please leave comments! 😳
pm4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great update! and don't worry hun.. take your time... I have exams coming up too!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome update sanya!!! dont worry about updating, good luck with your exams! i think mukti is gonna use sameer to make prem jealous to see if he like her! so is sameer prems real brother? and who is he being played by? anyways cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx so much for the long update ! it was really good
oh its k u do your exams first then update i have patience 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pm4eva

Great update! and don't worry hun.. take your time... I have exams coming up too!!!

then u totally know how i feel like i am damn scared! hopefully the 22cnd comes fast!

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