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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: bisma_4eva!

plzzzzzzzzzzz i'm gonna die if u don't cont it!!! and be4 dieing,i'll also kill u!!!lolz... plz plz continue soon!!!!

i am so so sovy i am a bit sick will cont asap!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Anju= ok so now how r u doing in India
Mukti= its ok I hate it kind of because no fun as far as I know
Anju= that sucks and life here sucks my parents want me to come to India to see a guy
Mukti= ok then come here we will be together and refuse the guy just say anything u don't like about him at least your parents will be happy u came and I won't be bored
Anju= yeah but if u remember my parents stay in a one room house where will I stay?
Mukti= the at my house
Anju= oh yeah I so totally forgot
Mukti= so what do u think
Anju= I want to think
Mukti= ok take your time
Anju= ok how much more time r u in detention?
Mukti- wow 10 mins left I wonder what prem is doing she turns to him and sees that he is not there he actually is flirting with miss Pooja and she likes it
Prem- hi Pooja u want to go out tonight
Pooja- sure prem where
Prem- lets have a candlelight dinner
Pooja- ok
Prem- well can u let me and mukti go
Pooja- sure
Prem- ok I will pick u up at 7
Pooja- ok bye
Prem indicates mukti to hurry up and come outside
When mukti and prem come outside mukti starts laughing her head off
Prem- what it was the only way to come outside I was trying my best u should say thank u
Mukti- yeah sorry but she laughs again she goes in her car prem does 2 and both of t hem leave mukti calls prem
Mukti- hi prem
Prem- what is it
Mukti- gosh I just wanted to say thank u
Prem- ok u r welcome
Mukti- and yes next time look at the clock before asking anyone out
Prem- (confused) why?
Mukti- because when u asked her out there was only 10 minutes left for our detention to be over
And she cuts the phone
Prem- wh...aa...t. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
At night prem goes to pick Pooja up he enjoys his date mukti comes to the same restaurant alone to eat she goes and sits at the table across prem
Waiter- man may I take your order
Mukti- yes I would like chicken 65 for the appetizer and for dinner I would like spicy grilled chicken and coke
Waiter- and desert
Mukti- I will order it later
Waiter- ok ur appetizer will be here in about half an hour
Mukti looks around and sees prem with Miss Pooja she feels good and thinks
"Well maybe prem is a nice guy from heart he did not want to hurt Miss Pooja's heart so he came on the date with her"
She finishes her food and goes home
Next day
Mukti wakes up she looks outside and sees that it is raining she quickly gets dressed she wears blue jeans and a gray whole neck sweater with flat clogs (a type of footwear)
She goes to school as soon as she enter like always everyone's eyes r on her she looks pretty no matter what she wears she goes to 1st period
Her group works on the project the whole class time
At lunch the spot that kasak and mukti meet everyday kasak finds a note for her
Kasak
Hey kasak I will meet u in the cafeteria so don't wait for me
See ya,
Mukti
Kasak goes in the lunch room and sits at the table
Mukti comes after 5 mins
Kasak- where were u?
Mukti- doing something just wait and watch
Kasak- what we…..
Principal- ok guys its time to announce the couples so pay attention this year Sonia and samay will pick a chit up and will decide who your partner is
Sonia- shurti
Samay- somil
Sonia- …………
Samay- …………..
Sonia- kasak
Samay- dev
Kasak is so happy she gives mukti a quick smile
Mukti- (whispers) told u
Kasak- (whispers) thanks
Mukti blinks at her with a smile
dev hugs tanisha and says sorry
After 5 mins
Sonia- mukti
Samay- prem
Mukti makes a sad face and prem hugs debo
Kasak- I'm so sorry
Mukti- no prob I don't mind I have to be with someone
Prem- sorry debo
Debo- its ok no prob
After 5th period mukti and kasak go to kasak's house
Mukti and kasak enter the house
Prena- hi mukti how was school
Mukti- fun choti mom
Kasak- u forgot me
Prena- no I wanted to talk to mukti not u
Kasak- uhh not fair
Prena- I was kidding how was your day
Kasak- good ok mom we r going to work on our project
Prena- yes and yeah mukti u r staying over this weekend right or did u change your mind?
Mukti- no I am
Prena- k
Mukti and kasak go to the study room
After 5 mins prem and dev come inside
Prem- hi sis hi mukti
Kasak mukti- hi
dev- so kasak all ready for the dance next Friday
Kasak- yep isn't it exciting we have partner that we know
Mukti- yep better to have a Bandar (prem) then a donkey for a partner (ronit)]
Prem- did u just call me a bandar?
Mukti- yep any prob
Prem- no probs except I am going to kill u
Mukti- in your dreams
dev- ok guys stop fighting I have a plan
Everyone- what?
dev- since its Friday lets party how about all of us go to the disc tonight
Mukti- luv 2
Prem- same here
Kasak- but
Mukti stepped on kasak's feet
Kasak- great
dev- ok so we will pick u up mukti
Mukti- how about I have to get my clothes from home and also my car so I am going to take kasak with me and we will meet u at the disc I am sure kasak knows the direction
Kasak- yeah
Mukti- ok then
They worked on their project then kasak and mukti left

i hope u liked it 👍🏼
please leave comments! 😛
and i am sorry but the promo thing is not suppose to happen till a few parts so i posted it early once again very sorry!
please leave comments! 😃

Edited by prem-mukti#1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
really good do continue soon
i like mukti comedy 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey that was a really good update! cant wait to see what happens between prem and mukti at the dance! oh and i had a question, kasak is going to the dance with shrawan, but in the begining didnt she like dev? anyways plzzzz update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Omg Sania... it was a gr888 update jaan!!... cant wait to see wht happnes in the dance.. btw i hav the same question as Robin_M... didnt kasak liked Dev?? so how come shes dancing with Shravan? umm newaizz.. plzz continue soon

ohh.. i 4got to ask u.. hows ur cold? i hope itz getting better!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
love it looooooooooove it...LOL...its fun to read when mukti and prem are in fighting moooooood...I love tht moments of em....hahahah 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
i am sorry actually i accidently typed shrawan rather than dev it got out of my mind sorry i just fixed it!
once again sorry! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: prem-mukti#1

i am sorry actually i accidently typed shrawan rather than dev it got out of my mind sorry i just fixed it!
once again sorry! 😛

Hehehe.. thnx for letting us know😊... btw, wen are u continuing??😛.. hehe i kno u r bzyy, i juz cant wait for the next part😳... newaiz cont. wenever u feel like it⭐️

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Pori

Hehehe.. thnx for letting us know😊... btw, wen are u continuing??😛.. hehe i kno u r bzyy, i juz cant wait for the next part😳... newaiz cont. wenever u feel like it⭐️

don't worry i will cont today and a long part!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
Kasak- what should I wear?
Mukti- what did u bring
Kasak- I bought 2 dresses to choose from which one should I wear?
Mukti- show me
Kasak showed mukti a red cut sleeves churidar suit and a black full sleeves churidar suit
Mukti- u r going to wear a churidar to the disco
Kasak- yeah so
Mukti- no
Kasak- then what should I wear
Mukti- umm choose from my closet
Kasak- where is it
Mukti- come I will show u
Mukti and kasak entered a room which was connected to another room with a door the whole room was like a walking closet which was very huge
Kasak- these r all your clothes
Mukti- nope I have more in the other room
Kasak- man u have a lot of clothes
Mukti- yeah right but anyways let me show u around
This room has all my skirts the room beside this has all my shirts to wear on clothes and beside it I have dresses and beside that room I have jeans and beside that room I have but wait u r not going to wear jeans to the disc
Kasak- then
Mukti- your choice skirt or dress
Kasak- skirt
Mukti- Okie dokie
Mukti- ok lets see what kind of skirt do u want to wear short, knee length or long
Kasak- long
Mukti- I only have one long skirt which is a ghagra type skirt
Kasak- ok knee length
Mukti- umm lets see she looks at different types of skirt before she decides on a black flow type skirt and a pink half sleeves shirt with long earrings and high heels she was wearing light make-up and her hair had light curls at the end
Mukti- omg kasak u look so beautiful I am sure dev will say I luv u 2 u the min he sees u
Kasak- shut up (shy)
Mukti- omg u r blushing
Kasak- ok no I am not now lets see I will pick a dress for u
Kasak picks out a black spaghetti stripe dress which is almost up to mukti's knees mukti is wearing long black earrings she has moose on and light pink make-up
Kasak- now look at u looking hot like always I am sure all the guys today without thinking once will propose u
Mukti- like I will say yes
Kasak- tell me mukti do u ever want to get married
Mukti- never thought about it
Kasak- ok if u do would it be luv or arrange
Mukti- maybe luv but I don't believe in luv I mean its just what u see in movies and read in books but in real life I don't know
Kasak- any specific reason
Mukti- no that's just what I think
Kasak- oh ok now pack your bags
Mukti- I was thinking that what I should wear
Kasak- anything
Mukti- I mean in school on Monday because I am staying at your house Sunday night 2 right?
Kasak- yeah so how long does it take u to decide
Mukti- about an hour
Kasak- god now hurry up
Mukti- ok ok
Mukti finally finishes packing and they leave for the disc
First mukti enters and as always all the boys stare at her she passes by a lot of people before reaching to prem and ever one says she is looking very stunning
dev- mukti u look stunning
Prem- yeah for the first time!
Mukti- look whose talking your girlfriend looks like a str*****and I am not so don't even expect for every girl to look like your gf because she looks like a str******
Prem- how dare u
Mukti- I don't care
Prem- u… his eyes fell on kasak who was just entering the disc
Shrawan- what happ…. His eyes fell on kasak mukti got confused and looked at where prem and Shrawan were starring she saw kasak
Mukti- "teer nishana pa laga"
Kasak walked over
Kasak- hi guys
Prem- mukti please pinch me I cant believe this is kasak just pinch me
Mukti- ok she pinched prem
Prem- owe ok this cannot be true dev…
He looked over and saw that dev was still staring at kasak
Prem snapped his fingers at dev
dev- hi woo what
Prem- ok this is not a dream this is kasak
dev- man kasak u look hot
Kasak- thank yo….
Prem- excuse me but don't even dare flirt with my sister
Mukti- now u know that who ever u flirt with or tease or insult could be someone's sister and if u hate that your sister is the girl who is being flattered though we luv it but still I hope u get what I…
Prem- yes I do now would u please stop acting like mother India
Mukti- whatever lets go kasak they go and sit in the bar
Kasak- what's wrong mukti I never knew u hated being flattered
Mukti- I don't know I just felt like saying that
Kasak- mukti u r 2 much
Mukti- hey that's my line
Kasak- now its mine
Mukti- whatever

i know it is boring but will try 2 make the part more interseting next time!
leave comments (good or bad) 😊
hope u liked it! 😕

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