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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
omg hope nothin bad happens 2 prem 😭 krish is becumin a little 2 obsessive 😡 continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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errr i hate this krrish guy! I hope prem is ok! keep it up!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Super!!!!!!!!!
That was GREAT! Plz go on soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...ma poor prem he cnt die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 9

Krrish leaves to Prem and Muktis hotel
When krrish leaves it goes to the cliff where Prems car had falen then we can see and person hanging on the cliff it cloeses up and we see its Prem.
Prem:HELP SOMEONE HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Then it goes to Mukti and Prems hotle where Mukti is feeling unusual when someone knocks on the door Mukti goes to open it when she sees Krrish she is about to close it when Krrish holds the door and goes inside.
krrish:hey Mukti,Mukti is walking backwards while Krrish is walking toward her.
Krrish:Dont u want to come with me now Mukti ,look i killed ur frined for u.
Mukti is shocked ukti:U killed Prem,My husband?
Krrish gets mad and grabs Mukti's hand and takes her to his house witch unfotunatly was in pune.
Then is goes back to Prem
Prem:HELLO SOMEONE HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Then is switches to Krrish and Mukti
Krrish:MAA come downstairs guesss whos with me.Krrish's Maa comes downstairs.
Maa;Mukti where were u we were looking for u for years.
Mukti:App kkyon
Maa; Im krrish's mom and ur my bahu.
Krrish's sister comes downstairs and says
Sis:Come one Bhabi we have to get u dressed.
Mukti:why?
Sis:Because you and bhaiya are getting remarried.
Mukti:But i never was married to him.
Mukti plzz let me goto my Prem Plzzz.
Krrish:NO!Sis go take Mukti upstairs and get her dressed.
Sis takes Mukti upstairs and gets her dressed in this.
This Clothes


This jewlery


This Mehndi


This churiyan for one hand


This churiyan for the other hand


She is sitting in her room when she hears Krrish talking on the phone.
Krrish:Hello...what Prem didnt die!...OMG where did he end up?...ok so he ended up here ...ok bye.Mukti hears this and she runs to her Prem but to do this she had to go out of the window.
Prem:in mind)before i die i want to atleast see my kids but i cant.)
Prem:HELP hel...p,he is about to let go when a hand comes out he sees the hand and it has mehndi and churiyan on
Prem:OMG i screamed so loud someone who was getting married heard me?
Once he got up he saw it was Mukti
Prem:Mukti why are u wearing wedding clothes?
Mukti looks back and see Krrish pulling up
Mukti:I will tell u later ok come with me.
Prem and Mukti runand hide oce Krrish came there and was looking for Prem.Prem sees this and is shocked.
Krrish:OMG HES GONE
Krrish calls the guy and says:YOU TOLD ME HE ENDED UP HERE SO WHERE IS HE NOW?!I KNEW I SHOULDNT HAVE KILLED HIM NOW!!!!!!
prem hears this and gets more shocked
Krrish:BUT I WANT MY MUKTI!!!!!!!!!PREM I WONT LEAVE U!!!!!!!!!!!
Prem:Mukti whats going on?
Mukti tells Prem the whole story.
Mukti:Mein daar gayi thi keh tum mujhe choor kar chali gai.
Prem:its ok Mukti I will never leave u
Prem and Mukti hug when they let go Mukti sees prems arm iand face is bleeding.
Mukti:OMG Prem
Prem looks down at his hand and sees the blood he remembers hitting his hand badly on the broken glass.
Prem:Voh jab meri car ghir gayi thi thaab...
Mukti:Aur tumhare face paar?
When Prem fell out of teh car he go hit htere.
Mukti:Urbleeding very badly.
Suddenly someone hits Prem on the head when Prem falls its some unusual person
Mukti goe down to Prem.
Mukti:Prem uto Prem
The guy grabs Mukti hand and is pulling herPrem slightly opens his eyes and see the guy taking Mukti Prem gets up and grabs this stick the guy had hit Prem with and started fighting with the guy
then later we see the guy get hit on the head and fall down we also see ALOT of blood.
Prem and Mukti go to their house.Mukkti tells Prem to lay on the bed as she will be right back
Prem:Ok.as he goes to lay on the bed while sayingouch ouch ouch.
Mukti comes with the first aid kit and some water with a wet towel.
She puts the dawai on Prems are and
Prem:OUC!
Mukti:Its ok nothings going to happen(lol)as she blows on his arm.
She does everything the hse goes to the washroom and gets out of the wedding clotes she comes out and goes to sleep with Prem.

Thats where im ending it today.

And i wanted to say that krrish will be a lil to obsessed then he wont he will start to like some one else in th Bajajfamily but i wont tell who.


Hope u guys give me good comments and plzz dont wite about Krrish being to obsessed.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg i'm lik totally speechless 👏 dat was an awesum update by da way krish seems 2 be gettin a lil obsessive day by day 😡 thank god mukti saved prem but how did she manage 2 pull him up 😆 i'm guessin krish mite end up fallin 4 sneha 😉 continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool update! i think krrish will fall for sneha!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 work!!! plz cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i think he'll end up lykin sneha...neway gr8 job cntinu sn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 10

The next Morning
Mukti comes and she is wearing this


Prem comes out wearing ripped up clothes and an awsome looking shirt that says "come and get me"
Prem:Mukti
Mukti:Haan?
Prem:Doctor Nehkaha hai keh humara ek bacha will be abnormal.
Mukti:What do u mean "ek"?
Prem:Oh i totally forgot to tell u ,u r having twins.
Mukti:REALLY?OMG!
Muktis eyes start to form tears.
Prem:Mukti kya hua?
Mukti:Joh tumneh kaha tha, Koh mere(Prem makes a face)I mean humara ek bacha abnormal hai.
Prem:its ok wejust have to take care of her more.
Mukti:What is this "her"?Prem:Soory wase bhi tum kal bahut hot dikrahi thi use shaadi keh kapre mein.
Mukti just smiles and look away.
Prem:Abh kya hua?
Mukti:Tum keh rahai ho keh "Kal" mein bahut hot dik rahi thi paar aj kya mein hot dikrahi hoon?
Prem:Ofcourse my darling u always will look hot.
Prem:Mukti aj raat ek party hai buisness seh jana hai?
Mukti:ok.Hum jate hai .
So nihgt came faast.Prem had gotten Mukti something to wear.
Mukti comes out.
Prem:Yeh kya?
Mukti:Kya?
Prem:Tum toh bahut fat lag rahi ho is mein.
Mukti gets upset and comes out wearing this

When she comes out Prem couldnt take his eyes off of her.
Prem:I didnt know my wife could look this hot...
Mukti and Prem laugh as they walk out the door.

I will finissh Part 10 On wednesday ok bye! 😊 😊 😛

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