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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for the update hun! (and the pictureS!) 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 4 updating!!!!!!!! cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Totally awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
Go on soon!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
read all of it.. great ff..

hate krishh.. well hate amitt since kyph but...

u said he is gonna like someone else from the bajjaj family..... its not sneha is it.........


contineu sooooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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rest of Part 10

3 months later.

In those 3 months Krrish had pretened to like Sneha to get close to Mukti but then he had realized that he loves Sneha.Krrish and Sneha had gotten married aswell.Prem and Mukti came back because they didnt like it in Pune.

Hospital

Mukti:Prem what are we going to name our to little munckins?
Prem:I had chossen sicne we first found out.Aditiya and Amit.
Mukti:WOW those are acually really nice names.Lets name the one that was born first Aditiya and the seconed Amit.
Prem:as u wish my sweet heart.
Mukti laughs.
They go home.Everyone surronds them.Prerna holds Amit and Sneha hold Aditiya.
Prem:Mukti lets go upstairs I have to talk to u.
Mukti:Ok. As they walk upstairs.

PM's bedroom.

Prem:Mukti u know what im thinking.
Mukti:What?
Prem:I think we should move out.
Mukti:WHAT!!!!!!?
Prem:Ya because we have 7 kids u never know we might have more.
Mukti:Well if u think that then we should defenetly go.
Prem:really?
Mutki:NO i think we should talk to Ma about this.
Prem:OK we will talk to Ma about this.

Later that day

Prem:Ma we have to talk to u.
Prerna:What?
Mukti:Come with us.
Prerna:Ok as she gives Aditiya to Sneha.

Some weird room.

Prerna:Kya hua?
Prem:We had decided that we would move out because...
Prerna:Have u gone out of ur mind.
Prem:No we havent.
Mukti:Prem is saying that we have 7 kid
Prem:Mukti, When did i ever say that!?
Mukti(lol):and we might have more so he wants us to live somewhere else.
Finally after alot of talking Prerna agrees with them.
Prerna:FINE u can live somewhere else.
Prem:Thanks you Ma.
Mukti:Toh Prem hum chalein?
Prem:kyun?
Mukti:packing
Prem:OH ya ok lets go.

Prem and Muktis room.

they pack 1 bag for Shurti,Haseeb,Alishba,Shabbir,Parth,Amit and Aditiya.
And obviously them selfes.
The next day they go and look for a house and luckly they find 1 that they really like.

Prem:Can we move in tomorrow?
Guy:Ofcourse.
Mukti:great.

Prem and Mukti are driving home.

Mukti:Prem!
Prem:Kya????
Mukti:isnt that Sir?
prem:OMG that is daddy cool.
Mukti:lets go to him.
Prem parks the car.They get out.
Prem is walking toward Mr.Bajaj.
Prem taps Mr.Bajaj's shoulder.
Mr.Bajaj:Aree agey tum Mr.Khana?
he turns around and see Prem
Prem:Daddy Cool?
Mr.Bajaj is about to walk away when
Prem:Daddy Cool One minute I have to talk to u.
Mr:bajaj:Mein tumshe baath nahi kerna chatah.
Prem:But u have to.
Mr:bajaj:lets go somewhere Privit and talk.
Prem:ok.Come on Mukti.
They go to some resturant.

Prem:Why arent u coming home?
Mr.B:Because...
prem:BECAUSE why?
Mr.B tells him some sort of story.
Prem:Fine then i guess u dont want to meet ur neices and nefews.
Mr.B:What do u mean?
Prem:Mukti and...
Mukti:Prem aur Mein neh shaadi karlie hai.
Mr.B:Kya?
Mukti:Haan.
Mr.B:Tumneh is Pagal seh shaadi kar le hai?
Mukti:yeh Pagal nahi hai sir.Hum dono ek duseray seh pyaar kerthe hain.
Mr.B:Kya?
Prem:haan hum dono ek duseray seh pyaar kerthe hain aour humare 7 bache hain.
Mr.b is shocked.
Prem:If u want to meet them then u will have to come home with us.Aur haan Ma Bhi appko bhi BAHAUT miss kerahi hain toh if u dont want her to be sad still then u should come home.
Mr.B:No, No i cant come.
Prem:Dad...
Mr.B is doubble shocked.
Prem:I dont want to see Ma like this i think u should come home.
Mr.B is quiet.
Prem:U gave me the answer, ur answer is no right, ok then bye Daddy cool.

Prem and Mukti are about to leave when
Mr.B:Ek minute.
Mukti smiles.
Prem:Kya?
Mr.B:Mein bhi ata hoon.As he walks up to them.
Prem hug him and they leave.

Prem:Ma Ma come downstairs.QUICK!!
Prerna comes downstairs:Kya hua Prem?Ghar milgeya?
prem:Haan aur hum kal hi jarahein hain.
Prerna gets upset:Paar Mein toh bahaut akeliy hoon agar Mr.bajaj hote toh...
Prem:Toh voh ayenge
Prerna;Kya mathlab?
Mr.Bajaj comes in.
Prerna is left shocked.
Prerna;Mr.Bajaj?
Mr.B:Haan Prerna...
Prerna goes and hug him.Prerna:App wapas agey?Mein bahaut akeliy thi.and they hug for a while with the piano music of Kasauti in the background.
PreM:Ello people are here.
Mukti Mr.B Prerna laugh.
Mr.B:Are Prem u said u will meet me to ur kids.
Mukti:are We totally forgot.as she wipes her tears away)
Prerna:ya hua Mukti?
Mukti:Oh nothing ijust saw u guys back together so that why.
Prerna hugs Mukti:chalo Mr.bajaj neh bache koh dekhna hain.
Prem:chalo.
They go upstairs in to the kids room.

Prem:Yeh hain.First 5 then 2.
Mr.Bajaj:How can that be?5?
Prem:OH MY GOD!!!I had to tell everyone a long time ago and now u dont even know what 5 at once are?
Prerna laugh
Prem:5 at once are Quadruplets.
Mr.B:OH i see.
Mukti:by the way, We are moving out tom.
Mr.Bajaj:Why?
Mukti is about to speech but
Prem:Nothing nohting no reason.
Mukti:YES there is a reason.
Mukti tells Mr.Bajaj everything about what Prem had said.
Mr.B:Oh i never knew Prem would ever say that.
They all laugh.
Mr.B:Wheres Sneha?
Prerna:Voh hunnymoon peh gayi hai.
Mr.B:What usne phir seh shaadi kerrihai?
Prerna:Haan.
Mukti:uska naam hai Krrish Khan.
Mr.Bajaj:Oh really, What else has happened while i was gone?
Everyone(who was there):Nothing!

Thats where im ending it today but i will shurly udate tomrrow.

Bye,
Kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Totally awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Great part!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it sooooooooooooooo MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO on Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 11

The next day Sneha and krrish come back from their honnymoon

Sneha:Hello Mama
Prerna;Sneha!
Sneha:Haan hum wapas agey.
Prerna:Mere paas ek surprise haimn tumare liya.
Sneha:really
Both Sneha and krrish are confused.
Prerna:Come with me.
Sneha and Krrish follow her and when they enter the room Sneha is shocked.
Sneha:Papa...
Mr.B turns around:Sneha!
Sneha runs to Mr.Bajaj and hugs him:papa ap wapas agey!
Mr.B:Haan Sneha.
Sneha lets go of Mr.B:Mama bahaut...
Mr.B:Haan Mujhe pata hein.
Sneha:Kya mathlab?
Mr.B:Prem aur Mukti neh mujhe bathaya tha.Unhi keh vaja seh mein wapas ageya.
Sneha:really?Prem:I never knew u would have such great words that would bring papa back.
Everyone laughs.
Sneha:Aur Mama Papa, mere paas bhi ek khushi ki khabar hain.
Prerna:Kya?
Sneha:Mein ma bane wali hoon.
Mr.B:OMG Sneha,Have i been gone tooo long?
Sneha:No...wait...ya 5 years and a couple months.
Prem:Hey Mukti i think we should go.
Mukti:ofcourse we should go come on.
So they leave.

Sneha and Krrish leave aswell.

Prem:Mukti lets get going we have to be there really soon.
Mukti:Ya i know.
So they take their suitcases downstairs
Prerna:Prem tu jaraha hai?
Prem:Haan Ma.
Prerna:Mukti tu neh haan kyun kaha?
Mukti:Kyun ki mujhe bhi yeh lagtha hai.
Mukti:Sorry Ma.Humhe jana hoga.
Prem:chalo Mukti.
Mukti:Ek minunte.Humhe ashhirwaad lena chahiya.
Prem:your right Mukti.
So Prem calls everyone down and prem and Mukti take their ashirwaad.
Then Prem and Mukti leave with the kids.
When Prem and Mukti enter the house they quickly put the kids to sleep and start changing settings and stuff.
Finally at night they finisshed and went to sleep and all night the kids bugged them by crying and wanting to drink stuff wanting milk.Then they fell asleep.Right when they had the chance to sleep they had to wake up.
Prem:Mukti I dont want to go to work.
Mukti:Prem let me sleep.
they both were talking about unknown thing cause they thought They were talking to eachother.
Finally at like 4 o'clock they woke up cause Prerna was calling them and calling them but had to leave messages saying come home come home!
Mukti went to the answering machine and listened to the voice messages
Prerna:COME HOME QUICKY WE HAVE SOMETHING HERE FOR YOU GUYS COME QUICK!!
Mukti:OMG we have to go quick!
Mukti runs upstairs:Prem Prem uto Prem Quick Uto!!!!
Prem:Kya hai Mukti mein neh sona hai.
Mukti:Ma neh humko vahan buliya hai.
Prem:WHAT?Mukti why didnt u wake me.Did u forget?Its our aniversery.
Mukti:how can i forget.Look she pointed to a table there Prem saw a very nice photo of Prem and Mukti on their wedding day.
Prem:How sweet.
Mukti:thank you ab chalo chalo chalo we have to go come on!
Prem:ok let me get dressed.
Mukti:Ok but quick we have to get the babys dressed too.

Ok this is where im ending it today but i will post tom

Bye,
Kiran


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Posted: 18 years ago
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i wonder why prerna called them so urgently!? anyway plz continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
OH my god wat heppens?????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey noone likes my fanfic? 😭 😭

This is for the next next time i update.Oh ya and twin talethape(im kinda doing the samething as my sis)

Promo!!!:

We see Mukti cooking something on very high.
Prem:MUKTI!!!!!
Mukti:KYA HUA?!!!!
Prem:COME HERE!!!!
Mukti:Mukti:KYA HUA PREM?As she is leaving toward him she hit her hand in to the pot.
Mukti:OUCH!
She doesnt notice that the pot tipped over and she leaves when she leaves the oil that had hit the bottem thing started making a fire.
Prem:Mukti lets go out.
Mukti:Why?(by the way they are downstairs)
Prem:Because we havent for a long time.
Mukti:Ok let me go change and i hurt my hand so be right back.
Prem:ok but hurry up.
Mukti quickly goes up to her room.
She goes to the bathroom.She cleans up her chote.While there was a fire in the kitchen it is slowly going from the kitchen all around the house.
Now she is starting to get dressed.
Prem:OMG!!!Kids go out side quick as he sees the fire.Now the fire is going upstairs.Prem is out side now.
Prem:Wheres ur mom?
Shurti:I think shes inside.
Prem:OMG keep an eye on them aswell ok i will be right back!
Mukti on the other hand is getting her jewlery on.
Prem:MUKTI MUKTI MUKTI!!!!(from outside)
Mukti steps out of her room and when she see the fire she quickly closes the door she gets scared.
Mukti:PREM PREM PREM!!!!!
Its been 15 mins now.
Mukti:PREEM PReee...She faints.
Prem runs upstairs and runs to every room and finally when he looks at their room he see...
Prem:MUKTI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thats where im ending this promo!

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