^^%%#CreatE PreM AnD MuktI SceneS#%%^^

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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY!How is everyone doing this fine October day?

Well,I got this idea from the KSBKBT forum and I thought it would work really well here at the KZK forum😃!!So,all you have to do is create your idea of a perfect Prem and Mukti scene,okay?Seeing as Mukti is already gone😭,now it's your turn to decide Prem and Mikti's fate;will they be together at last?,etc.

REMEMBER: that you can make the scenes funny,romantic,sad,wierd,etc.

AND ALWAYS REMEMBER TO HAVE FUN!!!GOOD LUCK TO ALL WHO PARTICIPATE!!!!!!

P.S.-IF YOU NEED ANY IDEAS JUST GO ON OVER TO KSBKBT FORUM

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Posted: 18 years ago
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do we pm you for the thing?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice game...how do we make scene like a vidio or a fanfic 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^You guys all you have to do is write down your ideas of the "PERFECT" Prem and Mukti scene,ok?You can make different scenes or continue with your previous scenes.

If you have any questions just PM me 😉But,if you understand the game then what r u waiting for,START CREATING YOUR "PERFECT" SCENE!!!!!!!




Edited by Asha004 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hay,greatt idea,i loved it and alwaayyz read and wrote storiess in the Kyunki sec.

More people should participate.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks Sangeeta for helping me out....
Heres what i think would be the perfect Prem and Mukti Scean...it may not be the best...but im trying my best......

I've started from when mukti left Bajaj house forever......(before the leap)....

Mukti was sitting in the car...she remembered all the moments she spent with prem...the good...the bad....all the aspirations and dreams she had carried in her mind....gone.

the rain was pounding on the car like there was no tommorow...it was getting dark, the driver knew where to go...but she clarified just in case....

Mukti: Umm uncle you do know where were going right?.....
Driver: yess beta you said Panchmashwer right...?
Mukti: yes...

Panchmashwer...were everything happened....the place were the beging of her lifes revolution started.....

MEANWHILE:

Prem was in his room...a bear can tightly gipped in his hand....he couldnt help himself...he went down to mukti's house....jeevan wasnt there.....
Prem walked into mukti's room...it was neat and tidy as usual....he knew he had no right..but for some strange reason he thought he should look and see what was in her room....he went to the night table...he saw sneha and muktis photo....he smiled. He sat down on her chair..he felt her essance , her smell, her spirit....he opend the first drawer and saw a book.... ontop of it written DIARY ......

He knew he shouldnt but he couldnt help himself he opend the page.....it was dated 'Febuary 10th'

Dear Diary,
I feel somthing strange....i read in a book that to express your feelings you should write them down....what i want to express i cant say...thats why i'm writing this...
Is it wrong to fall in love...? to fall in love with some one who is soo wrong?....someone that annoys the hell out of you? .....someone....whos flaws even seem to become perfect....someone like...like...prem?
To be honest with you im not his type of girl....and he's not my type of guy....but theres somthing there somthing that makes my heart get restless when i get near him....i wasnt like this before...whats happening to me....whats happening......?

Mukti


A tear dripped onto the page...he turned the page...on every page was engraved his name..one every page she spoke of her dream..... her love.....but after febuary 16th she spoke of how her dreams were broken...shattered..useless....just dreams.....he made it to the center of the diary.....a photograph laide there.....not just any photograph the photo of prem and mukti at sneha and sharads one month party...he saw it had been ripped apart into two...but then tapped back together.....he read the entry..it was her last....

Dear Diary,
Today im leaving...i dont know weather im being strong or giving up......im going away....i've faced alot of hurdles in my life...faced them all head on...but this one i cant and wont face....i can see anything, but see the preson i love with all my heart, marry someone else.....that i cant do.....im going to the place were my dreams started with him...panchmashwer.....if he ever loved me...he might remember all the memories we shared......that same place...the same hotle....after looking back...thats only when i'll be able to move on.....

mukti


MEANWHILE:
Mutki realised that her diary was left in her desk drawer...she decided to call jeevan...he wouldnt let it get into the wrong hands.....

The phone rang.....tring...tring...

someone picked it up....

Mukti: hello!!! baba?!

prem was on the other line...his heart stopped at the sound of her voice...he just lisned....

Mukti: baba i dont have time to talk...just hurry and go into my room...and take a diary out of my desk...can you please bring it hear with you?...dont let anyone see it okeay.....

prem cut the phone...took the diary and drove to panchmashwer...he realised his mistakes...his crimes..his sins...his love...mukti.....

mukti was sitting in the exact same bench that she and prem had sat on valentines day...it was raining hard as ever... she didnt care...she couldnt tell her tears apart from the rain.....she had been sitting there for an hour......she felt someone touch her shoulder...she turned around....she blinked three or four times just to make sure.....she still couldnt beleive it...it was prem.....

He looked into her eyes...he saw it...he saw the fear..the love...the regreat...the tears....

prem: mukti....
mukti: prem what are you doing here....
prem: I...
mukti: dont tell me you want me to coordinate somthing else for your show...i told you im leaving...your happy now right? leave me alone.....

prem didnt say a word...he took out the diary underneath his hoodi...he was trying to prevent it from getting wet...it didnt work though....

mukti looked what he had in his hands..she was shocked..she pulled it out....

mukti: did you go in my room? what were you doing there.....
prem pulled out the photo of him and mukti....
prem: i want this to be us again....

Mukti looked at the photo of her and prem..so happy....who knew how fast things would change.....

Mukti: prem why do you care...if i live or die.....you'll never change....you never have....

They were both standing up by this point.....mukti looked into prems intoxincating eyes...now she knew why she tried to avoid them...all those other times she had looked there was some other look in his eyes..now that she looked...they looked different.....caring....honest...loveable....

Prem held her hand and got down on one knee....mukti's mind was telling her stop and leave...but her heart gave in and didnt let her move....

prem: i know i've said this before.....and i have asked before...mukti will you marry me?...last time you said no....i know why.....but this time you will say yes.....

mukti was silent....

prem got up his face was milimeters away from hers....she could feel his heart..it was just as fast has hers...she could smell him.....she could feel his breath hard and warm....she thought he was going to kiss her...her heart grew even faster....he missed her sweet lips and went for her ear....

prem softly wispered: i love mukti...i've always loved you...

Mukti was lost for words...she couldnt even imagine how many times she had imagined the moment she thought he would say 'i love you'....how long she had wanted it to happen....all she could do to express her answer..was to reach for his restless lips....and give them the touch that they had so restlessly wanted.....mukti....

The rain went on...the tow lovers stayed there keeping that infaninant moment suspended in time...were the two hearts met..the two souls met..and the two lips kissed......

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Alright i hope it was allright....i know it was long...but i hope it was okeay, nowlets see what you guys come with 😊

thanks

Love Reeha 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is a great idea.. i dont know if i am good at writing.. but i might try writing one eventually.. for now ur PM scene was great reeha.. i love ur ff and ur scenes.. good job!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooo good job reeha! do write more 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 idea!!...will defi. come wid something soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 idea..will come up with something soon

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