my first ff (Eijaz-mukti -prem) - Page 2

thats awesome!
i hope u keep eijaz and tina 2getha!
i dun think prem deserves her!
lol
awesome parts!

its good atleast prem is feeling jealous well i dont mind ejaj he will suit tina 😉

ANUBHAV COMES TO PICK MUKTI UP.SHE IS WEARING A WHITE OUTFIT SIMILAR TO WHAT SHE WORE ON VALENTINES DAY.SHE LOOKS REALLY BEAUTIFUL.

Mukti:Hi anubhav.

Anubhav:Hi mukti.Tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho .

Mukti:Thanks!Lets go!

ANUBHAV OPENS THE CAR DOOR FOR MUKTI.

Mukti:Thanks!

THEY ARE GOING IN THE CAR AND ANUBHAV CANT STOP LOOKING AT MUKTI COZ SHE IS REALLY LOOKING BEAUTIFUL.

Mukti:Mujhe yeh parties aachi nahi lagti.

Anubhav:Tumhe parties aachi nahi lagti ki tumhe prem ke saamne aana acha nahi lagta.

Mukti:Tum thik samajh rahe ho!Mujhe prem ke saamne aana bilkul aacha nahi lagta.Uske saamne aane se mujhe mere bite hue kal ki kadvi yaadein yaad aja ti hai.

ANUBHAV COULD SEE TEARS IN MUKTI'S EYES.

Anubhav:Tum party main isiliye nahi jaana chahti kyunki vaha prem hain,haina?

Mukti:hmmmmmmm,lekin ab main apne kal se ladna sikh gayi hu.Ab prem mere liye koi mayne nahi rakhhta.

IN THE BACKGROUND KABHI NA SUKOON AAYA IS PLAYED AND MUKTI REMEMBERS ALL THE TIME SHE HAD SPENT WITH PREM.

THEY REACH THE PARTY.AND THEY GO INSIDE.

THE FIRST THING MUKTI SEES WHEN SHE ENTERS THE HALL IS PREM.PREM SEES HER TOO.THEY LOOOK AT EACH OTHER FOR FEW MINUTES.

Anubhav:Chalo mukti,hume papers sign karne hain.

Mukti:ha chalo.

THEY SIGN THE PAPERS AND EVERY 1 STARTS CLAPPING.

Anubhav:Lets dance mukti.

Mukti:Ya sure.

PREM SEES THEM AND CANT STOP FEELING JEALOUS.

Debonita:Tum insecure kyun ho rahe ho prem?

Prem:Main insecure nahi ho raha hu.(he literally yells at her!)

Debonita:Tum mujh par kyun chila rahe ho?

Prem:Kyunki tumhe doosro ke kaam main dakhal dene ki aadat hai.You better mind your own bussiness.

DEBONITA IS IN TEARS AND PREM ORDERS A DRINK FOR HIM.

gud yaar 👏 👏
prem yelled at debo 😆

hey dis rely gud!! please cont soon!!!

hey!!! its gr8 do continue soon

i cant wait..hurry up,,i m so impatient

its gr8!
cant wait for the next part!
plz cont soon!
awesome part!

PREM DRINKS A LOT AND HE LEAVES COZ HE CANT SEE MUKTI WITH ANUBHAV.

PARTY FINISHES AND ANUBHAV DROPS MUKTI TO HER PLACE.

Anubhav:Mukti tumhara ghar aa gaya.

Mukti:Oh!Thanks Anubhav.

Anubhav:Mukti,tum bura na mano to main tumse kuch puchu.

Mukti:Ya sure,pucho.

Anubhav:Mukti,tum mujhe bahut aachi lagti ho.I really like u.Tumhare saath kaise waqt beet jata hai pata hi nahi chalta.I think I love u.Will u marry me?

MUKTI GETS A GREAT SHOCK.SHE IS STANDING THERE AND IS SPEECHLESS.

TO BE CONTINUED.

oh weldone yar!!! its great!!!
so anubhav proposed her...isnt it a bit early??
neways i lik it!!! plz plz cont soon!!!