my first ff (Eijaz-mukti -prem) - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
come on give us another update don't keep us in suspense 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
HEY GUYZZ..CAN SUM1 MAKE A LOVE/OTHER SCENE BETWEEN PREM AND MUKTI???OH..AND THE SCENE WUZZ VERYY GUD..kEEP UP TE GUD WORK 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
plz continue soon....... 😳
i cant wait 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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MUKTI RETURNS TO HER SENSES AND THEN....

Mukti:Anubhav,Ab mere zindagi jo bhi faisla hoga woh meri choti maa karengi kyunki maine apne zindagi main bahut galat faisle kar liye hain lekin ab aur nahi.

ANUBHAV COULD SEE TEARS IN HER EYES.

Anubhav:Thik hain mukti,main kal prerna aunty se baat karunga,good night.

Mukti:Good night.

EVERY ONE IS HAVING BREAKFAST IN THE BASU HOUSE AND ANUBHAV APPROACHES PRERNA....

Anubhav:Prerna aunty main aapse kuch baat karna chahta hu.

Prerna:Bolo beta,kya baat hain?

Anubhav:Prerna aunty,main mukti se shaadi karna chahta hu.

EVERY ONE IS SHOCKED.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
PRERNA IS ALSO SHOCKED AND THEN........

Prerna:Anubhav beta,kya tum mukti se pyarr karte ho ya phir tum uspar daya khakar usse shaadi kar rahe ho?

Anubhav:Prerna aunty,main mukti se pyaar karta hu,main uspar daya khakar shaadi nahi kar raha hu.Mujhe pura yakeen hai ki mujhe mukti se achhi ladki mil nahi sakti.
Isiliye mujhe aaka aasirwad chahiye.

PRERNA TAKES ANUBHAV TO DEVI MAA'S TEMPLE AND THEN......

Prerna:Anubhav beta,tum mujhse vaada karo ki mukti ko hamesha khush rakhoge.Tum kisi bhi haalat me mukti ka saath nahi chodage.

Anubhav:Prerna aunty,main apse vaada karta hu ki main mukti ka saath kabhi nahi chodunga.Main hamesha mukti ko khush rakhunga.

Prerna:Agar tum jo bhi bol rahe ho woh sach hain to hame yeh rishta manzoor hain.Bas ek baar main mukti se poochlo....

EVERYONE IS LOOKING HAPPY AND PRERNA LEAVES TO TALK TO MUKTI.




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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
wow...awesome plz continueeeeeee 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
aww but wat about the whole pm thing...well continues soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
its is really good... can you pls continue

I am actually imaginging Eijaz in this whole fanfic..as I have met him personally in real life and he is really nice
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
PRERNA GOES TO MUKTI'S HOSTEL AND THEN......

Prerna:Mukti beta....

Mukti:Arrey!choti maa aap.......aaiye andar aaiye....

Prerna:Beta,main tumse kuch zaroori baat karne aayi hu.

Mukti:Kahiye naa choti maa....

Prerna:Beta Anubhv tumse shaadi karna chahta hai.

MUKTI IS BIT SAD.

Mukti:Pata hai,usne mujhe pucha tha lekin yeh faisla maine aap pe chod diya hai.

Prerna:Mujhe lagta hai beta tumhe anubhav se achaa pati nahi mil sakta.

Mukti:ha choti maa,anubhav bahut achaa insan hain aur mujhe pura yakeen hai ki woh mujhe khush rakhega.

Prerna:mujhe tumse yahi umid thi beta.Main aaj bahut khush hu.

PRERNA IS VERY HAPPY AND GOES BACK TO BASU HOUSE.MUKTI IS UPSET.SHE REMEMBERS THE DAYS SHE SPENT WITH PREM AND!KABHI NAA SUKOON AAYA"IS PLAYED IN THE BACKGROUND.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
i think u should continu its great 😃

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