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thanks a bunch for updating..and it was cool
I am sure Prem will start feeling that Aman is his son due to his likes/dislikes & habits are same as that of Prem..
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thnx everyone for the lovely comments. enjoy this part.
recap= aman, prem, and mukti leave for shimla.

now

its been few hours. mukti opens her eyes and looks around.

she looks at prem's side and sees prem shivering with cold she smiles seing prem sleep like a little baby.
she take sher blanket and puts it on top of him.

mukti to herself- prem mein abhi bhi nahi bhuli tumhari adatay tumhe kiss chez ki kab zarurat hai, tum kya kerte ho khate ho mein kuch nahi bhuli in paanch saalon mein aman ne mujhe kabhi tumhe bhul ne nahi diya..while she thinks a drop of tear falls on prems cheeks..he feels the warm tear adn wakes up..mukti moves away quickly..

prem- asu?..

mukti- huh wo i am sorry mein wo panni pe rahi thi to achanak..she moves her face away.
prem goes closer to mukti and lifts her face

prem- tumhe jhut bolna bilkul bhi nahi atta.

mukti looks up
ill be abck mujhe bathroom jana hai.
prem holds her hand.

prem- thanks for the blanket.
mukti- its ok.
prem- tumhe aaj bhi yaad hai?
mukti- kya?
prem- yahi meri addatay. ke mujhe do blankets ki hamesha zarurat hoti hai. mein tab tak so nahi sakta.

mukti smiles..
mukti- kabhi kabhi kuch cheezay bhula nahi jata. hamesha yaad rahte hai

saying this she leaves...

mukti comes back to see prem again back to sleep she looks at the toher side to see aman awake looking around him.

mukti- kya hua beta?

aman- mamma mri dusri blanket kaha hai.

mukti looks back at prem to see his eyes closed.

mukti calls a hostress

hostress- yes ma'm.

mukti-dekhiye can i have an extra blanket wo aman ki adat hai ek aur blanket ke saath sone ki..usse hamesha thand lagti hai..

hostress- sure ma'm ill bring one right away.
mukti- beta dont worry wo lakay ayegi..aman puts his head on mukti's lap..

mukti's eyes suddenly fall on prem
prem is stunned..and he starst rememebring the first time he met aman and how he felt a connection with him he remebers prerna saying.."na jane kyun isse dekh kar lagta hai ke hai koi apna hai",,,all this while kabhi na sukkon backgroun fast music plays..

prem gets up quickly and leaving mukti confused..the rest of the time prem remained quite while mukti wondered how suddenly prem is all quite and is not even saying a word to her. finally they reach shimla

a driver arrives and they all 3 leave for thr hotel.
prem- prem sharma i had booked 2 rooms earlier
manager- yes sir. here are your keys room no-114, and 117

prem- thanks.

prem- mukti tum aman ko lekar apne kamre emin jao.
prem starts to leave when mukti stops him

mukti- prem.
prem- kya hua

mukti- tum nahi chaloge?

prem- mujhe ekkaam hai.

prem runs from there and enters the bar he sits there and starts to drink.

he start to remeber what happened in the flight.

prem- aman?..kya?..nahi nahi assa kaise ho sakta hai?..meri sirf ek beti hai aur wo astha. par aman ki adat meri jaise?..kuch garbar zarur hai mujhe mukti se baat kerni hogi as he says this he drinks even more.

its late at night aman is asleep mukti is looking out the window looking at the stars..on the other side prem come sout of the bar completely drunk..

he knocks on mukti's door..
mukti- who is this?..
no answer..mukti approaches the door and opens it.

mukti shocked- prem? tum? inti raat ko?..

prem takes a look to see aman sleeping. he takes mukti's ahnd and drags her to his room leaving mukti confused.

mukti- prem tum mujhe kaha le ajarahy ho?..

mukti- prem damn it naswer me where are you taking me?..

prem remains quite..while pulling mukti hard..he goes inside his room and pushes mukti to the bed.

mutki falls.

mukti- ye kya ker rahay ho tum? tumne bohot peeli hai prem just take rest, tum..

prem stops her..

prem- kuch maat kaho. ab sirf mere sawalon ka jawab do..

mukti moves his hand which was touching her lips.

mukti- prem your totally drunk you dont know what your doing we will talk 2morow morning.
she starts to elave when prem pulls her towards him.

mukti gets scared..while prem comes closer to her.

mukti- tumhe ho kya geya hai? have you gone mad prem?..
dekjho prem please mujhe janay do aman kamre emin akela hoga please tryn understand..she again treis to leave..whn prem holds her hand tight..

mukti- ouch..prem mujhe dard ho raha hai..meri chooriyan..

her bangles start to brake as she bleeds.

mukti is shock looks at prem..

mukti- prem..

prem- mere sawal ka jawab do..

mukti- konse sawal ka?..

prem hesistates while saying..

prem- kya..kakya amm..an mera i mean kya vo mera..beta hai?..

mukti is stunned.
mukti pushes prem;s hand away.

mukti in tears
mukti- kya? ye kaise sawal hai prem. aman mera aur naveen ka beta hai.

prem goes closer to her.
prem- jhut maat bolo mujhse aaj aaj tumne flight par us airhostress se kya kaha tha? bolo..

mukti moves ot the toher side..and searches for words..

prem pul,ls her and makes her face him.

prem- jawab do?..ha ya na sach kehna mukti kya aman mera aur tumahra beta hai?..

mukti- nahi vo vo..

prem- say it damn it say it.

mukti- nahi nahi nahi..she pleades..

please prem mujhe akela chor do mujhe assay sawal maat pucho please.

she opens the door and runs out of the room..crying..prem follows her.

prem- mukti listen emri baat sunno..

prem- mukti damn it listen.

mukti- kya kya sunnu mein.

prem's eyes suddenly fall on her bloody wrist.
he grabs her hand and looks at her.

mukti- ouch

prem- come with me..

mukti-prem..

prem- mukti come with me.

he call the servive and asks for medicine.

prem- haat?

mukti remains quite.

prem- tumahra haat mukti..

mukti just keeps crying.

he grabs it..
and starts applying medicine on her hand.

prem- i am sorry. ager tum keh rahi ho to shayad sach he hoga. mana mera beta nahi hai to nahi hai par mukti ager aman sach mein mera beta ahi aur tum mujhse jaan buj ker jhut bol rahi ho to yaad rekha tum ek baap ko uske betay se jooda karogi. mein tumhe iss baat keliey kabhi maaf nahi karunga mukti kabhi nahi..tumhe koi hak nahi banta mujhse mere baap ho naika haq chinno..aur ager aman mera beta nahi hai to kya hua ek din to mera he hoga. mein iss terha tumhe naveen ka hone nahi dunga.

mukti is shocked,.

prem- done ab tum ja sakti ho

mukti is still sitting in the bed..thinking.

prem - you can leave.

mukti gets up and her tears fall both think about each other while kabhi na sukoon is being played.

mukti..suddenly runs to prem and hugs him.

prem-mukti..

mukti- mujhe maaf kerdo prem mujhe maaf kerdo..mein janti hu ke maine tumse sach chupaya par iss mien meri bohot bari majboori bhi hai.

prem moves mukti away.

prem- kya matlab

mukti- v0 aman tumahra tumahra aur mera beta hai.

prem is stunned.

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