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Posted: 19 years ago
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GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz continue!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey just caught up and it was awesome!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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sorry frnds for delaying...was busy wid sum work.... enjoy todays post...will be updating soon enough...


:::< PART 7 >:::

Vivek : Arrey…Uncle chod na…dard ho raha hai.

Dr.Sen (releases his hands) : Kaha da tum ? Kitne der se intazar kar raha da…

Vivek(complete naughtiness on his face) :Hehe..woh….mein yeh signal mein ruk gaya da…tub mene samne ek kulfi shop dekha…mene bahut koshish kiya lekin mere temptations..it was too much…isliye..

Bajaj, Prerna and Dr.Sen has a heartly laugh. Vivek too returns a cute smile and joins the laughter. Meanwhile Prem enters the room with Anurag.

Prem (surprised) : Kya ho raha hai…sab pagal ho gaya kya (he whispers to dad Basu)

Anurag : Chup raho Prem

Prerna notices the arrival of Prem and Anurag and attends them. Every one stops laughing and gives a look.

Prerna : Anurag tum…

Anurag : Ha Prerna…Prem ne abhi abhi hi mughe Mukti ke bare mein kaha. Isne kaha ki Mukti ki situation bahut critical hai. Lekin ab tum logon ki kushiyan dekke yeh lagtha hai ki uski halath teek huyi hai.

Prerna (suddenly realizing about Mukti ) : Nahin…Anurag…uski halath hamari soch se bhi critical ho chuki hai..

Prerna and Bajaj takes chances to explain everything they came to know and introduces him and Prem to Vivek. Anurag shakes hands with Vivek and gives a very warm smile. Vivek brings out his hand before Prem who with resistive mentality brings out his hand but avoids to look into his eyes.

Prem : Motherr Indiaa kya apko lagtha hai ki iss Mr.Sweeto (looking him from up to bottom) , Basanti ko teek kar payega ? Abb jab ghar mein hi "the right guy" hai to phir… ek dusre ladke ki kya zaroorath hai..?

Prerna : Kyun Nahi…mughe ispe pura barosa hai ( smiling at Pulkit)…. Aur who is that "right guy"…kya woh tum nahin ho na…?

Prem (unable to answer) : Main….main…now now..i was just joking…. Main mukti ko teek …no no..never..

Mr.Bajaj : To tum kis tarah se Mukti ka treatment karoge Vivek betta ?

Vivek : Uncle first and foremost mughe apke ghar mein apni staying shift karna hoga. Uske badh mughe is case ke bare mein padna hai. I will have to interact with Mukti before I decide anything..

Anurag : Lekin Mukti teek hoga na Vivek….

Vivek : Basu Uncle don't worry at all. Mukti is in safe hands..mein usse pehle ki tarah hi hoshiyaar banavungi.

Anurag : Laghtha hai ki bagwan ne tughe yeh problem solve karne ke liye begha hai…Prerna mein Mukti ko dekke athi hoon…

Prerna : Kya mein bhi awo ?

Anurag : Nahin uski zarrorath nahin hai…mein hudh javungi…

Anurag makes an exit.

Dr.Sen : And Mr.Bajaj, apko day after tomorrow hi Mukti ko ghar ley ja sakta hai. Tho Vivek y don't u shift to Mr.Bajaj's house before Mukti arrives. Tum kal hi jao…is that ok Mr.Bajaj…

Prem : What? Kya tum hamare sath…hamere ghar mein rehne jaa rehe ho…u mean kya tum Bajaj house ek mental hospital banana jaa rehe ho?

Prerna : Prem…mind ur words...Vivek iske bathon mein math aana yeh essa phalthu bathein kehthe rehthe hai. Tum kal hi aa jao betta.

Vivek ( to Prem) : Hah Prem bhai mein apke ghar aaa raha hoon. Agar apko bhi kuch treatment chahiye tho…mere pass illag hai…

Prem : Hai..hai..don't call be bhai or Prem call me U.D. sirf mere apne mughe Prem kehkke pukarthe hai…

Vivek (giving again one of his cutest smile) : Mughe bhi apna samcho na bhai….

Prem wanted to argue more but controlled catching hold of Prerna's and Anurag's stares and makes a polite exit from the room…


#### END OF PART 7 ####

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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
awesome, i seriously wanna kno wat happens next. plz update soon yaar 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
init i wan to no wot happens next aswell
soo plx count
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
aaaawwww 😳 WOW dat was BRILL 👏 👏 👏 please CONT soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
awesome grest job please cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
as everyone said, it was fantastic!! now plz do cont. soon, as the rest of us r dying to read more!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yah plz cont. i'm diein 2 find out wat happens next n i luved dat part where Prem says : What? Kya tum hamare sath…hamere ghar mein rehne jaa rehe ho…u mean kya tum Bajaj house ek mental hospital banana jaa rehe ho? 😆 n then when vivek says : Hah Prem bhai mein apke ghar aaa raha hoon. Agar apko bhi kuch treatment chahiye tho…mere pass illag hai… 😆 n then when prem answers him back : Hai..hai..don't call be bhai or Prem call me U.D. sirf mere apne mughe Prem kehkke pukarthe hai… so now does dat mean dat prem thinks of mukti as his apne b/c she call him prem
u hav 2 cont i can't wait any longer plz 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
interesting.i think ur r planing for a love triangle and i would like prem to be jealous for mukti 😉

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