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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

awww that was a really nice fan fic! i enjoyed reading it! 😊

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28176

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

awww that was a really nice fan fic! i enjoyed reading it! 😊

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Shweta

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

Wow I loved the story and the way it ended! Love that Mukti was projected to be so strong!

By the way, wonderful use of metaphors:
"On the roof, Mukti had felt Sharad let go, which made it easier for Prem to pull her up into his arms. Prem embraced Mukti tightly."

Prem: It's over."

Mukti let her past and its burden on her soul to finally leave her, and thus true love could embrace her and she could find peace.

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Shweta

@broken heart

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: (((((
itana likhane ke liye time kaise milata hai ?
kya aapako isake paise milate hai ? or aapako
aur koi kaam nahi hai. muze itana sab padhane ke liye time n ahi hai sorry 😳

Aur aapko itni badi kahani padne ke liye time kaise milta hai? Kya aapko isko padne ke liye paise milte hai? 😉 😆 😆 😆