Prem n mukti (new fanfic) updated!page 11 - Page 7

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i cant wait plzzzzz post another one!!!

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Originally posted by: smarie pants

dola! 😆 😆 😆 have patience! i'll update tomorrow morning! 😃

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this fanfic is one of the best.. can wait for the next part

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count soon 😛

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alright sweetz! herz the next part!!

recap- mukti n prem have a lil tiff in the room n mukti closes her room window so that prem cant see her. prem smiles. 😊

story-
The next day, tushar cums with an invitation saying that the advertizing executives of BTN, in panchmeshwar, are throwing a grand party tonight. Evryone decides to go to the party. But, our hero is a walking contradiction! 😆
prem- I am not going to that boring party! all u talk there is abt business!
bajaj- but prem, after me, u will have to look after m business! so u have to familiarise urself with those people.
prem refuses but finally, bajaj convinces him.

SCENE 2- AT THE PARTY.
evryone entres the party. its a very grand and hi-fi page 3 party. Prem spots a beautiful gal. he luks at mukti and points to that gal! mukti luks at that gal and luks confused. prem goes to that gal and starts flirting wid that gal. Mukti is disgusted.
Mukti is having dinner at the party with sneha and kasak. prerna joins them.
prerna- where is prem?
mukti- i dunt know.
but mukti starts luking for prem. she finds him with that gal. Mukti goes red with jealousy.
mukti- urm...i am full.
n she keeps the plate on the table and leaves to go to prem.
Mukti- Prem, choti maa is calling u.
prem- aah! (hes disturbed)..tell her I'll cum later.
prem- choti maa wants u right there. (she points to prerna)
prem (with his "oh gosh" look)- fine!
he luks at the pretty gal
Prem- I'll be back sweety.
mukti- PREM GO NOW!!!
prem- OK! OK! FINE Ms basanti!!
prem leaves.

mukti talking to the pretty gal.
Mukti- hmm...i feel so proud of u.
gal- me?
mukti- yes. u r with prem. in his difficult days
gal- wht?
mukti- u dunt know abt him??. Hes got terrible MPD(she makes up sum stupid disease)
gal- he has wht?
mukti- MPD. Multiple personality disorder.
gal- whts that?
mukti- Its a disease where a person suffers malfunction of the brain which results in split personality. so, now, he might be prem...but maybe after sum time, he'll be sumone else! n its a serious physcological condition!! (mukti goes on n on and makes up a stupid disease)
gal dosent understand anything but she luks scared n shocked.
gal- thanx for telling me.
mukti- anytime! 😆

prem tries to go back to the gal but she ignores him throughout the party and gives him sorry, sad luks. prem is confused. mukti is in splits. 😆prem luking at the gal whoz ignoring him.
prem- whts wrong with her?
mukti- nothings wrong with her. therz sumthing wrong with u!
prem- wht?
mukti- yup! u have MPD.
prem- i dunt have any MPD! by the way wht the hell is that?
mukti- u wont even understand. its a long story. anywayz, in short...assume that the gal isnt for u.
prem- n who r u to say that?
mukti- ur CID basanti!
n mukti walks away.
prem luks at her with a mix of confusion n delight.

hmm...why delight? thats the dumb suspense! 😆 therz a sweet surprise lined up for u in the future. 😊

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neelu.

wahhhhhhhh kya fanic hai yaar too good continue soon

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Love the FanFic 👏 👏 👏 👍🏼 Plz continue soon.

aawww dats really really sweet !
i totally luv it
itz a typical prem n mukti scene !
aww cute ! 😳