How do I stop loving you? NP2 FF. LAST NOTE PG29!! - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sadizzle

yess!!🥳

there not going to give their twins away?!!?
👍🏼 thats great news!
I hated when they did that in the drama..how can some1 just give their kids away..
plus the twins have saksham's blood running through them! 😍

Yah.😊.I did not really like that part when they planned on giving one of the twins away..i mean that was really sweet of them😳..but 😕😲...i don't want that in my ff...hehe...i am glad to see ur happy😆😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

The next morning the bright rays of sunshine hit Nihaal's face. He stretched out his arms on the sofa..opened his eyes and looked at the beautiful figure that stood before his eyes. Yes,it was none other than his gorgeous wife P2 Garewal. She was wearing a turquoise net saree which disclosed he body in a sexy yet elegant way. He could see her fair,creamy skin through the net. He noticed that she looked extra innocent and beautiful with wet hair. She had those little droplets of water on her graceful face and she was running her delicate fingers through her. She took a hair brush and started brushing her hair. He observed he the whole time she brushed her hair. P2 was not aware that he was admiring her secretly.After brushing her hair. She ran her finger through them and this time she saw her secret admirer,admiring her beauty secretly but sweetly. He was thinking how fresh,pure she was looking. Her rose fragrance was driving him crazy. When both their eyes met, he turned away. P2 immediately looked down all shy. Nihaal woke up and took a shower. He came out of the shower in a bath robe and was drying his hair with a towel..when he looked at the bed. As usual she had fulfilled her duty...she laid out his clothes perfectly on the bed. Then his eyes drifted towards the mirror. He saw her standing there with a frown on her face,trying very hard to hook her magalsutra...but that darn thing today was just not cooperating with her! No matter how hard she tried..she just could not hook it! Nihaal looked at her and smiled to himself. Smiling he advanced his steps towards her. This action of his was making P2 a little nervous. She stood there, holding the mangalstura and observed him moving closer towards her back. He stood there and asked in his deep and husky voice "Main laga doo?" All of a sudden P2 felt her heart racing. She did not know what to say. She had to get the mangalsutra hooked and go downstairs. So she simply nodded her head, giving him the permission.

Hulchul hui' zara shor hua'
(with some frenzy, followed by some noise')
dil chor hua' teri orr hua'
('the heart became a thief of your , and it came to you)
Hulchul hui' zara shor hua'
dil chor hua' teri orr hua'

Aise chale jaabh hawa
Ishq Hua hi Hua
Aise Chale Jabh Hawa
Ishq huar hi hua..
Nihaal raised his warm moist hands. He was burning up with passion. He touched her wet hair and gently moved all of them to a side...making room on her neck to see the mangalsutra. He touched her neck and she was ice cold. His touch was making her melt. He held the mangalsutra and was trying very heard to not to focus on her. He was trying not to focus on her beautiful face. He was trying not to focus at her fresh,rose smell.What he did noitce was her small tremble. He looked up and saw that she was looking down on the floor. When she looked up, he was busy hooking the mangalsutra. After 5 minutes of trying..the darn thing was jsut not hooking. He needed to widen/loosen the hook..so he tried to with his finger but that was not working. So he attempted by bringing his lips closer to her neck. This act of his was making her heart beats faster than ever. With his teeeth he loosened the hook. She felt his warm breaths thingling the back of her neck. She clutched her saree tightly, trying not to look up and meet his intense gaze. She thought she would pass out any minute under his desperate passion. Atlast Nihaal hooked the mangalsutra. P2 breathed a small breath of relief...she was glad that the akward moment was over. She quickly thanked him and escaped. She left a smiling Nihaal.
He quickly changed into his office clothes. His heart did not want to leave P2 and the twins but this meeting today was extremely important... his dad said he had to go. P2 had assured him that everything would be okay and she said work came first. Thats all he needed...her assurance...he needed nothing else besides that...He got ready. He went downstairs in the dinning hall where every1 was. He went up to the crib where the twins were awake.again a smile appeared on their little faces when they saw their "Dad". Nihaal played with them for a while. Then he sat down for breakfast. P2 came and started serving him...he noticed how she was not making any eye contact. He noticed that there was a strand of hair which she was not removing because she was too busy serving him breakfast. He raised his hand and she immediately backed away. Nihaal just concentrated on his breakfast and left for work.
At the office, he could not concentrate on work at all. No matter how hard he tired, he jsut could not focous! Guess who he was thinking of? Yes! P2! He was thinking of last night when she said "For everything..." He thought... was he starting to mean somethig to her... Was she starting to mean something to him. He threw the file in frustration. He opened the drawer and took out a picture of her in a frame. He looked at the picture closely and ran his fingers oevr the photo of her... and he thought of this morning with her... the way her already rosy cheeks turned red when he asked her about the mangalsutra. He tohught of the way she was nervous and trembling. He could not help but smile. He knew he had to control himself. He could not loose himself completely to her...AGAIN...yes! again...
One year ago..when he came into her life first before saksham did...The minute he had seen her...He had completely lost his heart to her....
~Note~ My FF background is a different than the serial's! You will find out the rest of the story in the next update!😳This update is dedicated to a very special person and her awesome support! Noha🤗!! thanks so much! i know this was a short update.. i will update with a longer one soon!😃
Edited by hil4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey all my wonderful readers!😛 Hopefully u guys like my FF so far! Thanks for reading and commenting! Pleaseee keep ur comments coming...they really put a smile on my face and encourage me to keep writing!!! Do feel free to critcize also....😃Hopefully u guys like Part 2.. Part3 will be longer and up soon..!!! With a new tiwst and shock in story!! Get ready!! PLZZZ comment on the parts! till then Happy Reading to all!😊😛 Special thanks to Noha for all her lovely support!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
ohh my god kimberly it was soooo adorable😳 u know i miss kasauti even more😛
ohhh hun u really should enter ekta creative team😳
cant wait to seeee more..keep it up👏and im blushed i cant beleive u dedicated to me soo sweet😳
ur wesome🤗
Edited by noha450 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

Nihaal sat in his office cabin. He was holding P2's picture and looking at it. He rembred what happened to him one year ago. The first time he saw P2. She came for a job interview in his company. Before marrying P2..Nihaal was completely different. He was a complete jerk...according to P2 atleast. Nihaal was a complete workaholic...he was bossy,rude,Proffesional,agressive. This was all on his outside.Inside he was avery soft person. He was very emotional and his heart melted at everything...but he covered this side of his by showing all his negative sides. The first time she walked into his cabin..she had took his hear away. Not once b4 had he looked at a girl. When he saw P2 he had completely lost it. After the interview he was completely impressed by her... she had an awesome personality. His heart immediately started to soften for her but P2 used to make many mistakes which he absolutely could not stand. If it were someone else...he probably would have fired them. His temper flared up many times. Him and P2 used to have many arguments.P2 started to hate him and absolutely could not stand him but Nihaal used to love to bother her,tease her....P2 was very irritated. She was about to quit when Saksham came into her life. He had joined the office. Immeidately they had both fallen for each other. They were both very much in love. During the time Saksham and P2 were falling in love...Nihaal was out of town for other business deals. While he was out,that is when he really understood that him..the bossy rude jerk had actually fallen in love with someone! People called Nihaal heartless ... but his heart had started beating for P2..He was feeling this weird attraction towards her, b4 he knew it he was in love. When he was away from her during all the business meetings..he realized how much he missed her....he understood that she was the one he wanted to spend his life with. So Co-incidentally the day he arrived back to Mumbai his office...was valentines day! He decied that today was the day he would confess his love...He would tell her! So He walked into his office with blue orchids in his hand (not red roses...he knew orchids were her fav) a diamont heart shaped chain..and her favorite choclates. he was standing outside her cabin door..about to knock....when his heart broke forever... Through the cabin he saw Saksham and P2 embraced in a tight hug..and then kissing each other. In shock he dropped everything on the floor and walked out. he walked in to his cabin and destroyed his whole cabin in anger and frustration. For the first time he cried. A tear fell out of his eye. At that moment he swore...never to fall in love again...NEVER! He had never felt this lonely and hurt. That same night he was at their family farm house.he got drunk there...Then with a bottle in his hand he walked out of the farm house...He walked around..then he came backto the farm house...and saw...through a window Saksham and P2 making love. Diguested,Hurt and Angry he walked away from the farm house. He broke the bottle...and held the broken pieces in his hand...he let all the blood flow..he thought maybe his love would flow away too... Nihaal had loved P2 with all his heart....his love knew no bounds...he had loved her unconditionally...only difference was he had not shown it like other guys did. He always had a problem with conveying his feelings............. After that things moved by fast...his brother and the girl he loved like crazy were getting married....he killed his feelings for her and showed her hatred...No matter how hard he tired to cover his love with hate...he jsut could not...there was jsut wayyy tooooo much love in his heart for her...... When Saksham dies...his parents said he had to accept P2 as his wife and her baby. He obedientlty accepted their decision.At that time he did not know what was going on in his heart and mind. P2 was jsut so frustrated with everything at that time...that she took everything out on Nihaal...Their relationship was extremely rough but soon they became friends and supported adn understood each other...P2 who had hated this man...actually saw that he was likeable. She understood that he hid his caring,sweet nature with his rude and bossy proffesionalism. She was amazed at how good of a person he was. .... During all this time Nihaal started to feel something for her....that feeling he had killled and buried was starting to come back...........
Nihaal came back from the flashback. He knew that now the feeling was taking control of him again. He was going weak again for her. He was falling in love with her all over again...All over again....? When had he stopped loving her....He just showed it in a friendly way.....He held the phot frame and looked at her picture. A tear welled up in his eye. He softly whispered to himself "I love you so much...Tum nahin jaanti tum mere liya kya ho...."
That evening he returned home and was about to enter his room. When he heard cries and sobs...they were familiar...they were none other than P2's. He stood there and there she was shriveled up in a corner. Crying to herself..there was something in her hands...It was saksham's picture..She was talking to it....She was saying "Kyon chale gaye tum mujhe chod kar...kyon chale gaye tum mujhe ek aise rishtey mein bhandh kar....ek aise eensan ke saath main ek aisa rishta nibh rahi hoon.....aajh mujhe tumhareee saabh se zyada zaroorat hai..i am so lonely...i need you...aaj jaab maine hamarey beton ko dekha....toh mujhe un me tum nazar aaye...sirf tum... kaisey main nihaal ko wohjaga dey doon apni zindagi main....chahe woh een baachon ko aapna naam de...leken main use kaise accept kar loon..kaisey??" She sobbed...Nihaal felt like someone had jsut reached into his heart and ripped into a million pieces. he could not take it any longer. he walked away from the room and went to the home office. It hurted him to know, that she did not consider him as anything...he was NOTHING in his life...A tear again rolled down his cheek..... Here in the room P2 still talking to Saksham's picture saying "Nihaal ek bohat acha eensan hai...bohat acha....usne mera eetna saath diya....he deserves someone much better...he deserves to be with someone who truly loves him with all her heart....I don't think I can be that girl...." Nihaal heartbroken walked into his room and he saw P2 standing against the crib...She saw Nihaal and turned to him and said "Arrey..tum kaabh aaye..." Nihaal with hurt and pain in his voice softly said "Baas..aabbhi..."P2 said "Main tumhare lie coffe lekar aati hoon..." Everyday when Nihaal came back from work, she made coffe for him...He always loved her coffe...He neevr said no....and today he said "No...Thanks..." P2 amazed that he was saying no to her coffe for the first time asked "Nihaal...tum thik ho na..." Nihaal turned his face away from her...Nihaal simply said "Haan....woh....uh...maine..office main pee lei thi coffe..." P2 sensed that something was wrong"Okay" she said softly. P2 said "Nihaal...tum fresh hokar taayar ho jao..pandit ji aane wale hain..baachon ki naam rakhayi ke liye..." He nodded and went to go freshen up.
The naming ceremoney happened. The kids were named. They were named Aman and Siddharth.
That night Nihaal did not have dinner. He spent most of his time in the home office..working... He was working on the lapotop..when a knock came on the door and he said "Come In..." P2 walked in with a plate of food. Nihaal said "Tumm...?" P2 softly said "Sorry agar main tumhe disturb kar rahi hoon..leken tumne office se aakar kuch nahin khaya...aur phir tum dinner ke piye bhi nahin aaye...es liye maine socha ki..." Nihaal was still hurt and a little anger...He wasn't angry at P2...He was angry at fate....He jsut said "Mujhe bhookh nahin hai..." P2 sweetly said "Please Nihaal...thoda kha lo...agar tum busy ho toh maine khila deti hoon..." He turned around and saw her smiling and pleading face. While he worked at the laptop, she fed him with a spoon.. Before leaving she said "Kaal jaaldi aa jaana office se...kaal mummy ji ne baachon ki khusi mein party rakhi hain..." "Thik hain." he said simply.....
The next day Nihaal left early for the office. He forgot his file. P2 saw his file. All the servants were busy in the party preparations...so she decided to go on her own...She reached his office... It was raining outside..she had forgot her umbrella...Then the car had broken down only a few blocks away from Nihaal's office...so she called for a taxi..but to her luck none came...so she walked...she was completely soaking with water... P2 walked up to the receptionist desk...drenched in water. Nihaal was walking with his clients when he saw P2 completely wet...He walked up to her and said "P2..tum yahan..woh bhi aisi haalat mein..." P2 said "Woh..main tumharie file dene aayi thi..tumhe eeski zaroora hai na.." Nihaal said "Haan hai..leken tum paagal ho gayi ho..eetne barish mein tum akeli!P2 mujhe ek baar phone to kar liya hota..."She just stood there quiety..not uttering a word...Then the clients inerrupted them and she left...
That night P2 was in her room...putting the kids to bed..when Nihaal walked into the room..all soaked up in water. He started to take steps towards her...making her suddenly nervous......😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow another update hehehe 😃cant wait to seet down and start reading it😍
Edited by noha450 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Woah!!!
Lucky me, I got to read two parts together.
I am so excited now!!! =)

I really like Nihaal's characterization, I think you've given him more depth and the back story was nice and sad. Lovely job as always!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: noha450

ohh my god kimberly it was soooo adorable😳 u know i miss kasauti even more😛
ohhh hun u really should enter ekta creative team😳
cant wait to seeee more..keep it up👏and im blushed i cant beleive u dedicated to me soo sweet😳
ur wesome🤗

Hey Noha! 😃I am so glad u liked it! Hehe😆...me join ekta team??.😆..*blushing* hopefully u like the next updates as well😛.... thanks for ur sweet compliments and support!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: noha450

wow another update hehehe 😃cant wait to seet down and start reading it😍

Haha....Yah another udate..I was too curious too write it and reveal the twist...I hope u like this update😃😃Do comment and critcize this part! I lvoe all ur comments!!😉😉
Edited by hil4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lilroses_89

Woah!!!
Lucky me, I got to read two parts together.
I am so excited now!!! =)

I really like Nihaal's characterization, I think you've given him more depth and the back story was nice and sad. Lovely job as always!

Wow!Yay! 😛You get to read 2 parts together! I am glad u like Nihal's character.😊..I really wanetd to give some background and intense depth to the story.😳..i am happy that u liked the back story...thanks for reading and commenting!😛

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