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shweta

@shweta76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#651

Dear Abhilasha

Thanks for the update .....had been waiting for it the whole of last week ...😃this story has really got me hooked ..so real! 👏👏👏when i read the first few updates it reminded me of a dear friend but as the story progressed I realized it isnt the story of a woman its the story of an extremely insecure man who couldnt get over his past ..a sad man still not over his parents passing away .....he is basically a grieving man ...😕and one of the manifestations of this most overpowering emotion is angst ......he had to direct it somewhere poor Bani was the most apropriate pick ...😡so told his mother also ..she knew the kind of emotional dependece she had on Jai and the walias on the whole😭 So like a perfect gentleman he proposes marries and then vents out all his angst on her in the name of some silly revenge onn her mother !😡😡😡

God only knows what Kiran did to the walias that Jai decides to deidicate all his life to her service ....🤢

Has he ever been in love with the girl he is so blinded in hatred 😕

plllllllllllllllllllllssssssssssss make Bani give him back all she got from him....make her break his heart in million pieces 😡

BTW walias must have shifted to the Udaipur Palace how else can He not find her if he really wanted to .......what a heart this man has months and he dosnt even know if she really gets proper meals and a comfartable bed to sleep she literally sleeps under the open skies and on empty stomachs........😡

though youve tried to redeem jai this time I stil feel he is a heartless animal I hate him .......🤢

Looking forward to the nxt part hope it ll be up soon😃

Love

Shweta

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lovelyyrose

@lovelyyrose

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#652

superb part abhi
congo shongo deccan chargers won na

and waiting for present part
bye

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janam

@janam

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#653

Excellent work abhilasha. Can't wait for the next part.

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#654

Ok so now the pieces are coming together.. little by litttle we are seeing why Bani detached herself. Her faith in her relationships has deteriorated.. and JW being so distant isnt helping.. Jigyasa really has a mouth on her, but the way Bani handled it is sad, but understandable...

I cant wait for a present day part, although the flashbacks are def. helping to see what brought them to this point. I also cant wait to see how their relationship is fixed and Bani is brought back to her normal old self, and her relationships are mended.. I see where she got her sketching as her outlet..

Cant wait.. please do update soon

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janam

@janam

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#655

Hi where are you? Please update soon.

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#656

Waitng for the update. Just to see to what extent Jai will go to vent his anger Which he has for Bani's mother on her.

Reaaly I had to wonder while reading does he love her or even have any feelings for her. So waiting to read.

Bye

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#657

Hi all, thank you for the wonderful comments. I really appreciate it It helps to shape the further parts. So please free to pen down ur thoughts and opinion about the characters.

As for the update, since I am writing the present part, I have already started it. I need to go back and come again. I hope u understand. I have split the window, one for reference and the other for editing 😕 so will post in the weekend. I promise with lots of twists and turns.... 😉

Edited by abhilashasharma - 16 years ago

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lovelyyrose

@lovelyyrose

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#658

hope the twistes and turns are good
otherwise forget ur neck and head abhi
thsi is threatning from our side
hahahahhahah

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jhankarbeats87

@jhankarbeats87

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#659

i want bani to be strong enough to stand up for herself & not depend on jai emotionally or financially. jai needs to learn to value her.

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shweta

@shweta76

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma
Hi all, thank you for the wonderful comments. I really appreciate it It helps to shape the further parts. So please free to pen down ur thoughts and opinion about the characters.

As for the update, since I am writing the present part, I have already started it. I need to go back and come again. I hope u understand. I have split the window, one for reference and the other for editing 😕 so will post in the weekend. I promise with lots of twists and turns.... 😉

Waiting for the weekend even more 😃..and pls add some twists to that animals arm and some turns to his neck 😡I never thougt could hate JW 😕 can you pls change the name ....means how can i hate him

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