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Zaara91

@Zaara91

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#291

hey abhi i have started readding your FF....but i havent finished yet i am baby stting my little or 5 days old neice and reading yoyr ff...so when i finish i will comment...till then tata

shew read it..yaar i love it...specially how jb are freind from young age...i really likes bani's attitued when she was young...loved the bit when she pushes jai out of the jhula😆poor guy...bani falls.for him since she is young ....ohhh how sweet...liked how jb ride the bike...and again bani calling him on his name...

i hate jigs first she was fine and now she hates bani not fare....bani seems very confuse to me probably she ia scared of lossing jai...but dont worry babes you want lose him...jb are to be parents soon...haila mubarak hu😳😳😆....aap or bhi mubarak hu bcuz abhi dadi ju baniwale hai😆😆😆jb ki bachi ki...lol...

today's part was superb...bani cares fo jai...loved how she is being bossy to jai...yeh kiya use sharm athi hai...ek bachi ki baad bhi😆😆😳...mai JW ko shirtless umar bhar dikni ki laye tayaar hu😍bus woh muji miljaye ek baar😳😳😳....

sonam

Edited by SonamKHAN - 16 years ago

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 16 years ago

#292

Abhi, I am finally ketchup!! And I loved it. Yaar you sure know how to make people cry! I almost did😭 For JB. Bani' s insecurities were tearing her apart every moment of her life and I am so glad she finally decided to try and make her life pleasant for her self. Sometimes I get Jai, sometimes I dont. HIs decision to distance himself from Bani after their marriage was maybe understandable but the way he kind of neglected her and didnt even bother to speak a decent word to her is unforgivable, even if she reminded him of the death of his parents. He promised to take care of her.

I am so happy for JB and the credit goes to you entirely for this.
Your writing is mindbobbeling!THe story is phantastic and the emotions real and understandable!!

Sorry for being this late!!!!😳

Byebye
Ranjana

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HalleNJ

@HalleNJ

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#293

very cute scenes......now this is the Jai & Bani I was searching for a long time 😉 please contonue.....

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MrsKhan-Sobti

@MrsKhan-Sobti

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#294

sweet update

nice to see bani getting embarrassed to see jai without a shirt

n lioved dat bani is opening up wid jai

waiting for nex part

do comtinue soon

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Pooja_fren

@Pooja_fren

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#295

Hi abhu,

Hadnt commented since ages but read each and every update

He he sori but u know sometimes u become lazy

I loved each and every part

I am very happy abt the changes in Bani

But one thing i dont understand that she has already made love with Jai but why she still get stiff with his touch

and Feel Very bad for Jai whenever he remembers that how he behaved with Bani and knows nothing abt her absolutely nothing

waiting as usual eagerly for ur nxt part

Lov u

Pooja

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#296

hey abhi

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

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suwas

@suwas

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#297

bani is slowly changing, being more assertive, taking care of Jai rather than being aloof from him.

Just don't understand her hesitation for physical relationship. Why does she get stiff when he mentions his love for her. I thought she had realised that she should reciprocate his affection /love. and she is wrong in staying away from him.

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#298

I love how Bani is slowly comng around of her shell! Slowly his love is bringing he rout! Lovely part! Tha was really sweet! My apologies for not commenting earlier. will do so regularly from now! This ff was given to me upon recommendation, and Ive been simply blown away by your writing and story line.

Fantastic part.. cant wait for the next!