FF-Kyun ki-Its Fate..PT13Pg21/LASTPG22(8-25)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kyun ki-Its Fate'

Okay'well I know I have current FF's on this forum'but was feeling very bored so decided to write a new FF'Please do read'

Enjoy'

Har insane ke do chehreh hote hain'ek jo voh duniya ko dehkana chatha hai'aur dusra jo voh hai'Voh chehra jo voh appne app se bhi nahi chupapatha'

Bani-One ticket to Mumbai please'

Main Bani hoon, Bani dixit'kuch log yeh manthe hain ki naam main koi dam nahi hai, liken I personally beg to differ'Naam main pechan hoti hai'Main job se silsle main Mumbai jarahehoon'

Okay fine'tum se kuch bhi nahi chupaoongi'Main pichle 6 months se kise se email se baath karahi hoon'

Liken main usske bare main kuch nahi janthi'Sirf ithna hi'ki voh Mumbai main rehtha hai'

Aur dusra uska email ID

PyarseJW@hotmail.com

Maine yeh baath kisi ko bhi nahi bathaiyeh'Ki shayad mujhe use pyarr hogaya hai'

Maine yeh baath Ma ko nahi bathayi'Unko yeh bathaya hai'ki main kisi job ke chakar main Mumbai jarahi hoon'

Kiran-BANI!!Jaldi kar'tujhe toh patha hai ki Bangalore main sham ke time kithni traffic hothi hai'Tere flight choot jaye gi'

Bani-Nahi chootegi'Voh flight mujhe mere zindagi ke pass legaygi'Bus main appna email check karloon'

NO NEW MESSAGES

Lagtha hai'budhu ne koi mail nahi beeja'

Bani quickly ran to her house mandir'

TO GOD-Ab appka kam hai mujhe mere fate se milane ka'okay..! Mujhe sach main nahi samajme araha ki mujhe voh kasie milega'Liken jase bhi milega..app ko milwana hoga'Okay!!Well wish me best of luck'

Rano-Di!!Kisse bathein kar rahi ho'oh'God se jagra??Before you leave!!Chaloo..jaldi'

Kiran-Bani!!Rano'Chaloo..

Kiran-Acha Bani sun'Pia tujhe lena airport poonch jaye gi'okay'Appna cell phone on rakna'

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Hey'How was it??hope okay'if not good wont continue'.no problem'I will update tom..if I get sufficient comments'

Thanks for reading..

Sorry for mistakes..

NIKITA>>

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Interesting
plz continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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interesting, dont you u dare stop this ff, it is great please cont..

Will be waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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3 FF's going at once!!! this one is soo interesting, bani and jai are e-mail buddies, although I don't like having e-mail buddies that I don't know learned many times in school, that the person on the other side can be dangerous or some murder, well I'm not getting into those stuff cause our sweetie jai 's not like that, anyways back to the FF.

does jai even know that she is cumming to mumbai. next part, say more abt jai, but pls don't stop this FF its a very good one. but why do I feel that soon as bani goes to mumbai, she is gonna be heart broken, I hope I'm wrong

ps. pls say that e-mail id works 😆 😭

update soon

ciao!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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bloomin Niki its hard to concentrate on one never mind three and this one is maha interesting...love on the web...hehehe very modern...Bani bad girl...he might be a wolf ready to gobble you up... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well aaj kal mot love stories start from the inter net or chatting who agrees
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very interesting!! cant wait 4 the next one!!!

pls cont soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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niks.. welcome with a new FF.. great yaar.. great part.. continue soon.. love the concept.. heeheh bani seems pretty bubly here.. hehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds nice & interesting .. will wait for the next update. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1

Hey…Back with next part, Thanks for the great response!!Glad you liked this FF…

I know…My 4th currently running one…But hey…No

school so a lot of time to write!!

Sorry about mistakes…Please Enjoy!!

Bani-haan maa…appna cell phone on rakoongi…Appne Pia ko phone karke yaad diladiya na?

Kiran-Haan..diladiya! Yeh tu kya karahi hai??

Bani-Kuch bhi toh nahi…

Bani said as she secretly kept her laptop in her bag

Kiran-Arre laptop! Vahin bhi!

Bani-Mom..yeh laptop mere jaan hai!

Kiran-Patha nahi kya assa kya hai iss laptop main!!

Bani went up to Kiran who was holding Bani's dairy…and grabbed it from Kiran…

Kiran-Arre! Bani!!Tu 25 sal ki hai…assa kya hai tere dairy mein, jo main nahi janthi??

Bani-Kuch bhi toh nahi…Ab main chalthi hoon…Love you bye!!

Bani kissed Kiran on the check and slammed the door behind her…Rano was already in the taxi…

Rano-sab kuch le liya?

Bani-Haan…

Rano-Ab bathao di…App sach main Mumbai kyun jarahi ho?Kam??Nah..mere di assi toh nahi thi…

Bani-(sighs)-Tujhe kya patha hai..?

Rano-Assa kuch bhi nahi jo appne mujhe nahi batha ho…Liken come on…you should be proud ki mamma bought it!!Par app mujhe toh sach batha hi sak thi hain…

Bani-Voh..(oh god Bani…Rano ko kuch bhi kehde)haan…shaddi se bag ne ke liye…You know…last year Pia bhi toh shaddi ke daar se bag gaye thi…

Rano-(mummered)-Liken Mumbai jakar kud shaddi kar rahi hai…

Bani-Tune kuch kaha??

Rano-Nahi toh..

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The rest of the ride was quiet…but Bani's mind was in dream land..

Banis thoughts..

I'm soo excited…I mean…Main ek asse insan se milne jarahi hoon, jise maine kabhie dehka nahi…liken diske bare main, main sab kuch janthi hoon…well at least it seems that way…thoda bura bhi lagtha hai…ki ma aur Rano se jhoot bol kar jarahi hoon…liken agar ma ko sach bathathi tho ma mujhe Mumbai toh kya ghar ke bhar be nahi jane dethi…Main teek tho karahi hoon na? Of course I am…yeh koi waqt nahi hai..appne app ko contradict karne ka…

Rano-Di..kya soch rahe ho…hum airport poonch gaye…Main under chaloon ki ghar jaoon?

Bani-Tu ghar ja aur ma ka kayal rakna…aur main tujhe Mumbai karthe phone karoon gi…

Rano-(hugging Bani)-Okay di..Love you bye!!

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Rano reached home safely…

Kiran-(to herself)-yeh computer kaise band(close)karthe hain?

Rano-Ma…bouth bouk lage hai..kuch banado…

Kiran-Haan voh toh main kardoon gi..tu yeh computer band karde…

Rano-Kamal hai…di laptop legaye..liken jane se pehle computer use karrahi thi…

Rano looks at the computer screen…

Rano-(to herself)-Di ne appne email se logout bhi nahi kiya…Yeh di ka konsa email address hai? Maine toh kabhie nahi suna… CallmeBD@Hotmail.com …Shayad naya hai…Liken inbox 209!!Wow…

Rano curiously clicked on Inbox…

Rano-Yeh kya…Sarre messages ek hi insan se..! PyarseJW@Hotmail.com Kamal hai…Ek kyon hai…

Rano opened one of the mails…The most recent…one which Bani had not even read…

Dear Rani,(the name which Bani had put as her real name in the profile)

Sorry kafi time se email nahi kiya…liken office main bouth kam tha…Keher I know no excuses…But I'm sure tumne mujhe bouth miss kiya hoga na…Ab bouth hogaya…I really want to meet you!! Agar tum nahi aye…toh promise…kuch dinoon main, main kud Bangalore ajjaoonga tumse milne!! Jo tumne mujhe last month gift beja tha…voh mere pass hai…har ross subhe sabse pehle use dehktha hoon…Shayad koi araha hai…Main chaltha hoon…

-PyarseJW…

-tumhara Jeet(name which he had given in Profile)

Both know that those aren't there names..but pyar se they call each other that…

Rano-(mouth open)-Di neh…

Rano quickly flipped to a couple of mails…seeing that this "guy" lived in Mumbai…

Rano-(to herself)-OMG…Di ne ithna bada jhoot…Voh bhi ma se…Phele toh laga tha ki, Pia ka sach jankar ma ko thoda sa shook hoga…liken ab Di ka sach bhi!! Di ithni stupid kaise hosak thi hain…Asse internet love main!! Hoga koi budha Punjab ke kisi gown main!! This is just ridiculous…

Kiran came to Rano with a plate of food, and Rano quickly turned the computer on hibernate…so that she wouldn't get logged off of Bani's email account…

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Kiran-Yeh le kahle..

Rano-Nahi ma, abhi bouk nahi hai…Mujhe kuch kam hai…

Kiran-Arre..sun..

Rano-haan ma…

Kiran-Chabi lekar janna, main mrs.Kaur ke ghar ga rahe hoon…

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Bani-(at the airport)-(out loud to herslef)-Mere flight gante main hai…Oh god…main use milne jarahi hoon…Okay Bani relax…Mumbai jakar har insane ko tumhara jeet maath samaj lena…Main appne Jeet ke bare main sab kuch janthi hoon…sirf naam nahi janthi…

Rano-(also there now)-what rubbish di!! You've lost it!

Bani-(turning around)-Rano..tu yahan?

Rano-Bathao na di..app appne so called Jeet ke bare main kya janthi hai??Usska naam??

Bani-Dehko Rano tum nahi samajthi…

Rano-Bathao na..Di main kya nahi samajthi!!??Jab app uska asli naam tak nahi janthi tho…

Bani-Rano!!Naam sab kuch tho nahi hotha na…Main uski puri family ko janthi hoon…

Rano-Jasee ki?

Bani-Unki ek badi behan hai..Jigyasa…aur Aditiya…unka sabse acha dost hai…aur Jigyasa ka pathi…Aur unka ek choota bhai hai…sahil…aur ek aur bhai Nachikeit…Unki ek Masi se…jo unki Ma se bhi badi hai…Aur unka ek butler tony bhi…

Rano-(finding this stupid)Di…just listen to yourself…kya pagal pan hai yeh..Aur Mumbai jasse ithne bade shaher main…app iss insan ko kaise dundegi…

Bani-Mujhe uski naam ki koi zaroorat nahi hai…Agar mere pyar sacha hai toh voh mujhe zaroor milega…

Rano-(finding this even more unreasonable)-App iss kuch mahine ke jhoot ko Pyar kehthi hain?Aur konsa gift diya tha appne use?

Bani-Yaad hain hum ek madir gaye the…duniya ka voh ek mandir jahan Ram ji ki morthi akeli milthi hai…Sitaji ke bina…Voh morthi maine unhe dithi…

Rano-Achha fine…aur unhone appke liye kya beja?

Bani-(showing her wrist out)-yeh bracelet!!

Rano-Oh god di! Jin diamonds par appko bouth naz hai..asse hazar bracelets street way, sabzi mandi par milthi hai…10 rupee main…

Bani-Mujhe use kuch farak nahi padtha…Liken asse sirf EK bracelet hai!!

Bani flipped the bracelet over revealing the monogram on it…

JW+BD=BW

Announcement-

Flight Number 211 abhi uraan ke liye tayaar hai…All passengers please report to check in…Gate #7

Bani-(getting up, putting her bracelet back on)-Ab main chalthi hoon…

Rano-Di…app phir bhi jarahi haan?

Bani-Haan…

Rano-(mad)-yaad rakna appne mere baath nahi sune Di…Yeh internet ka jhoota pyar…sirf appko dard dega!!Aur kuch nahi!!Main jarahi hoon…

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I hope you guys liked it..I know..Jai isn't here yet…But don't worry…ayyega!!

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