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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey SOni...

Superb start...waiting for you to continue soon ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx for taking us back to the beautiful times.plz continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG....people tahnk you soo much for your lovley comments....a big 🤗

i'm posting this part hope you guys enjoy...i will not be able to post tomarrow because i'm going to a universty open day....and i dont have internet connection at the moment in home...so i'm using my skool library to post update...(bad)


Part 2

Next morning:

like everyday WM was full of buzz everyone was running around….poor Tony was running around ever where…to jigs, dadi, anu…basically poor guy had no life…but he was happy that his master was not calling him these days…thanks to his bani madam who has take over his masters job on her shoulders….bani and massi prepared breakfast and bavesh was taking things out and laying them on the table with bani's help…in mean time massi asked…

massi: bahu jai kaha hai…is he not up yet?
bani: he is probably up massi
massi: why don't you go up and check on him while I lay everything here
bani: ji massi

bani walked towards the stares…as she was walking she bumped to anu…who was running talking on phone….

bani: arre anu careful….
anu: sorry mami I'm in hurry …

bani smiled to her self…god this gal when will she grow up…bani approached her room…she opened the door slowly…she got shock at the view in front of her…she saw her hot husband getting dress up…she stopped there and shamelessly stared at him…like she has seen a goddess…

jai was buttoning his shirt…at the sound of the door he looked up in the mirror he could see her staring at him…he smiled….he took the ck2in one perfume and applied it to himself and then brushed his black gelled hair… bani didn't eve realised when he finished…when jai finished he come up to her looked at her in the eyes….bani couldn't believe he was looking at her…straight into her eye… she could imagine her cheek going pink at his stare and she was getting Goosebumps…he looked for a while than broke the eye contact and said..

jai: do you mind…looking at her eyes again…
bani: huh
jai: my blazer….

bani was shocked …just then she realise she was standing in front of the bed where his blazer was….looking apologetic…
bani: I'm so…r… sorry ummm breakfast ready hai….
jai: nodded…..yes

Then bani just disappeared in a second jai shook his head and then took his belongings and headed down for breakfast….
breakfast table was quiet as usual….everyone was eating bani was just playing with her food...and lost in thought of roshini….the same thought were running around her head…massi and dadi notice bani…but they didn't said anything…the kept quiet cuz they new the reason….


just then the bill rang….tony opened the door and welcomed the guest everyone was shocked seeing roshini there massi & dadi literally had heart attack…jigz smiled..

jigz: arre roshini tum…getting off her seat…come in have seat….
roshini: good morning everyone…know one really cared but they just said morning…she took her place next to jigz
jigz: smilling wickedly …looking at bani…bani bahbi would you get some breakfast for roshini….

every one was shocked with this gesture…bani give her a nasty look but she didn't said anything…on the other hand massi was upset and she looked at jai…jai knew massi's reaction he didn't said anything…bani was about to get up when…jai looked at her and she looked at him…

jai: tony jai called…bani looked at him so as the other….tony get some breakfast for roshini… giving her one of his warning & dirty look…then he looked at bani…she got his gesture and she sat back…but not believing what jai just said…she was happy really happy today for the first her husband took her side…stood for her in front of everyone…

jai got up from his seat after finishing his breakfast then he said…roshini will be staying here with us until her apartment is ready…as there some construction work going on….this news shocked everyone massi and dadi give a killer look to jai…jigz was happy….bani was hurt really hurt…tears beamed in her eyes but she stopped them from coming…jai then left with aditya to office the kids went to collage and the elders also got up…bani stood up she was about to leave when…

roshini: I hope you don't mind me staying here bani?
bani: turned back and look at her…before she answer jigz cut in…
jigz: arre iska ghar tu nahi hai…its jai bahia's house and he makes decisions not some middle class people…smirking….
roshini: yah but still she jais wife you know…grinning…
bani: tears wiled at her eyes…aap such kahe rahi hai jigz anti…looking at roshini…this house is mr walia's and if he doesn't mind you staying here then why should I …just then she walked out to the kitchen…(god im so hungery everyone…didn't had lunch…I will go to kitcehn and eat then I will continue writing…)


(Me back lets continue my hindi is not that good so im sorrying for the wrong spelling)

jigz room

jigz: oh I'm so happy your back roshani…now as your back I will be able to kick those biggers out of my house…tahnks for coming…holding hands together…
roshani: oh it nothing jigz I'm glad you told me everything (so roshani now about everything that happened, even about jb's marriage) smiling now I will be able to make jai mine for ever….both laughing together….

bani in the kitchen lost in her thoughts as usual…how can this happen …how can mr Walia allow her to live in the house. I'm sure he hates her… they way he was talking to her last night….it really showed that he hated her, but if he hate hare than why did he go with her in the party and in the phone last night I did hear it was a lady's voice speaking to him…ohh god plz help me... I don't know what is happening…Mr Walias expression says he hates her but then why did he let her live in the house…tought bani…who should I ask …umm massi& dadi I'm sure they know…bani smiled left the kitchen wnet towards living room….

in the living room massi and dadi were talking about roshani…

massi: no beji I cant let this woman ruin my son's life again… I know why she is here…I just no why…
dadi: tu sach kehraha hai we cant let her ruin jai's life…par issme galti jai ki bhi why did he let her live in WM…why do we care if her house is getting refurbishment....
massi: concerned…muji tu dar lag taa hai…agar bahu ni kuch pucha roshani ki bari mei tab mei kya kaho….just the bani entered both the lady's were shocked what if bani heard them…they looked at each other…
bani: kya bhat hai massi…aap itne pareshan kiyu hai…looking at bot women…
massi: arre kuch nahe bahu we were just talking about you and munna..teased massi…hearing munna's name bani blused…then dadi too starting teasing her…massi thanked god that bani didn't hear their conversation but little they new bani did hear their conversation….


In the office

aditya moving back and forth in jai's cabin but he is not able to say what he wants…jai looked at him patently…shaking his head in negative and sighing deep

jai: oh come on adi just spit it out…frustrated at him…
aditya: sighing deep…I cant belive this jai..
jai: believe what…
aditya: jai how can you let her live in WM after what she did you…how much you suffered because of her….jai cutting off…
jai: adi plz calm down…
adi: disbelieve… are you asking me to calm down jai…how can I…tel me..
jai: frustrated at adi's question…he leaned back at his black leather chair…his hand going through his hair…he stood up from his chair went to the window…turned around facing adi
jai: kab tum muji samju gi aditya…a mischief smile played in his face…adi was confused first but then he smiled exactly knowing what his friend is going to plan…your right jai I will never understand you…said adi smiling… both men smiled at each other…the just jai held his head…adi concerned running to jai
adi: what is wrong jai..are you ok …jai massaged his forhead slightly
jai: yes I'm fine its just a headache…I will be fine…
adi: are you sure
jai: yes man I'm very sure I just need to take this pain killer then I will be fine…

adi was not satisfied he looked at jai …this pain is so new jai gets headache always but this is so different it more than just a headache thought aditya…

wm

bani was in her room…walking back and forth thinking to her self…iska matlab mera shak yakeen mei badal gaye…there is dif something between mr walia and roshani…but what is it…I have to find out but how and from whom… massi and dadi are not telling me anything…they are ignoring my questions…the only way that I can find out about this, is from mr walia but…how oh dear god plz help me….

hope you guys like it...plz ignore my mistakes…and leave you comments
thank you
sonam


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ........ 😉 gre88888 going........ 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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saving ... will be back with comment ... in a hurry... 😳 ...

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Lovely update Sonam.... looking forward to more JB moments ... 😳 ... do cont soon... 👏 ...
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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love the way this ks is going! 👏 👏 bani doing what she is best at bondgiri! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome update.
Can't wait for the next part.

Please continue soon.

pooja
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part.....keep them coming......This was the best part of KS.....please continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 .. wow sanam.. bani da jasoos is back.. lol.. great part hun.. continue sooon.. loved it.. heheh.. i wanna noe wats AJ plan.. lol..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank You so much for you comments...i really loved readding all of them...sry i was away in universty open day...i'm updateing part 3...hope you guys like it...i have another open day tomarrow so i'm going there...and i might go to Germany cuz my mamaji passed away yesterday....but i promise when i'm back i will update regularly...

thank you
Part 3

in the morning when jai woke up he find the sheet on himself and the cushion under his head…he wondered who for a minute because normally due lots of office work he would sleep in study but nobody did bring him a cushion or comforter…but who did it to day he thought, when he saw the cushion he remembered that the cushion was from his bedroom so that means bani did it…did she really did it…jai thought…he smiled to himself…chalo koi tu hai ju tumhar itna khiyal raktaa hai…said jai and walked out of the door…..


it was another usual day in wm…nothing really new except roshani coming to the wm and bani trying to find out who she is and she is related to mr walia…

In the evening the guys returned from the office and bani was in the kitechen preparing for the dinner…jigz and roshani as usual making plan of how to get the two sisters on the street… they all had dinner and jai & adi went to study to discuses some file….

Bani was in her room thinking of how to ask mr Walia about roshani…what will he think if I ask him about rosh … I mean its clear that we don't have any relationship so in what bases should I ask him I cant do anything right now …oh god plz help…thought bani then she went to closest took her gown and changed after changing into her gown she come in went to jai's closest to take his blue nightie… she took his nightie and it still smelled of his cologne...she smiled then she looked at his black suits collection again she smiled gosh mr Walia be nah thinking bani…she placed his blue nightie on the bed and looked at his side…it was empty how could she go to sleep without him…god why am I behaving like this thought bani then took a deep sigh and went and stood at the balcony….lost in the past event that happened…


In the study

jai and adi, ranveer were discussing some project when they heard a slow knock on the door…with the second knock massi enterd…they all looked up to see massi...it was really strange for all of them because massi wasn't really coming to the study to them….there was a huge silence…jai broke the silence

jai: massi aap…havnt you sleep yet….
massi: no beta it couldn't sleep…I…tumse bhat karna ta….they all looked at each other….ranveer stood up

ran:ok mamaji I will go now…said good nite and left…aditya was about to do the same when massi stopped him….

massi: adi rook beta tumse be bhat karma hai muji….
jai: concerned… massi kya bhat hai….
jai got up from his seat walked toward massi …held her hand three of them sat down….jai and adi looking at each other massi looking at jai…
massi: holding jai's hand….beta mei chahti hu ki tum bahu ko roshani ki bare mei sub kuch batauo…jai a bit shaking…I don't know why you let her stay in this house after what she did to you…sigh…after so long tumhara yeh makaan ek ghar bangaya and you have settled will in your life with bani…I don't want to see you breaking down again beta and I don't want bani to suffer too…its better you tell her everything now rather than she find out later and that to from someone else…because if she did find out then it will hurt her really badly…. I just don't want any of you to get hurt…promise me beta that you will tell this to bahu…..jai looking at her
jai: ok massi I will tell her myself but plz you don't worry about us massi we are fine and I'm not going to let roshani come into my life any more I promise you that…with that jai smiled at massi so does massi and adi…
massi: ok beta ab bahut dhir hujuki hai you should both go to sleep…whit saying that massi bid them goodnight feeling happy that her munna promised her she left….jai looke at adi who had a questioning look on his face…

jai: what?????????
adi: do you what you just said to massi…jai shaking his head in negative way….my god jai you just promised that poor lady that you will tell bani about your relationship with roshani to her…are you going to dat?
jai: turning around…I don't care if she finds out or…she doesn't mean anything to me neither I mean anything to her…(liar she means everything to you…why are men so damn some time) adi a bit shocked

adi: I know jai the circumstances that you to married weren't good but she is your wife come on yaar no matter how much you deny it she still means some thing to you and besides she has every rights on you…
jai: adi tell me some thing are you my frien or hers
adi: of curse yours…
jai: then why are taking her side….
adi: im not taking her side it just that…jai cutting him
jai: what huh..its what…a bit angry on adi's remark


adi: jai mere yaar, mere dost I'm not taking her side think about it yaar…think form your heart for a while…sigh…she doesn't deserve this jai…pia did a mistake and she paid for it…why jai…you put her through so much trouble but she didn't even said a single word….jai was quiet….she listened to every harsh word that you said to her…jigz said to her but she never went against you or jigz….or anyone else in this family….all I'm saying to you my friend is forget everything , make a fresh start …every time you fell in love jai the person cheated on you and the left you with a broken, shuttered hearth…may be, may be this time it might work…jai looked up…adi looking into his eye give your relationship one more chance jai …it might work….believe me…it might do…think about what I said jai and good night my dear friend….adi went towards the door he opened the door but stopped and turned to face jai…jai massi really thinks bani as her only bahu and if she finds out she will be shuttered…saying this he left and closed the door….

jai was speechless on what adi said…all those words echoed around his ear…he pored himself a drink and sat there on the couch remembering what adi said specially the last sentence… "jai massi really thinks bani as her only bahu and if she finds out she will be shuttered"…jai leaned back at the sofa…your absolutely right my friend said jai…what roshani did to me was wrong…he remembered the day when he spotted roshani in one of his business partners bed daksh randheria (lets say roshani cheated on jai and he caught her in daksh's bed) and coincidently pia did the same but instead she run away with his blue eye boy…whom he thought as one of his dear friend but more like a son….but bani what was she…what did she mean to him really…is he able to give their relationship a chance thought jai…but at the same time he was scared too what if bani leaves him too…thinking all about his life he fell asleep on the couch….
bani couldn't sleep…oh god why is he taking soo long how long is he working for said bani to her self…she couldn't stop thinking about him so she made up her mind and slowly went off her bedroom to study where she find jai sleeping uncomfortably…she went back to her room and got an extra sheet and cushion for him and brought it back with her to study room…she gently left his head and placed the cushion under and then she lay the sheet on him…he looked so cut when he was sleeping thought bani and smiled …she could tell that he was stressed from his facial expression and also he was drinking alcohol again…then she left and went to sleep…whit out him….


next morning

everyone was at the dining table having breakfast…it was quiet as everyone was busy eating….just then roshani said….

roshani: ummm voo bani kyat um or jai ek sath suthi nahe hai kya…(ignore my spelling yaar)…looking at bani…everone els looked at roshanis remark…jb were shock and jai give a warning galance to roshani whereas roshani grinned at him…(note: roshani actually saw jai sleeping in the study last night and she new that massi isn't aware of jb's relationship) then massi looked at jb and asked bani…

massi: bahu yeh roshani kya such kahe raha hai?...looking at bani…who was nervous like anything….everyone eyed bani now she was scared like a hell…she looked at jai for help….

bani: ummm….voo…looking nerviously at everyone…umm…then an idea pooped in her head…umm actually massi haa vo kal rath study mei sugaye thi (sleeping) massi was shocked….
massi: but why?
bani: looking at everyone except jai….but it wasn't my fault….massi inki ghalti thi….jai head shot up and looked at bani directly with a killer look in his eyes but at the same time a confusion look as will…what is she up to…thinking jai…everyone stared at jai….bani spoke again as everyone was waiting for her….

bani: you know massi I thought he will change after our marriage…but he hasn't…looking on the floor not able to eye anyone…. continued bani….he is still workaholic…he is working until mid night everyday…feeling bit embarrassed… and he come late to sleep and he turns all the lights on or mera nend (sleep) be kharb karta hai….by now her cheeks were gone totally red like a plum fruit…and she new everyone was eyeing her….

everyone was quite…. jai was shocked at listening to the complaint that his dear wife made that to in front of his entire family…he felt like killing her…jigs and roshani were shocked at her comment…this stupid silly gal what does she think of herself… thought jigs…massi broke the slice by giggling so does the other members excluding jb, jigs, roshani and ranveer….bani give jai a apologetically expression…but she give a wining smile to roshani and jigs…..

massi: acha to yeh baat hai…you know bahu I think you should do that often…looking at jai…kiyu muuna kya bahu such keh raha hai…

jai: vo massi ummm I was busy working so never realised what time it was…denying the accusation…

dadi: oh jai putar ab jane dhi…you will not win from your wife and massi…started giggling…

anu: so mami what did you do then…I mean why did mamji sleep in study….

bani: looking embaressed…just the dadi said…
dai: arre anu putar…think about…bani just locked the door when jai came the door was lock so he must have slept there…everyone giggled at this…
adi: ha jai you have to get use to it now…giving a glare to jigs who was fuming on bani…all started laughing loudly…leaving jb embarrassed more….

breakfast was over bani wanted a to apologyse to mr walia…but how…jai was leaving when he called aditya to hurry up…just then bani took the opertunity to say sorry…so she went…by now bani was very scared and nervous…she didn't even know what to say …her lips were locked…oh god plz help me…

bani: mr walia…jai turned ..to face her…her soft beautiful voice echoed everywhere…
jai: kya baat hai? looking into her eyes…
bani:…voo…vo I'm. So…r….I'm sorry… vo I didn't mean to say all that i…umm was just scared I …jai cutting her off
jai: its ok…I understand…smiled at her…OMG did he just smiled at her bani rani was shocked …she couldn't believe her luck….she was keep repeating it in her mind…OMG did mr walia just said this to me…am I dreaming I hope not….thought bani…as their eye lock session continued just then some one snapped his finger….
to be continued……..

thank you for reading this part and commenting

sonam







Edited by SonamKHAN - 17 years ago

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