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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
awesome update, just loved it!!! i hope jai and bani get together soon!! Next update on my last day of school 😃 😃 😃 pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
wonderful part pls cont soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
fabulous, im in a hurry now, but promise, i will comment later 👏

over all, nice update! waiting for june 6th 😆

SA 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Hey Nikita,

Just started with the FF. Nice story.Quite different from the usual Mills and boon stuff. Most of the FF's on the forum are following the path of being different and we, the readers are delighted to have another FF with a differnt subject to read.

Good start and Keep it up.
and Oh!!! Update soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
ummm soo jb are frnds ....very sweet...grt start of their relationship...ufffff i hate tha sonam and tina god 😡 😡 😡 how can sonam says lets go home after so much happened 🤢 🤢 ...sanjay very sweet guy gd advicer...contine

sonam (i'm nice 😉 )
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
oooooooh, jai is attracted to bani, this attraction will turn into love soooon. Hate that Tina, she can get sumit married as many times as she can she won't become a grandmother because of her cursed beloved son.

jai and bani close friends. sounds very interestiong
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
so i m guessing the lil gal was Bani
great part Nikki 👏
see i m here 😃
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
yeah was good to read jai being attracted to bani ......niceeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69

Hey....Back again...

Part 5

Dedicated to-Balpreet(I cant stop thanking u... I lub u, Rimjhim, Kanta di, Sonam, Tropa,smiles_uk, janu_2006, Kuripunjabdi, ~*Noor*~(for always being my first commenter), Hipreet, ~Unforgettable~, amiee, ducky_euro, and mujer **and ofcourse, Preeti...and all my silent readers!!Luv u All..🤗

Bani-Just relax Jai…Give me the contract…

Jai-Hun?

Bani-Wasse bhi, what are you doing with a contract…that's my job!, and your presentation…let me help you…

Bani came over to Jai's side, and hovered over him..one hand around his chair…and the other on the desk…

Bani-Go to power point..

Jai-Hun?

Bani-Jai!!

Jai's hand was on his mouse, and Bani put her hand on his..and moved the mouse…creating the presentation…She was like that for a while…

Bani-Okay..so start out like..

And the rest was a blur for Jai, in fact he couldnt even tell, when Jai had got up, and moved to the other side of the desk, and Bani had taken over in his seat completing the power point for him…

As Bani explained the project…the song played in Jai's head…blocking all sounds and brain power…

Hal chul hue..

Zarra chor hua

Dil chor hua

Tere aur hua

Hal chal hue

Zarra chor hua

Dil chor hua

Tere aur hua

Aise chale jab hawa ishq hua hi hua

Aise chale jab hawa ishq hua hi hua

Ishq hua….

Bani-Jai!!!Are you listening…I'm done!!Hello…

Jai-(coming out of deeppp thought)-hun?yeah…of course I was listening..and thanks..I owe you one..

Bani-Ek nahi do(two)

Jai-Kyun?

Bani-Ek toh tumhara kam karnekeliye…aur dusra mere boke(hungry) pat (stomach) ke liye…

Jai-Kyun 10 minute hi toh hue hain…

Bani-What!!!Its been 3 hours…

Jai-hun??

Bani-Haan..tumhare board meeting shuru hone wale hai…

Jai-oh..!

Bani-Jao..tumhara power point set up kardiya maine…

Jai-Thanks again!!

Bani-No problem…Best of luck!!

3 months later…

Aur asse bethe 3 mahineh…Jai ke kayaloon main…Jai ke dil neh toh shuro se hi guitar bajadithi…liken shayad ab Bani ke dil main bhi violins bajne ki bari thi…!!!

Jai-(entering Bani's cabin)-Hey, listen I've ordered Italian..(holding up the bag)

Bani-(on the phone, her chair facing the window)-haan, haan actually I'm unsure of that…but wait just one minute, let me ask Mr.Walia…Just one sec..

Bani got up, passed Jai without giving him one glance…and went to Uday's cabin…

Jai-Bani!..Well guess she's busy…I'll leave lunch in her cabin…

Bani-(walking into Uday's cabin)-Sir!

Uday-(looking up at her)-Haan, beta bolo..

Bani-Voh…Uncle…Florist ka phone hai, voh kehraha hai, ki white lilies nahi hain, toh pooch raha hai ki purple chalega kya?

Uday-What!!Liken White toh Krishna ke favorite hain…

Bani-Kya karoon uncle..acha teek hai main dusre florist se baath karthi hoon..

Uday-Thank you beta..

Bani-(leaving his cabin, back to her's..Talking to the florist)-Nahi, we don't need your services…thank you…

Seeing the food, on the table…She opened the container…and put some noddles and vegetables into a plate…She ate, while dialing some other florists…

2 hours later

Jai-(coming into Bani's cabin)-Bani…yeh kya hai yaar..come on…tum kab se phone par ho??

Bani-(finally ending the phone conversation)-hun??Voh aaj tumhare ghar main party hai, issheliye…

Jai-Party??Humhare ghar main??

Bani-Humhare nahi, tumhare ghar main…aur haan…tumhari mom vapiss ghar arahi hain…

Jai-Kamal hai, aaj kal you seem to know more about my house than I do…Well, do you want to come to the hospital with me, to get mom??

Bani-Sure..kyun nahi…Mujhe bus kuch kam hai..phir chalthe hain…

Jai-Okay..(jai's phone rings)-Hello, haan Tony, ajj ke party ke liye…hmmmmmmmmm…kuch bhi nikaldena…how about my blue suit…

Bani-(laughing)-Tum party main suit???

Jai-Aur nahi toh kya??

Bani-hm…Chaloo..mera kam ho chukka..bus uncle se milthe hue chalthe hain..

Jai-Okay, bye tony…

Uday-Come in..

Bani-Uncle, party ki sari tayyarein hogaye..right from flowers to guest list…bus hum bus ab Jai, ki mom ko lene jarahe hain…

Uday-Teek, hai beta…

Jai-Chaleen Bani!!

Bani-Haan chaloo..

In the car..

Bani-Ssooo…

Jai-um…(turns the radio on)

Tum pass aye..

Yoon muskurai

Tum neh na janne kya

Sapne dikhaye

..

Jai began to blush…and soo he turned of the Radio..

Bani-JAII!!!Thats my favorite song…tum bhi na…bilkul romantic nahi ho…I mean..turn it back on…

Jai-Okay fine!!

Ab toh mera dil

Jage na sootha hai

Kya karoon haye

Kuch kuch hota hai

They got at the hospital…and on the way Bani made Jai stop, and Bani bought white lilies for Jai's mom…Bani didn't know Jai's mom, but she knew Uday and Jai were really happy…that she was coming back home…

Jai-Bani listen…Ma, is in 342..okay…main kuch paper work kar ke atha hoon…okay…

Bani-Got it..

While Bani was walking to the room..Patha nahi maine yeh room number kahin suna hai…342…anyway..mil gaya..(entering the room)Arre app!!

Bani-Arre, aunty app..remember me!!Appko shayad yaad nahi hai..liken mujhe hai…main kuch mahine phele ayethi…galthi se appke room main..Wow duniya kithni chooti hai na…App Jai ki mom hai??

Krishna-(looking at Bani…her eyes swelled up)

Jai came in…he had his hand arouns Bani's shoulder..and looked at him mom…

Jai-Hi mom, yeh Bani hai…

Krishna looked as If she was trying to say something…but was unable to do so…

Jai-Bani, Ma says hi…

Bani-You Jai…maine aunty ko phele bhi dehka hai..

Jai-Acha, kahan??

Bani-Yahin hospital main…

Jai-(taking his hand from around Bani's shoulder, and goes near his mom)-Maa, app rorahi hain??

Bani-Shayad kushi ke ansoon hai?!

Jai-Patha nahi, nurse abhi tak kyun nahi aye?

Bani-Nurse…?Waise aunty ko hua kya hai?

Jai-She's paralyzed…

Bani-What!!

Jai-Haan, and she's been here, for 21 years!!

Bani-Wow, that's been a long time…TOh kya aunty abhi teek hogayehain…

Jai-Nahi, liken doctor neh kaha hai, ki hum Ma ko ghar par lekar jasak the hain…Shayad use Ma teek hojayeen…Main Nurse ko lekar atha hoon…

Bani-Okay…

Bani sat on Krishna's Bedside…and put her hand on Krishna's…Bani was amazed…at how Krishna was responding to her touch…Krishna's hand began to tremble as she attempted to move it…

The Nurse came rushing in…

Nurse-Doctor!!!Doctor..

The Doctor came and checked Krishna..Bani was having a strange feeling, and stepped out of the hospital…While Jai was outside the room…

Nurse-Mr.Walia..

Jai-Ji..Nurse..ma?

Nurse-Voh, voh jo inke saath abhi madam thi na…vohi thi…jo uss din ayyethi..Appko yaad hai na..

Jai-OMG!!Voh BANI thi!!??

Nurse-JI…Ab Mrs.Walia, bilkul teek hosak thi hain…agar voh madam inka kayal raketho…Voh madam kahan hai??

Jai-(looking around..)-Uh..Patha nahi..Shayad…yahin kahin…

Doctor-(coming out of room)-Mr.Walia, app Mrs.Walia, ko ghar kekar jasak the hain..and I'm sure voh jaldi teek hojayeen gi…because 21 years here hasn't really done here any good…shayad ab unhe appne parivar ki zaroorat hai…

Jai-Ji…main Bani ko lekar atha hoon…

Doctor-She's defiantly a miracle worker…

Jai-I cant belive she was in my office for soo long, and I didn't know that she was the one!

Doctor-Well, you better go find her!

Jai went outside, and around the hospital looking for Bani…and when he got to the parking lot he saw her!

Jai-BANI!!

Bani-(turned around)-

Jai-(ran toward Bani, panting)-Bani..tum..tum hi ho…

Bani-hun?

Precap-

Tarun-Jai, I think she's the one!!

Jai-(dreamily)-me Too…

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Uday-Have you asked Bani?

Jai-About ?

Uday-About her living here...to take care of Krishna!?

Jai-Well, not yet…

Hope it was Okay...

Thanks for Reading!!!

NEXT UPDATE 13th June...

nikita ...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#70

Shireen got to it 1st😭....but 2nd..yeahhhhhhh!!!!!

awwwwww..Nikita....so finally J knows that Bani's the girl he's been looking for all this time....this may lead him to find out about her past😕

the update sounds interesting.......it seems that Tarun's also been thinkin about Bani😆

plz continue😛

Edited by ~*Noor*~ - 17 years ago

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