FF- Kasamh Se, Ch 51(end), pg 116 updtd on 25/9 - Page 80

gr88 part

poor nachiket but Purva is also right from her point of view........nice part......please continue.....and by the way Pia shouldn't be called ma....the status is surely not for her 😡

When they returned back home, Veer came running to them, flunged himself on Jai's legs, itna der kaha the aap dono…buaji ne kaha woh mujhe Piama ke ghar bhej dengi if I am naughty again, he was in tears….Jai lifted him up and hugged him…looked at Bani, Bani patted Veer's back….bus beta rowte nehi…she looked into Jai's eyes, sighed and went to look for her children, it was their dinner time…

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18 Years After

The house was busy with activity, with so many members sometimes it felt the house hardly slept, like the city, some one or the other was always up…

Veer strummed his guiter, he mumbled the song:

Aasmaan Hai Nila Kyun, Paani Gila Gila Kyun
Gol Kyon Hai Jameen
Sukh Mein Hai Narmi Kyun, Aag Mein Hai Garmi Kyun
Do Aur Do Paanch Kyun Nahi
Ped Ho Gaye Kam Kyun, Tin Hai Yeh Mausam Kyun
Chaand Do Kyun Nahi
Duniya Mein Hai Jung Kyun, Behata Laal Rang Kyun
Sarhadein Hai Kyun Har Kahin
Socha Hai, Yeh Tumne Kya Kabhi
Socha Hai, Ki Hai Yeh Kya Sabhi

(Movie Rock On)

Veer kept down the guiter and picked up the form, it was an entry form to enter the contest which he and his band wants to participate, tomorrow is the final date of submission and within 2 days is his 21^st birthday, he has already filled it up, but then again in went through it, 'socha hai yeh tumne keya Kabhi, socha hai, ki hai kya sabhi" he mumbled as he put his signature and gave it a satisfied look, no his decision is final and he does not want to change it as he has given his final thoughts….

Veer Shukla, son of Jai and Bani Walia he has written in the place of his parents name, not the usual Pushkar Shukla and Pia Dixit he was taught over the years to write….

Atharva came and flung his bag, chalo ek aur khatam huwa….

Phirse bag tune waise rakha, uthake rakh mummy atehi hogi…

Nehi ayegi, abhi abhi dekha dadi ko lekar hospital gayi, doctor ke pass

Maloom hai lekin tu toh rakhega nehi baad me, mujhe hi daat parega….

Uuuuf ho hey bhagwan mujhe bachao, thaka hara exams dekar aye hai, yeh nehi puchha, kaise huwa, pani wani piyega keya, bag hatao bag hatao

Puchke keya faida, mujhe answer maloom hai na, pass ho jayunga….pass hona toh hayi…lekin no. kitna ayega…

First division shayad a jayega….

Wah keya baath hai….First division kiyu distinction kiyu nehi…aur shyad kiyu

Mere liye first division hi theek hai..aur shyad shyad….

Tujhe Walia Industries sambhal na hai….

Aapko bhi toh hai…

Well for me it is only music now and remember within 2 days we are going on a tour, the first tour of our band…

That's right Veerbhai, I mean for how many days….

15

Hey bhagwan 15 days akela sone parega….

I thought you would love to have the room to yourself

Well not a bad idea lekin raath ko mujhe dar lagta hai…

Darne se mummy / papa ke kamre me ghus jana, tera adaat toh hayi hai…

Veer picked up his guiter and strummed the strings once again, it was the other day only Atharva's stomach was paining due to over eating and he went to sleep with his mummy / papa that too between them, holding their hands….beta tu kab bara hoga, Veer could still hear Jai Walia asking Atharva…

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Over the past 18 years things have changed to some extend, like all families the Walia family too faced its up and down….

Inspite of their wanting they could not marry Nachiket with Purva….seeing Nachiket in distress Jai Walia wanted to speak to the Randheria's i.e break his stand on Nachiket's marriage, take up things in his own hands, but Bani stopped him this time….if Purva was ready it would have made sense Mr Walia but she is not ready and I am sure Nachiket will not like to have a wife who is guilt ridden all the time….

Maybe Bani, if the Randheria's are convinced, I mean

I don't think so it will work out, the girl has made up her mind, under jealousy women do so many things, so when Nachiket wanted to make Purva jealous I thought it was a good idea as I could see myself in that position, mai toh pata nehi keya karti…

Jai Walia looked at her…yes she is very possessive about him, inspite of age, many girls are attracted to him as he keeps meeting many due to his profession but as long as they keep safe distance from him, Bani doesn't mind….Bani will stand and watch them under hooded eyes till Krishna appeared and claimed her rights over him, shooing the girls away… with his daughter Krishna adult now, his hair more grey, Jai felt very comfortable ….he knows he has Bani's trust at any point of time….

Thankfully Nachiket shifted to the house, Jigyasa tried her new tricks enquiring about Reshma, provoking him to bring her to the house, but Reshma was out shooting some place else….Nachiket made a cock and bull story that since they are muslims, her family is not willing hence Nachiket is giving a second thought….

Jigyasa then had pulled out a printout on Reshma, aka Reshma Singh daughter of a military army general trying to make a it at the bollywood …abh maine 'Singh' kisi muslim ka naam hota hai pata nehi tha….though Nachiket, Bani and Jai did look uncomfortable nobody seemed to bother with it very much, even not Aditya, Ranveer tried to provoke Nachiket who in turn told Ranveer, beta mai tumhara mama lagta hu, maybe not much older to you but in relation yes so you better stay out of my business, I am answerable to them only, he gestured at the elders….

But Ma is your elder sister…

She is I will reply to her when deem fit because without my waiting for any answer she has derived her own conclusions….

So?

So nothing…mujhe kuch aur nehi kehna hai…..Jai Bhaiya…do you want any explanation…

No Nachiket I do not want but will be happy to welcome your bride to my household…

Arushi, I think will be a perfect choice, we know her, that day her mother was saying after her divorce Arushi has changed a lot, is a lot matured now…Jigyasa informed them her chat over her kitty party….

Mr Walia, if it is Arushi I think I will move out alongwith you, mujhe Arushi ke saath ghar nehi karna hai, not that I care but all the time she will redicule me about my age difference with my husband…it doesn't matter but I will hate it and will not like to fight with a woman who will be my deorani and I happen to care Nachiket as my own brother….

Tum akeli kiyu jayogi Bani, we will also come along, Aditya said, I have never stayed without Jai and Ma and Masi are most comfortable with you….

Nachiket too smiled and said mai bhi jayunga after all it is for you that I have shifted to this house….

Jigyasa knew she was fighting a losing battle, even if she get Arushi to marry Ranveer the family will follow wherever Bani is going and now Bani is the full fledged mistress of the house….

Nachiket married after year of Purva's marriage with Daksh. He met the girl while doing up the house for her sister's wedding. Jai and Bani were overjoyed to welcome Shilpa in their household. Nachiket became the godfather of Purva's and Daksh's daughter….

Jai Walia never took take early retirement as he desired. Bani was not having him as a house-husband and with Rano gone, he could not still rely on Ranveer though now Ranveer has become a Director of Walia Industries. Rano and Sahil stay in the mountains only to come down during high winter for 2-3 months as most of the places are closed due to snow. Sahil is doing fairly well and Rano has become a school teacher, they are happy, Jai and Bani alongwith a children have visited them several times for holidays. After finishing college Varun will come down to Mumbai to work in his grandfather's firm i.e Walia Industries.

Jigyasa still picks of fights with Bani and other family members, but now it is just the spice in their normal routine life. Ranveer is yet to remarry though now he has been seen with a lady as reported to Bani by the children. As they are all over the place nothing misses their eyes, infact Ranveer also looks relaxed nowadays speaking on the phone softly, Bani told Jai to expect some good news any day…

Don't tell me Bani that you are again pregnant….

Oh god Mr Walia, aapka bhi jawab nehi…..how can I be pregnant when you, I mean when you protect….

Yeah Yeah but you cannot rely on these products….he winked….

Mr Walia kuch toh sharam kijiye…I meant to say Ranveer has been spotted with a woman….the children have seen them many a times….

Really like Mama like bhanja, will get married late into his life….

No mama is unique nobody can be compared to him, Bani pulled his cheeks…

Raashi and Vijay's daughter is preparing to leave for Paris. She will be specialising in make up and related products. Raashi and Vijay are already running a training school and a spa…

Pushkar happy with his new family, has got a son and a daughter, Veer does visit him during vacations but then he is happy to be back at his house, the Walia Mansion…

Pia has made quite a name for herself doing fairly well. She keeps changing her man, still does not know her mind. Veer once or twice went with her for outdoor shoots at the behest of Bani but only to come back home before the due date. Bani and Pia are in cordial terms lets say Bani tolerates Pia for Veer's sake….

Nachiket and Shilpa were blessed with a son after 5 years of their marriage , with help from the doctors, Nachiket named him 'Udayaan' after his father.

Masi and Dadi both older in years, while Masi needs help to move around, Dadi suffers from memory loss from time to time....

After completing the song, Veer opened his eyes to see Atharva has fallen asleep, my god people go crazy when I sing this song and how can he sleep, Veer looked at the watch...oh god papa abhi atehi honge...

He jumped up picking up the form on his way out of the room....he looked down from the gallery to see Jai entering with Aditya, as usual Krishna jumping up from somewhere and running to hug him....

Beta gir jayunga....dheere beta dheere, waise tera exams kaise huwa beta...

First class....

Aur us nalayak ka....

Pass ho jayega ....

Woh toh ho jayega, lekin uske ageh keya mai kuch umeed kar sakta hu....

Keya aap atehi shuru ho gaye Mr Walia mere bete ke pichche par gaye....Bani came out bringing water....

Pichhe nehi par raha hu Bani, Jai picked up a glass and leaned to smell the gajra around her jura, this is his kiss as Krishna terms it, hamare samne mummy ko kiss nehi kar sakte hai na, isiliye gajra ka smell lete hai, wohi gajra wohi phool roj roj smell lene ka keya hai? Her brothers agreed, itna saal ho giya lekin abhi bhi papa, mummy ke upar latoo hai, their know the story how these two got married, how their hatred turned into love...Having seen Pia, Veer sometimes thought how a man like Jai Walia fall for someone so like Pia, who does not know her mind, cannot put two thoughts together but then maybe it is just the hormones playing havoc...Veer peeped, so he has taken his smell that mean both him and mummy their moods are okay as otherwise when they have their fights she doesn't wear her gajra and he doesn't lean to smell, now their fight is mostly regarding the children, Atharva is good for nothing always running behind cars, designing, playing a mechanic, what will happen to my business, Veer is too busy with his music, is desh me keya musicians ka koi kami hai...who will take care of the business I have set up for them....

Leave my sons alone, now mind your daughter instead, kuch jaida hi boyfriends hai uski, din bhar phone ateh rehte hai....mobile bill bar rahe hai....just check it out...

Tum ho na kheech kheech karne ke liye...Jai would retort, next two days no speaking terms then back to square one, the whole family knows their routine, ladai me bhi undono ka pyar ubhar atah hai....commented Masi

Pyar ka toh pata nehi humlogo ko messenger jaroor banna parta hai, carrying his message to her and her message to him...Krishna observed….

Veer climbed down the stairs, Areh Bani raat ko khane me keya hai, Veer heard Aditya uncle asking his mother...

Aapke liye khichri...

Phirse khichri? I cannot eat it anymore....

Aapka pet? Bani asked

Theek ho giya...I want some tandoori chicken, nehi toh nehi khaunga...

Lekin Aditya uncle, I mean....

Aditya mai tumhare liye bana doongi chicken tandoori, intervened Jigyasa...

While Bani bit her lips to control her laughter seeing Aditya expressions, Jai Walia quickly said, he will have khichri, I was not feeling too well in the evening Bani....

Mera pet abhi najuk hai, Aditya added....

Jigyasa Auntie, Tony will help you, tell him to take out the chicken which came fresh from the market...

Papa Veer called out....mujhe signature chahiye....

Jai frowned....you want to go for that tour...

Ji....

Are you sure....

Yes Papa......

For how many days?

15 days atleast.....

15 din you will do nothing but sing, and stay out of the house....Bani dekho tumhara beta keya bol raha hai, how will he survive, adha cheez toh khata nehi hai....Bani kuch bolo bhi....

Mr Walia in two days time he will be 21...jaane bhi dijiye...

Tum uska suitcase dekh lena, kuch khane ke saman de dena....bhuka rahega nehi toh….

Bhuk lagega toh kha lega, aur waise bhi Mr Walia you were thinking of sending him abroad to study, tabh mai thori na saath jati….

Phirse shuru ho gaye aap dono…Krishna observed…

Jai walked into his study, opened the form and took out his pen, as usual he wanted to strike out the parents option and sign in as gaurdian but that was already stricked out instead the other option was highlighted, Jai blinked, then went through the form issued by Channel V….Bani Bani he called out….

Abhi ayi, keya hai Mr Walia, what is it now…he showed the form…

Kaha sign karna hai, she asked…

Have a look Bani…he pointed out….Bani read and then looked upto him…their eyes exchanged a quick thought…Veer was standing at the other corner fiddling with curios….

Dekho beta Veer… Jai stated, you have made a decision, I, I mean before I sign I would like to inform Pushkar first, I mean your parents, it is not fair to change something without their knowing….

Kiyu Papa, as per my knowledge the document you made Piama and Pushkar papa sign that after 21 years I can take my own decision, I have taken my own decision…

Who I mean who told you about that document, Jai gave a quick glance toward Bani…

Why Piama said because of the document she was forced to sign, I am here, I may have been small but there are incidents which leave a deep mark on you, I remember you had sent me to her….the horrible time I had…..

See she is your mother, Mr Walia had taken that stand because that time….

I know Ma you do not have to explain, during my last visit Pushkar papa had told me everything, why the marriage broke up and why you had to do what you did….

You are not yet 21 beta, as per that paper it says…

Papa keya pharak parta hai, after two days I will be 21, unfortunately that day I have to leave the city and before leaving I have to submit this no objection form from my parents, in two days do you think my decision will change, will I cease to become your son…

Yes you are right beta, keya pharak parta hai, ayo Bani let us sign……the end……..

Dear Friends,

This is the longest FF I have ever written till date. I have given enough material to make a serial to last for 2 years at least because the amount of story they show in one episode, the speed can put a snail into shame. Considering incorporation of songs and marriage / festival situations I think it is good enough to last atleast beyond 2 years….I would not say I have done a superb job but good enough and definitely better than what the KS team in real has offered us.

I have kept the story close to reality. No black magic and super humans as bahus managing house, businesses, giving away crores of rupees while Jai Walia and other men stand like statues, smile and dance. Even Rano / Rashi have got enough role instead looking like twin in the serial standing side by side doing nothing other than smiling. Ranveer has got few dialogues to speak instead managing his hair or no hair style. I did think of kidnapping of children how Jai and Bani rescues them but then BT has shown us enough. Purva marrying Daksh which many of us may not support but thinking of practices in the society and the practicality I showed it that way. All love stories may not have happy ending…in this world of hatred, I tried to show how people adjust and be happy, Bani is still putting up with Jigyasa and vice versa…Jai Walia making Ranveer the director of his company but not trusting him etc etc….In some mission Jai and Bani were successful and in some they were not…

Like all my stories this story has also come to an end as I believe that all stories have a life, and I will tell you one till I can hold your interest, beyond that no point stretching. I hope you have enjoyed it….love Tin

OMG....Tinny this was really unexpected.....i cant beleive you finished this FF...