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moonlitnight thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
so both are falling for each other
great part πŸ‘ πŸ‘
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
hay hun.. great part.. 😭 // awwwnnn so our JB falling for eachother.. lol.. continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Diey... lovely part!!! ... Jai is such a blunt he told Ranveer everything... πŸ˜† ... well except for the top secret parts πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ... do cont soon... πŸ‘ ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64

Awesome part Diey!
πŸ‘
Mimichou?! Sweet! 😳 πŸ˜†
OH no what has Bani done?! She hurt Jai! 😭 😭
The flowers & letter was soo sweet! 😳
She has thought up of a nice way to manao him! 😳 πŸ˜‰
So Bani has admitted to having feeling for him n she's gonna tell him? Yayyyyy! πŸ˜†
Do contiue soon.

V...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Diey,

Sorry for being late, loved the update, the leg pulling, teasing by Jai.

I like the nickname Mimichou...cute! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

I am surprised that Bani told Ranveer that she has feeling for Jai and also she told Jeena...I am glad she left Akki for Jeena though...And Jeena is already calling Jai jiju...cute!

Very nice update! Loved it! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
Just read all the parts.. loved the realtionship Bani and Jeena had.. one thing i dont understand why everyone calls Bani "Mrs. Dixit.." and she dint even bother to correct them.. initially i thought that may be she dint want to tell them that she is not married but after readign coming parts it was not the case then why?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
Hey there just caught up with the last couple of parts. Really enjoyed reading them both. Written really well. πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Bani's fear of flying was captured really well πŸ‘ ...poor girl thought the plane was gonna crash.
Jai helped out by talking to her and so..and almost ended up kissing. 😳 She thought she dreamt that...i did too for a minute but it did happen. Sparks are flying left right and centre already! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Now about the room Jai booked...Bani was a little mean there. 😑 😑 Blasting off at Jai, thinking he purposely booked one room. But it had separate rooms within. Jai is all upset by what she said...judging his character. πŸ˜•

Now she is going to have to say sorry...she's gonna cook for him. Well this will be intersting. She has alreay discussed with Ranveer and Jeena...how she feels about him...atrraction hai 😳

Looking forward to the next part...Bani's apology. πŸ˜‰
πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Tazoo
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Thank you all for your comments.
It means a lot to me.
Sorry i didn't update for a while but it's just that i'm busy with my coming examens.
I promise i will update when my exams will be over.
That means not before the 11th june.
I will continue to come in IF to read the updates and ffs.
But i promise, i'll be back with the next part soon.
Take care all of you. πŸ€—
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: chander992

gr8 part.... thank you
awww..she fallin for him.. yes
very cute...she's cookin his fav dishes....yummm...
cont soon Thank you for commenting.

Originally posted by: hipreet

great part thank you
poor jai Yeah i know Bani was too much.
plz cont soon


Originally posted by: moonlitnight

so both are falling for each other i guessπŸ˜†
great part πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Thank you
plz cont soon

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part...
cont.sooon thank you

Originally posted by: phool527

hay hun.. great part.. 😭 // awwwnnn so our JB falling for eachother.. lol.. continue sooon Thank you and yes they are falling for each other.

Originally posted by: tam2

Hey Diey... lovely part!!! Thank you ... Jai is such a blunt he told Ranveer everything... πŸ˜† ... well except for the top secret parts πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† if he had said the top secrets part, i think he will dead right nowπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... do cont soon... πŸ‘ ...

Originally posted by: Vedo

Awesome part Diey!
πŸ‘ Thank youuuuuuuuuπŸ€—
Mimichou?! Sweet! 😳 πŸ˜† Yeah i love this nicknameπŸ˜†
OH no what has Bani done?! She hurt Jai! 😭 😭 I know it wasn't nice from her
The flowers & letter was soo sweet! 😳
She has thought up of a nice way to manao him! 😳 πŸ˜‰ She's smartπŸ˜‰
So Bani has admitted to having feeling for him n she's gonna tell him? Yayyyyy! πŸ˜† I don't know if she will confess right nowπŸ€”
Do contiue soon.

V... Thank you so much for commentingπŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Diey,

Sorry for being late, loved the update, the leg pulling, teasing by Jai. Thank you

I like the nickname Mimichou...cute! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Yeah me tooπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

I am surprised that Bani told Ranveer that she has feeling for Jai and also she told Jeena...I am glad she left Akki for Jeena though...And Jeena is already calling Jai jiju...cute! We can say Ranveer is Bani's best friendπŸ˜‰ Jeena is a cute girlπŸ˜›

Very nice update! Loved it! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
πŸ‘ Thank youuuuuuuuu

Originally posted by: gaurifan

Just read all the parts.. loved the realtionship Bani and Jeena had..They share a speciel relationshipπŸ˜ƒ one thing i dont understand why everyone calls Bani "Mrs. Dixit.." and she dint even bother to correct them.. initially i thought that may be she dint want to tell them that she is not married but after readign coming parts it was not the case then why? It's just i didn't notice earlier, so Bani is single she isn't married. Sorry for the misunderstanding.

Originally posted by: Taz234

Hey there just caught up with the last couple of parts. Really enjoyed reading them both. Written really well. πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank youuuuπŸ€—

Bani's fear of flying was captured really well πŸ‘ ...poor girl thought the plane was gonna crash. Yeah, i don't like flying too
Jai helped out by talking to her and so..and almost ended up kissing. 😳 She thought she dreamt that...i did too for a minute but it did happen. Sparks are flying left right and centre already! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
It wasn't a dream at all, it was for real lolπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Now about the room Jai booked...Bani was a little mean there. 😑 😑 Blasting off at Jai, thinking he purposely booked one room. But it had separate rooms within. Jai is all upset by what she said...judging his character. πŸ˜• Yeah i know she was so mean. Poor Jai he didn't deserve all this

Now she is going to have to say sorry...she's gonna cook for him. Well this will be intersting. She has alreay discussed with Ranveer and Jeena...how she feels about him...atrraction hai 😳 Yeah it's difficult to not be attracted by JaiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Looking forward to the next part...Bani's apology. πŸ˜‰
πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Tazoo Thank you for comentingπŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
First of all, sorry for the delay.
Please overlook at the mistakes my english is so bad so please forgive me for that and for the boring part i couldn't do write well this timeπŸ˜•

Part 6

Bani was very stressed. How would she face him. She was so wrong.

She was wearing a simple but very beautiful salwar kameez. It's a cool blue tie and dye work Kurti has a splendid neckline adorned with Aari mesh having shiny silver sequins in between. The outlines of the necklines are highlighted with copper colored beads. The Dupatta has a big tie and dye circle in white and the Churidar is plain cool blue.

It's strange, it was the first time in her life that Bani wanted to look beautiful for someone. Even if she was beautiful naturally, she adds some khol, blush, gloss and a blue bindi. She was perfect, she hasn't did too much but she was beautiful.

Finally, she was ready but her heart didn't want cooperate. She needs courage and for that she decided to watch the video of the song bhool bhulaiyaa with Akshay Kumar.

20 minutes later, Bani was on the beach looking for Jai. She spots him near to the rocks. She goes to him and calls him by his last name. But Jai didn't budge, he was still watching the horizon.

Bani: M. Walia, I'm very sorry, I didn't…

She was cut off by Jai before to finish her sentence.

Jai: Bani, please don't say anything right now, I want to show you something.

Bani took place near to Jai and was trying to guess what he wanted show her. If Jai called her at 6:00pm, it was for see the sunset. He didn't know why, but he wanted share this beautiful moment with her. When you watch a sunset, it's always relaxing, we forget all our worries and problems. We are in peace, this feeling is so good. We're just hypnotized by the view and nothing else.

Bani was watching Jai by the corner of her eyes, he seemed so relax and very handsome. His eyes were full of emotions. At this moment, she just wanted to be in his arms in order to be more close to him. They were watching the sunset in silence. Jai broke the silence.

Jai: I don't know why but I wanted see the sunset with you. Usually, I don't share this kind of moment with anyone. I'ts the only moment where I can find peace, with the sunset it's like if all my hurt and pain are taking away from me to go behind the sea with the sun.

Bani: Jai…

Jai: No Bani, let me finish please. I heard a lot about you from my parents and Ranveer. I knew you were different from other women and when I met you in the office, I knew you were different. I wanted to know you better after all we are partners but it seems I failed once and again. And in the end I'm the one who is hurt.

Bani: It's nothing like this, it's all my fault…

Jai: It's like if I don't have the right to have a good relationship with women other the ones in my family. Once, I believed to have met my soul, I was so in love with Pia.

Jai was now so emotional and Bani was hurt just seeing him in this state. Bani put her hands in Jai face to make him stare at her.

Bani: Jai it's not your fault. I was stupid and too angry. I didn't mind even for a second all the bad things I said to you. I've never been so bad with someone till today. It's not because I hate you or something else. If I'm here right now, it's because I wanted to say sorry. I am very very very very very sorry

Jai: Bani you didn't need to…

Bani: Jai I listened to you now it's your turn to listen.

Jai: ok, sorry

Bani: I realized I acted like a fool. It's just when you are around me, it's like I lose control, I can't think straight. And I think, if I was angry it's also because I regret we didn't kiss each other. Don't say anything. I want to know you and become friends with you. And we will see if in the future we can be more than friends. Just live our life daily, what do you think???

Jai: I don't know, you don't hate me ?

Bani: I never hate you, just tell yourself you met my bad side.

Jai: And I don't want see it anymore, it was so scarry.

Jai and Bani talked about all and anything. They laughed and share a good moment.

Bani: So Jai did you forgive my bad behaviour ?

Jai: Of course, after all a friend didn(t need to say sorry or thank you.

Bani: So I have a surprise for you, it's my gift for a friend.

Jai: What is it ?

Bani: you will see, we just need to go back to our room.

Jai: you know I can look for another room.

Bani: Nahi, Jai, we will share the room. So let's go.

Both of them go back to their hotel room. Bani ask at Jai to close his eyes before to enter in the room. Jai was surprised but decide to listen Bani, he really didn't want to be witness of Bani anger. Bani took him by his hands and make him sit at the dinner table which was on the terrace.

"Now you can open your eyes" said Bani.

Jai open his eyes and was mesmerized by the table decorations and by all the dishes. In the table all his favourites dishes were disposed.

"Waw, it's all my favourites dishes, Bani how do you know" ask Jai.

"Ranveer, help me a lot" answer Bani.

"But, how do you manage to order all this things. Every time I came here for business, I never had the chance to eat these meals." Said Jai.

"Oh no, I cooked myself, it was for apologize to you. I bought all the necessaries and cook. I wanted to do that for you. So are you ready to take your dinner"

"Sure, I'm so angry"

Bani was anxious, she was waiting for his view about her cooking. Jai decided to tease her and act as if the cooking was bad. He coughed and reach for his glass of water. Bani was stressed like anything.

"Jai kya hua, sab thik to hai na, is the cooking is bad ?"

"Haan, I've never eat something so disgusting"

Bani had tears in her eyes and was trying to not cry in front of him. Jai was feeling bad and decided to not pull her legs anymore.

"Are Bani, why are you crying I was just teasing you. Your cooking is delicious. It reminds me my mum cooking, so good. I didn't know a woman like you know how cook."

"What do you mean by a woman like me"

"Kuch nahi"

"Are bolo, what are you scare of"

"Are Bani, it was a joke. Hmmmmmmm so delicious. You should try."

The dinner gone well, they chat and make their agenda for the next day. They need to be at the conference for their deal. Even if they won't present their project tomorrow, they should to be there for see the other company project. No one can change their project because they were submitted once week before. So no one will have an advantage.

"Thanks for the dinner" said Jai.

"You're welcome, it was my pleasure".

"So we will see tomorrow at the breakfast and Bani don't be late"

"I'm always in time so don't worry"

They wish good night to each other. But Bani kiss him on the cheeks taking him by surprise and lock herself in her room. Jai was shocked by her kiss and go to his room. Tomorrow will be a new day. Both of them take a shower and make themselves comfortable in their bed. They smiled thinking about their day and how they are friends now. They didn't confess to each other, they decide to wait how their relationship will progress. They need to know each other first. Why hurry the thing. They fall asleep and dream of each other.

Sorry, this part wasn't very interesting, so excuse me. I decided to make them keep their feelings for a little time. Please do comments good and bad comments are welcome.

Edited by Miss_Diey - 17 years ago

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