FF - Playing Detective Part E/pg 11 Apr 7 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Hey Kanta!!
I read all the parts. Wonderfully naughty!😉😆
Walia knows how to handle his sherlock holmes in house. At least he only has one to deal with, the other one he is parcelling off to AD😆😆😆.
Thanks, tumne mood accha kar diya!
Bye
Ranjana

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Hello my kantu dearest.. di.
awesome update.
hehe bani is playing detective alright.. but what is jai doing.. spying on his wife.
tsk tsk..
not cool.
continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
hehehe...
Bani is playing detective again. but Jai is playing on her by spying. good going Jai. keep it up
hehehe....baap beti kaam chor. one doesnt want to go office another doesnt want to go school
haila Jai besharam kahika. ur bachchi is very smart. watch ur mouth or u hv to answer some very smart questions 😉 😆
Gr8 part Kanta di 👏
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Hai Divan

Beautiful update 👏

Jai is such a tease 😳

WOnder what Bani and Meers 'talked' about 🤔 😳 ....God she can never give up her jaasosi 😆

Pls cont soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
you know the best part of this cute FF is Meera is not interfering JB and Jai being too naughty, he is flirting with his wife in front of his child 😉......this is very entertaining, please continue...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
If Bani loves playing Bond, then Jai Walia is a notch higher...setting off detectives/security folks behind her 😆 😆 👏 loved how his naughty attitude hasn't diminished at all 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
See, real tycoons know how to keep their wives in check...I like the idea of detectives following Bani - And all the naughty ways he keeps her in check, the are cute and I wish they introduce some humor and romance in KS, like your FFs.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
Awww...That was so cute! Jai is such a teaser...Wonder what happened in the Mandir...I mean, she just went to do arti with Meera? Something's fishy... 😉 And Jai being Jai will deffo find out na? 😉

Excellent part... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the comments...glad you are liking naughty Mr Walia...

Part D Mere Dost, Meri Dosti


At the office, Jai sat around wondering what Bani and Meera are upto. He couldn't hang around either of them or they would get suspicious. Hmm…may be should talk to AD, find out what his thoughts were on Meera…it be good to get Meera fixed up with someone, someone who keep her busy enough not to go around snooping with Bani. A smile lit his face at the thought…two women who couldn't help but get entangled in problems…they seem to have knack for finding some poor soul that needed rescuing. He blew his at the piece of hair falling forward, picked up his cell and dialled AD.

"AD! What' new yaar?"


AD: "I have a bone to grind with you. Where did you find that crazy woman? Meera…she should be called…Adbhootni…she is unbelievable. She thought I was pimp."

Jai laughed, "What did you say to her? She is not bad…come one. She is your Banibhabhi's best friend."

AD: "No way she is bhabhi's best friend…where did she find her."

Jai still laughing, "Actually I found her. I met her at a Mohan's party. She is Mohan's sister."

AD: "She is Mohan's sister. No wonder she is mad. Anybody go mad having that crazy skirt chaser as a brother. Goddamit no wonder she thought I was there to chase up her skirt."

Jai sniggered, "So are thinking of chasing her…"

AD: "No! I am going to keep away from her. She would drive me insane."

"Oh well too bad then…I was going to invite you home for dinner."

AD: "Dinner…chance to sample bhabhi's cooking. Why can't I come?"

"Cause Meera will be there."

"I can put up with Meera for couple of hours. I am coming to dinner…What time?"

"Tonight at seven…and AD…"

"What Jai?"

"Keep your hands off Bani. She is mine."

Laughter, AD: "Ok baba…can I just kiss her on the cheek?"

"No! You can kiss Meera's cheek instead."

Jai ended the call and then dialled Meera. "Hi Meera!"
Meera: "What do you want Jai Walia?"

"Oh come on now Meera…be nice."

Meera: "Nice! I know you are up to something no good. What are you after Jai Walia?"

"Nothing! I thought you might like to come home for dinner, seeing I kind of messed up last night with your and Bani's plan."

Meera: "I am mad at you, Jai Walia for sending that pervert friend of yours in place of Bani…he is worse than you…one track mind all you guys."

Jai chuckling at her ranting, "Come on Meera, stop exaggerating! AD is a gentleman. He would never lay a finger on you."

Meera: "Haan. You don't know your friends! Why do you want me to come for dinner?"

"Because I want to have dinner with two beautiful ladies in my life."

Meera giggling: "Huh…I don't believe you. You are up to something fishy."


"Owww.. Meera. Don't you want to see Bani? Can't a guy do something nice for his wife?"

Meera: "Fine, I will be there."

"Bye beautiful." Jai dialled Bani, "Hi honey!"

Bani: "Mr Walia, how is your day going?"

"Great honey! What about you?"

"Fine. I was just going out shopping with masi."

"Good I caught in time. Listen I invited AD and Meera over for dinner."

"AD and Meera! What are you up to Mr Walia?"

"Tut Bani! Can't we have friends over for dinner?"

"Huh…but AD and Meera. Meera hates AD."

"How do you know Meera hates AD?"

"Well because she called me and gave me an earful about him."

"Don't you think Bani that if they say they don't like each other, than may be they could end up liking each other."

"AD, never. He is such flirt."

"Well I already told them so I can't back out now."

"Fine. I have to go. Maasi is waiting. Bye Mr Walia."

"Bye honey."

Jai put his cellphone away and opened up his laptop. The thought of the coming evening had him smirking away as he opened up his laptop and started to do real work. Should be an interesting evening to see AD and Meera trying to get along and Bani will be where she should be, right beside him in the house.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Hey, I am first...

((AD: "I have a bone to grind with you. Where did you find that crazy woman? Meera…she should be called…Adbhootni…she is unbelievable. She thought I was pimp." ))

You cracked me up with that one, she thought he was a pimp...

JW is matchmaking now, he he! This is to be seen...And Bani looks like she is already ticked off - I think Mr. Walia is going to be in a soup with three people now! Beware Jai...

-- S

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