SS: Manzil - Page 3

Hiya Twinkle baby,😛

Your story OMG OMG...I'm just drooling over it agen & agen 😉.It was soo well written..Beautiful, Awsome , Mindblowing & so on! 😃

U just loved the way you picturized the whole story...Very very well written..Simply perfect!! 👏 👏 👏

Awww Kish & Atharva are back..My cutie pies 😭 😭 😭 OMG..JW was soo romantic 😳 😳 My heart is beating twise faster then usual 😳 😳

Thank you soo much for a beautiful journey of Two love birds...WE need more now..(Being too greedy 😆 😆)

Love

Raisa😳

o godddddddddddddddddd it was just beautiful.. i only have to say .. if ekta consulted you before carrying her story further... then KS would have different face then now .. it was really lovely..

Took me three go to read it...now I know what its like to read a long SS. But loved it...good treatment of JB reunion courtesy of beti...and then the nice treat of JW seeing his 2 boys come into the world...very good Twinkel... 👏 👏 👏

Twinkle 😊

I am sp proud of you Dear 👏 👏 👏 . You have written such a beautiful SS 😉 and it was such a great pleasure to read it.

Loved the ways you presented the characters and they are so real-like in life. Thanks for also keeping the 'bad' characters away and keeping it as a sweet and touching story.

Hope you write another one soon. Just amazing!

Must thank Preetu also for the beautiful title.

19th floor 6th room room no.2006 that was too much 😳 😳 ,gr8 ss 👏 👏

Beautiful SS
loved it.
the whole concept of JB reunion....they becoming one for sake of Ganga.....JB starting a new life away from Walia Clan...great
👏

Hey Twinkle, a brilliant SS 👏 👏

Loved the way you portrayed their emotions ans a lovely reunion..in fact you gave a golden touch to it by portraying the room number as June 19th...

So Ganga became the backbone of their relation along with the twins..it was nice of you to show finally Jai being a part of his kids delivery and their upbringing along with Bani..A complete happy family..and the most sweetest was that you got Krishna n atharva back..

A great one dear and looking forward to the next..
Rama

Originally posted by: Jai & Bani

Hiya Twinkle baby,

Your story OMG OMG...I'm just drooling over it agen & agen .It was soo well written..Beautiful, Awsome , Mindblowing & so on!

U just loved the way you picturized the whole story...Very very well written..Simply perfect!!

Awww Kish & Atharva are back..My cutie pies OMG..JW was soo romantic My heart is beating twise faster then usual

Thank you soo much for a beautiful journey of Two love birds...WE need more now..(Being too greedy )

Love

Raisa

Yikes! 'OMG OMG'...Was it really that good? Thanks Raisa... 😳 (You know why I put that emoticon on... 😉 )
You're allowed to drool, dream whatever...But not allowed to be greedy for another one... 😆 I just can't do it...This took me 9 whole days to complete to be exact... 😆 (I wrote it allll out first and THEN typed it after I got my computer back in my new house... 😊 )

Originally posted by: gaurifan

o godddddddddddddddddd it was just beautiful.. i only have to say .. if ekta consulted you before carrying her story further... then KS would have different face then now .. it was really lovely..

Wow...Thank you so much... 😊
Sighs...IF only Ekta contacted me... 😆 😆 😆 Loved that line... 😃 But problem is...IF she ever did consult it with me...I probably would have gone the Ekta way as well... 😕 You know...'Ekta Influence'... 😉 😆

Originally posted by: divan

Took me three go to read it...now I know what its like to read a long SS. But loved it...good treatment of JB reunion courtesy of beti...and then the nice treat of JW seeing his 2 boys come into the world...very good Twinkel...

Oh god!! You here Di!😲 I'm so embarrassed! I really am... 😳 Compared to some of what you people write...This was nothing... 😳
Thanks so much... 😃

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Twinkle

I am sp proud of you Dear . You have written such a beautiful SS and it was such a great pleasure to read it.

Loved the ways you presented the characters and they are so real-like in life. Thanks for also keeping the 'bad' characters away and keeping it as a sweet and touching story.

Hope you write another one soon. Just amazing!

Must thank Preetu also for the beautiful title.

Sangs Di! So glad to see you here... 😃 And even gladder that you liked it so much... 😳 I tried my best to keep them 'real-like' as you said...Just wanted a story where the ending 'could've' been like this...Nothing too impossible for the creatives na? But since they won't do something on these lines... Thought of doing it for them...And giving my friends a treat... 😉

Another one...Phew! I think I'll take a break...Don't know if the a second time will be any better...May turn out worse than expected... 😆

Yes...I give half the credit to Preetu for finding a name for this story...Was going nuts trying to find something that was simple but would hold alot of meaning... 😃

banijai19_life Lol...I couldn't think of a better way to explain this part and so came up with this... 😊 It's sort of weird if you think about it... 😆

Thanks... 😃

ridhijai Thanks so much...Yeah, I tried something a little different...Usually Massi and the rest of the Walia people are always around the couple... 😕 So thought why not try and 'seperate' them from the WHOLE lot in one go... 😆

Originally posted by: sanam84

Phad liya maine...finally

Very nice story with all the masala it was funny, cute, sensuous and at the beginning a lil sad…I mean he cried into the pillow…to main sad to houngi na aaawww but that was so cute...hiding n crying...

the beach part was awesome...you described all the emotions so well...haila I too wanna make a sand castle...bada maza aata hai...but zayada maza aata hai doosro ka todne main... i know its mean but fun

So u got back Krishna n Atharva in krish n AW...that was so cool...n haila the best was the room no etc...June 19th bana diya...kya solid dimaag lagaya baap

All in all a great work

I hope you write another one soon.

LMAO...Typical Sam hey? I was thinking what kind of a comment I might get from you...Nothing different at all... 😆 Totally cracked me up...First paragraph HAD to include Your Man hey? 'Crying and hiding'...And you going 'awww'...Had me in stitches at 1 in the morning...Good one Sam...🤣 Well then...Glad I could make you 'sad'... 😉 😃

Sandcastles...Yeahhhh...It's awesome na? Used to love making tunnels and turrets...Cool stuff indeed... 😃 Your Man had a good time there I'm proud to say... 😉 (How can I even say that? Your Man in MY SS? 😕 So not fair!! 😉 )

LMAO...Solid dimaag...Oh god... 😆 It just popped into my head...Room number bla bla...Number bla bla room...Bla bla floor... 😆

Thanks Sam...Feeling special now...You liked it...I'm going 'awww' now... 😃

But DON'T hope for another one...I'm half dead with writing this... 😆

ofcourse Thanks so much... 😃 I wanted KW AW back at any cost and the only way of doing that was to bring it back in my own SS...I still imagine what it would've been like if AW and KW were still alive today na? I mean...They would've been two older brother and sister for little Ganga...If only... 😭

Room Number 6/19...Yeah...It was a weirdish idea... 😆

hi,twinkle superb ss 😃 very sweet, loved the way you bought krishna and atharva back 😃 and more importantly i loved the way finally jw was with bani when she gave birth to the 2 twins 😃

continue soon 😃 😃