SS: Manzil - Page 2

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i am sooo gna be back!

let me do my hair.. 😆

WOw twinkle, Very nice SS
it's lovely to emagine them as a happy family as we wont get to see that

thank you!
bye
Ranjana

haila... that was grt... mindblowin
continue soon plz.......

it was jussttttt mindblowing 👏

😲 1st omg u wrote a SS/FF?! 😲

Amazing work! loved reading it.. i was killing myself when Jai said he raped Bani 🤣🤣🤣

liked the way you wrote about the children and all the relationships! 👍🏼

now u have to continue 😆 i mean u cant leave it as that 😆

Henna x

Originally posted by: j&b84

Wow Twinkle20 gr8 ff, liked it very much. hope u write more in future

Thanks dear...I'm glad you enjoyed it...😊 More in the future? Let's see.... 😉

Originally posted by: divya_123

wow awesome . damn good SS dear
really liked the entire thing.
now one can say that this is ur first SS .

you penned it down so well. and the story line was just perfect.

hoping to read some more SS/FF from you.

Really? No one will be able to tell it's my first? Coooool! I mean this coming from an awesome author like you...I feel honoured... 😳 😃
Thnaks so much Divs... 😃
But please please don't hope for more...Making this storyline took me YEARS! I don't think I'll be able to handle another one... 😆

Henna Done with your hair? 😆

culgal86 Thank you... 😊

RANJANA_RRJ Thanks there... 😃 Yeah it's a pity we won't be able to see those five together...Ever... 😭

kitkat_2002 Wow...Thanks so much... 😃

aimee Thank you so much... 😛

Originally posted by: Henna 786

1st omg u wrote a SS/FF?!

Amazing work! loved reading it.. i was killing myself when Jai said he raped Bani

liked the way you wrote about the children and all the relationships!

now u have to continue i mean u cant leave it as that

Henna x

So you ARE done with your hair... 😉
Well then firstly...YES! I've written a story!! Shocking hey? Me and a story? Don't go together... 😕 😆

Really? You killed yourself with that part? Awww...Nice to hear made someone 'kill' themselves... 😃 😆

You know that part...I hadn't the smallest idea it would turn out like that...I had totally something else in mind...But OMG...My pen just started writing that instead...First I thought I'd make Jai say what really happened, you know, just simply, spitting it all out...But nups! He wanted to make a dramatic situation there and dragged Bani away...What could I do? 😕 😃

Thanks Henzie...Really glad you liked it... 😳

Umm...Continue? Ermm...I'll tell you what? Why don't you do the honours for me? 😉 You can finish it for me OK? 😃 No way ever again am I going near to another 'writing' session of SSs... 😆 As I said before...This took me YONKS to finish...I'll keep it hanging like that...You know, like in Goosebumps? (Read some of my sister's 😆 ) They keep it 'hanging' without a real ending... 😉

fabulous....like it a lot.......a complete story, had everything in it, drama, romance 😳, humour ( you know I can't stop laughing when I read the part where Jai said two tiny feet will be running around in the house...he was so confident man 😆...hahaha but Mr. Walia was wrong, it supposed to be four feet, not two 😉, also I liked the part when Bani felt bad for Jai not understanding her feelings as a mother......great work twinkle 👏 👏 👏

Thanks alot niruba...Glad you liked it so much... 😃
Actually when you said you liked the part where Jai so confidently says there'll be two tiny feet running around in the house...I read that part again myself... 😳 And OMG! I didn't reaslise WHERE I had taken the story...I mean...Some parts of that paragraph were so shocking me...I couldn't believe I wrote it... 😆

Twinkle,

Been a long time, I read this story on another site, wonderful story and you did a marvelous job....

Posted my comments there too! Lovely.

So it WAS you over there Di... 😉 Thanks alot... 😳