SS#3 Milan(for Khushboo) The End Pg 50 (24/1)

Th is is dedicated to u... Kanta (divan) my second inspiration for writing... second... no third 😆 for u... queen of short stories (as far as i am concerned!!! 😉 😆) also to second inspiration bheegi... and also Kat(Catwoman)

Whenever I feel to write a story, I am thinking to post in this thread... this is the least service i can render to I-F 😆 avoid making so many posts 😆 😆

Short Story 1: Dawn of Realization and End of Dream
Short Story 2: Marital Bliss - Page 9
Short Story 3: Milan: Part 1 - Page 17; Part 2 - Page 19; Part 3A - Page 22; Part 3B - Page 23; Part 4A - Page 25; Part 4B - Page 25; Part 5 - Page 26; Part 6A - Page 28; Part 6B - Page 29; Part 7 - Page 31; Part 8A - Page 33; Part 8B - Page 34; Part 9A - Page 35; Part 9B - Page 37; Part 10 - Page 38; Part 11 - Page 40; Part 12A - Page 42; Part 12B - Page 43; Part 13 - Page 45; Part 14A - Page 47; Part 14B - Page 48; Part 15 - Page 50



i am so irritated with this Bani's character of constant lip-zipped state... 😡 So... 😳

I will write 5 parts: In the perception of some of the characters

Good title...Abhilasha.

Great job with Bani...we want to see this cool and confident Bani...tell the man what their love meant to her.👏

Wonderful dialogues....👏

when the next part this is really good stuff update soon

Originally posted by: divan

Good title...Abhilasha.

Great job with Bani...we want to see this cool and confident Bani...tell the man what their love meant to her.👏

Wonderful dialogues....👏

i thot it was filmy when i read he whole part second time 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Heartbreak

when the next part this is really good stuff update soon

thanks for reading... 😊 arey yaar... to type this part... it took me 2 days... if i start writing ff, u ppl will wait for 1 month for 1 update... 😆

Filmi dialogues chaiye...in real life you'd be at his throat screaming obscenities....... 😆

Originally posted by: divan

Filmi dialogues chaiye...in real life you'd be at his throat screaming obscenities....... 😆

thats true... y'day i went to attend a marriage reception.... in the presence of the speakers and music, i needed to shout a lot that my throat.... dont ask me..
i always wonder how Ashwini maintains her throat condition in spite of shouting in all the scenes except that with karuna..😆

Great job Abhilasha 👏 👏 👏
Very well thought of and very well written.

Hope to see you writing more.

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Great job Abhilasha 👏 👏 👏
Very well thought of and very well written.

Hope to see you writing more.

thank u dii... 😃

You are welcome dear. 😊

But do start writing another one. NOW. 😃

Abhilasha
that was wow! well written and apt.. its high time bani did somehtign like that.... it was a good read.
love
kamy