FF-The Flowers of Spring, Ch 10 pg21..end - Page 17

The ending was penned simply yet it touched my heart. The bonding between father and daughter and the daughter's innocence and love for her mother was heartwarming. There is enough sadness in reality, so I would like to assume the best for all three of them. Jai will marry Bani and then take her aborad for the best treatment possible and things would be alright. Would love it though if you oculd write down an epilogue.

eeeeeeesssssshhhhhhhhhh.. yeh kya tin.. u cant end like this.. yes we do want bani alive indeed.. but the reality is.. not everyone lives in these cases.. it is god's will to whom he wants and wen.. kehte hai na that no matter how many surgerys u get done if a person has been called they will eventually leave.. and if they r not called.. it doesnt matter then if they get no treatment at all cuz they will surely then live... so i dont noe watz going on in ur mind.. both endings are accepted by me.. although im sure not everyone agrees with me.. sooo maybe u shud just go with bani living... btw ur gonna write it in the epilogue for us right???? i hope so... but im still sad ur ending it.. this was a beutiful FF..

i loved the ending simple and beautiful and as for bani should be alive or not then i would only say that as it is we see so many lives taken due to accident or disease so let there be some hope through your story that miracles do happen

but wat had happened to bani
why did she drop jeeya with jai
many unanswered questions
plz write an epilogue
plzzzzzzz

Tin,

I have seen few people here who are living very healthy life after the treatment.
One of them was my son's soccer coach...
I didn't know until the end of the season... that he had cancer.... When I found out I felt so proud for him.

Please give happy ending in a epilouge..

Great update! Happy ending to me ;) Thanks

Well Tin, caught up on the last two parts and am glad you kept the ending open coz otherwise it would've seemed too contrived. Not everyone can subscribe to an Ekta Kapoor kind of tacky thought process. It reminded me of the film Milli. Looking forward to your next FF. Knowing you the wheels are already moving.
Somali

I am a bit confused,, when you started the ff you claimed how it made you angry that bani [in ks] being sick just dumps her child on meera and jai and doesn't fight for her life,,,and how even the poorest of person would fight for there life and well I thought in your ff bani was doing the same,, becuz she is in Shimla /Narkhanda,, obviously not being treated and waiting for her death,, after giving Jeeya to Jai ,, if I misunderstood then please do let me know ,, was she getting treatment ? and I thought she said 3 months cuz she doing treatment and she will come back after it,, I am confused

But other than my confusion , I liked the ending how jai and jeeya were impatient to meet bani and finally how they meet and he shows bani hope,, hmm I would imagine,, their hope and faith in each other ,, brought bani back to life and they live with jeeya, together, forever

Very nice ending Tiny. If you killed off Bani, you would have upset half the readership 😆 and making her all healthy right away would have been kind of like a predictable ending. As usual, you turned out a winner.
👏 👏 👏

Der Friends,

Many of you are unhappy with the ending and would love an epilogue. To be very frank I do not know what to write in the epilogue. As I did not want to write about death and at the same time if I write everything is well and normal happy ending, it would have diluted the essence of the story...as Somali said like Milli I kept the ending open and given enough hints to keep the hope alive, in a cold winter afternoon, Bani half lying in the dark room suddenly gets a shock, the room is filled with sunlight and bright flowers and not to say about the sight of the two persons who mean everything to her in this world....

I did give a hint that Bani went for treatment, the appointment she had for which Yash went alongwith her but to make her live in Mumbai would have been expensive and after 3 months would Bani have gone to bring Jeeya back, I guess so, if Jai had not come yes, she wanted Jai to know his daughter, I mean get to know that he has a daughter by himself, from within, develop a feeling for the girl...if she would have gone and said to him that this is your daughter, his defences might have been up, he may not have accepted and Bani had no idea as to what Jai's personal life was, she also did not want to disturb it...Though I hate this mahanta act they show in KS forever sacrificing but to be very frank if you care about a person, you will hate to hurt him or her...you would want make that person understand the situation in a subtle manner, specially after so many years....I hope I have been able to clarify your queries...love Tin