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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Guys ...


I know I'm very bad ... ... I haven't updated in ages .... 😆 ... I'm extremely sorry about it ... but I couldn't really help it ... was very busy with work and stuffs ... next part will be the last part of this FF ... and I'm trying to put in all the detail I can ... so there isn't any loop holes ... you guys have been very patient .... just wait for a little while and that will be the end on this FF ... I will miss writing as well as reading your comments ...... but what to do the FF has to come to an end ... 😃😳 ... so do look out for the last part...😃... will try to update as soon as I'm finished with typing up! .... 😃 ...


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Holly ....

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Posted: 16 years ago

itss okk holly

i know work sometimes get too much

update whenever u have time

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Posted: 16 years ago
kya holly.. y u gotta end already yaar. im gonna miss reading this FF.. alhtough u used to update after months.. well ages to be precise.. lmao.. but seriously yaar. post the part soon.. cant wait anymore..
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Posted: 16 years ago
It's alright jaani, we understand. Update whenever you can. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
it alrite tam!
pls ddo take ur time!
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Posted: 16 years ago
pm me as soooooon as u post da last part
pls update soooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
its ok holly...take ur tme n do upate wen u r free
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Holly mere jaan...
me waiting nw yaar please update soon...
yaar just finished my A2 exam and i'm extremly bored abh jaldi se updt and you gived my near;ly a herat attck when i read the note...but its wks nw...plz cont sn
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Posted: 16 years ago
I'm updating after like a month or so ... 😆 ... but was extremely busy... so can't help it .... 😳 ..... anyways I this is the last part of this FF ... 😳 ... thank you for tolerating me ..... 😆 .... today was snowing heavily in UK ... so didn't have work ... hence this update.... 😆 .... all thanks to snow... else it would've been more wait....😆 .... I had fun writing this FF as well as reading all your wonderful comments.... 😃😳 .... I will surely miss reading them .... ... but never mind... ... I just hope you guys will post your comment on this FF for the last time... 😳 ... at least I will know what you thought of it ....😳 .... do excuse the mistake....😳😃 ... and enjoy the last part ....😳 ....

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Last Part ….

There was so much traffic on the road … Jai cursed his fate … he felt like flying in order to reach Bani … alas he didn't have any wings or a plane to fly… Jai laughed at the thought of having wings … he wondered how he would look with wings … he speculate what Bani would say seeing him with wings … Jai shake his head and cleared these thought from his head… what is he thinking … he's gone nuts … and he will soon have to admit to mental asylum if he doesn't see Bani soon … after 2 hours of drive he finally reached his destination … a smile appeared on his lip as he saw the lights of their bedroom was on … that means bani was still awake … he jumped out of the car and walked towards the entrance… while the guard looked shocked at Jai's behaviour … the car's door was left open and the engine was left on too … he tried to call Jai … but Jai was oblivious to his surrounding as there was only one thing in his mind … that is Bani ….

***

'Munna where have you been … I've been trying to call you … your phone was switched off…'

'I'm sorry masi… I didn't realize… ' replied Jai… as he walked towards the stairs to enter his bedroom…

'Jai … bani bimar hai' … hearing masi's words Jai's stopped and looked back saying 'bimar … kya hua hai Bani ko' …

'Munna … she has very high fever… the doctor has just checked her… may be she got scared and she cried so much ... That she fell ill… aare Munna woh tu yeh soch rehi thi kit u ueseh divorce de dega…'

'Divorce!?!?! … Masi yeh aap kya keh rein hai…'

'Haan beta… I tried to make her understand but she wouldn't just listen… tu ek kaam kar… bani ke paas ja … aur ho sake tu uese baat kar… kyun ki uski bukhar ki dawa tu hai…'

Jai just nodded his head and walked towards his room… opening the door his eyes caught the glimpse of a figure … which was lying on the bed lifeless… Jai felt guilty seeing Bani in this condition… it is him who is only to be blamed for her state… she's done so much for him … and in return he only gave her tears and nothing else… Jai sat down on the bed and looked at Bani's pale face… he can see some tear stain on her cheeks… it seems she's crying in her unconscious state… a single tear drop fell from his eyes as well as he muttered 'mujhe maaf kardo Bani' … covering his face with his hands… he felt ashamed of his behaviour and all the accusation that he made against her …

***

Through out the night Jai sat beside Bani and made sure she was sleeping well … he had dubbed a piece of clothing on water and kept it on her forehead so her fever will subside… he had touched her neck and forehead time to time to check her temperature… Masi wanted to spend the night with Bani taking care of her… but when she came she looked through the door and smiled seeing her Munna taking such good care of her bahu… she felt satisfied … it seems everything was alright between her Munna and bahu… she thanked God for his mercy …. And went back to her room closing the door every so slowly….

***

The morning ray hit Jai's eyes and he opened his eyes slowly … he didn't realize when he fell asleep sitting next to Bani… Bani he remembered…. And looked at her … she was snuggling cosily on her bed… and seemed she was sound asleep … Jai touched her forehead and felt her temperature was little down… Jai smiled and kissed her forehead… and tucked her in again … making sure she was covered well…. He went to the bathroom to get freshen up… he came out wearing his white kurta …. And found Bani still asleep… he wondered if this was unusual… he sat next to her… but her breathing was steady and normal…. May be she's weak hence she's sleeping like a log … that remind him she hasn't eaten anything since yesterday… leaving Bani he went downstairs …. And asked Tony to bring some soup for Bani…. Masi was sitting in the dinning area and asked if Bani's temperature has subsided or not….Jai told masi about bani's health and that he felt if she eats something she should be normal ….

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Jai brought the tray in their bedroom and kept it on one side … he sat next to Bani … and caressed her rosy cheeks with back of his fingers … and called out her name slowly… 'Bani… wake up… see I'm here… aren't you going to open your eyes…' Jai landed a small kiss on her cheek …

Bani blinked her eyes twice … as she tried to open them slowly … trying to avoid the hittling sun ray peeping through the window of their bedroom…. 'Jai' she whispered slowly …. Jai's face was very close to her face as he was leaning forward … Bani touched his cheeks…her hot palm holding his rough unshaven cheek … Jai kissed her palm …. Whispering 'I'm sorry baby … I tortured you so much… I behaved like a pig… worse than a monster … I refused to listen… and most of all I made you cry so much …' … he kissed her eyes …. Nuzzling her cheeks with his nose…. Bani's hand went behind his neck holding him tightly as much as possible with her little energy… crashing her bre*** in his chest…. All she could mumble was 'Jai' … before falling unconscious in Jai's arms…..

Jai didn't realize Bani was unconscious as he was overwhelmed by the passion and love by having Bani in his arms… As kept kept on kissing her cheeks and neck … he comprehends Bani's hold on his neck became loose… he frowned … not liking being distant from her hold… he called her out … 'Bani' …. Pulling himself away from her he looked at Bani's face…. It seems she felt in a deep slumber…. His heart raced…. 'Oh God no… Bani …' he panicked and called her name frantically …. 'Please don't leave me Bani…' he cried out loud….

***

Bani was taken to hospital in a hurry…. Jai paced from one corner to the other corner of the corridor …. He was getting way too nervous with anxiety desperation and most of all with the fear of losing the love of his life… without whom the question of his existence doesn't arises….

Masi placed a hand on Jai's shoulder… trying to calm him down… 'Munna … calm down… nothing will happen to Bani … she will be absolutely fine… the doctor had told me last night we might have to admit bani at the hospital as she wasn't sure about Bani's health and wanted to do some test on her… and as it is the doctor's are attending to her… just pray to God our Bani gets well soon… keep faith…'

All Jai could do id to nod his head… and forged a smile on his face trying to look brave…

***

Doctor came out of the examination room with some reports and asked Jai to follow her to the main cabin… 'Please have a seat Mr. Walia…'

'Bani thik tu hai na doctor …' asked Jai with desperation in his voice…

Doctor smiled back saying 'baith jaiyen … aur there's nothing to worry about… you're wife … I mean Mrs. Walia is absolutely fine…. But you have to take extra good care of her… and we'll do her regular check up… and also you have to bring her to the hospital in 7 months time…'

Jai was happy hearing Bani was alright … but he frowned at the idea of brining his wife again to the hospital… 'doctor… I thought you said Bani is fine… I mean regular check is ok… but why do I have to bring her to hospital … is something seriously wrong with my wife… '

'Oh no Mr. Walia … don't get so tensed … women have to come to hospital for their delivery…'

'Delivery' !?!?! said jai creasing his eyebrow ….

'Oh silly me … Mrs Walia is pregnant…. Aap baap banne wale hai…' said the doctor… at that very instant jai's hand flew to his mouth … a smile broke into his face… 'Thank you doctor… oh my God… mein papa …'

Without saying anything else he just ran outside and hugged masi … 'Munna kya hua…' said masi smilingly … she was so happy seeing her munna smiling so broadly… 'masi mein papa banne wala hoon… mein Bani ko dekh kar aata hoon…' …. Jai ran towards bani's room while masi said a silent thank you to the almighty above us all...

***

Jai sat next to Bani on the bed… and caressed her cheeks with the back of his finger 'hey sleepy head…' he whispered in her ears… bani moved a little and opened her eyes… 'Jai' …

'Haan Jai .. tumhara Jai… I love you Bani …. '

'I love you too …' bani said slowly holding his hand that was on her cheek… 'But there is someone else I love … ' he said teasingly… Bani didn't like the sound of Jai loving someone else other then her…. 'kaun' … she whispered with a sadness in her voice….

Jai took bani's hand and placed it on her stomach… and said … 'ish ladki se...'

Bani creased her eye brow… trying to figure out what her husband was implying… 'kaunsi ladki se…'

'Mein apn beti se bohut pyar karta hoon… and she will be with us in 7 months time… Bani you are 2 months pregnant' …. He said with a proud smile on his face….It took couple of second for Bani to comprehend her husband's words… her face broke into a smile as she hugged Jai … 'hamara baccha Jai' ….

'haan Bani hamara baccha… thank you… I'm the most luckiest husband in this world' … whispered Jai buying his face in her long hair…

Bani pulled back and looked at Jai …. Jai lowered his head and devoured Bani's mouth with his lips in a hungry passionate kiss…

***



.... this is the best ending I can think of... thanks for reading and commenting ....😃😳....


Edited by tam2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hai!
tht was so emotional..for a second i acutally thought tht smethng happened to bani!
wow!..a baby!
hai!
there better be an epi now..lolz..
excellent part tam!

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