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Posted: 17 years ago
Tammie.. yaar..

what is this???

u better update tom.. .

coz u r not updating.. today.. got that..

dont do.. waht u did..

last time..

after giving.. promo..

u disappeared.. for.. god knows.. how long..
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better.. see an update.. tom..

or nir not talking to u
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Tam
nice Promo aww so bani gets upset on finding out that someone is trying to harm Jai 😡 hmm i think it should be a female villian 😈 😈
please do update

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
Tam im guessing it is a female
so i think female vilan might do

sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tam2


one more thing do you guys want a male villain or female villain... I will include whichever you want...😃😃😃...so do let me know....Bye....😳😳😳....



HeyTam,

I think a female villain will be better cos I was thinking something really bad I dont want to say it here. Kya sonchenge log😆.

Bye

Ranjana

p.s That was a lovely promo/ short update.

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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful part and promo cant wait to read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey I want female villan 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

waitihng for it ab kay hgoa jb ka milan? ...hopefully...😳😳😳...fingers crossed...😆😆😆...

davia


Originally posted by: Hritzfan

me want a male villian...thanks for letting me know...but I think majority wants female villain... ... so I will try to fit in a male villain in one of the next track...I hope u don't mind...sorry about that......


Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 promo
plz cont soon ...will do ...Thanks for ur comments Jeenal...😃😃😃...


Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

Tammie.. yaar..

what is this??? ...it's a promo yaar...😆...

u better update tom.. ....tomorrow yes I will be updating tomorrow...so chill....😳...

coz u r not updating.. today.. got that.....got it...

dont do.. waht u did.. ...what did I do 🤔 ....

last time..

after giving.. promo..

u disappeared.. for.. god knows.. how long.....yeah good observation Nir...I do disappear after giving promo...🤔 I think I did that twice...😆😆😆...don't worry won't disappear this time...😆😆😆...hopefully I won't ...
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better.. see an update.. tom.. ...yeah update is on it's way tomorrow...😃😃😃...will write it today and post it tomorrow...

or nir not talking to u...no blackmailing Nir......you always do that...ok Fine I will definitely update tomorrow......promise 😃😃😃...


Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

Hey Tam ....Hey Taj...
nice Promo aww so bani gets upset on finding out that someone is trying to harm Jai 😡 hmm i think it should be a female villian 😈 😈 ...female villain......didn't you guys have enough of that in real KS...😆...oh well as majority wants female so will go for female villain...thanks for letting me know...😃😃😃
please do update ...will do...😳

Taj


Originally posted by: SonamKHAN

Tam im guessing it is a female
so i think female vilan might do ...hey Sonam...thanks for letting me know...well villain will make her entry in next part...hopefully she will...😆...

sonam


Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ



HeyTam,...hey Ranjana...

I think a female villain will be better
...ok will give u all a female villain... cos I was thinking something really bad I dont want to say it here. Kya sonchenge log😆....but I want to know...how bad can it be......😆😆😆...tell me na...please...thanks for letting me know ur choice of villain Ranjana...😆....

Bye

Ranjana

p.s That was a lovely promo/ short update.


Originally posted by: amiee

wonderful part and promo cant wait to read more
Thanks Amiee for ur lovely comments...😃😃😃..will be updating tomorrow...


Originally posted by: siumi

Hey I want female villan 😃 😃 😃
...again Female villain...wonder why? 🤔 ... anyways...thanks for letting me know Sukh....😃😃😃...


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you so much guys for all ur comments and a big sorry to Hritzfan....so sorry yaar.... I couldn't include a male villain for this track as majority wanted female... so for one of the future track I will bring in a male villain for sure... I hope that's ok with you.... and here goes the next part...hope it doesn't disappoint you all....by the way all the replies are on pg65...😃😃😃....

Chapter 37

The person and doctor kept the phone down at the same time…

There is this big room without any lights but only candles are lit all around it… there is this small table around which lots of diyas are lit and amidst of the diyas there is this picture … very lovely and innocnt looking picture which has a garland around it…

The person who was sitting on a rocking chair stand up and walked towards that photo… was staring at the pic with so much love and with a very concerned voice started talking to the photo frame…

Person: I'm sorry sweetie… I know my baby what you went through… how painful it was for u to bear all that hurt … but don't you worry… don't you worry at all… I'm there for you and will always be… I will inflict so much pain upon those who tortured you to death that their soul will scream out for mercy… but unfortunately they won't get any… I promise you my dear … I will make sure they don't live in peace… I will snatch away their every single happiness… and they will be left with only tears exactly the way I have… they have snatched my most precious person away from my life and I shall do the exactly same to them…

Just then the phone started ringing again and he picked it up:

Person: yes… oh I see…

Caller: yes mam … you heard me right… I was following Mr. and Mrs. Walia to day to the hospital as per your instruction… but there is a problem… I think Mrs. Walia heard ur conversation with the doctor… I saw her standing outside of Doc's cabin…

Person: don't worry about that… you just wait for my instraction … and take action according to that… saying that he hang up…

Back at the hospital:

The doctor's word kept on ringing on her head…is she day dreaming or what she just heard was true… why did the doctor lie… just then one fo the nurse call out to her….

Nurse: Mrs. Walia. Doctor told me yo give you these file as you left them in his cabin… handing over the file to Bani nursed walked towrds the opposite direction…

Bani took the file and started walking towards the exit… but she was still in daze ... how could this doctor lie to her ... what is his motive behind all these... oh my God...that means that killer woman was keeping an watch on them all along ... she planned everything thoroughly... she must be very dangerous and her intentions are more dangerous... but what does she want from her and Jai...what does this women what to achieve by keeping Jai and her away from becoming Husband and wife in every sense...so many questions are hovering over her mind...what can she do to find out more about this women...oh Go please help me....Bani's thought came to halt as her phone started vibrating...it was Jai calling her...trying to find out why she's taking so long....

she came out of the hospital and walked towards Jai with a blank and expressionless face.... and there she saw him standing rooted next to the car...waiting for her...without thinking about anything more Bani just ran towards him and hugged Jai with her strength as fear of losing him gripped her tightly and started sobbing...

seeing Bani's strange behavior Jai asked:Bani what's wrong...tum row kyun rein ho... kya hua? Batao tu?.... What's wrong? Did someone say something to you… wait a minute did that brainless doctor said something stupid again… iski tu mein… chalo hum apna doctor badal dalte hai… ish doctor par mujhe kuch barosa nahin hai… he is really very weird… Bani first tell me what's wrong… what is it sweetie…

Bani didn't say nothing and her crying wasn't even stopping… passing by people were also looking at them strangely… thinking why is this girl crying… they were stareing at them … wanting to find out what's wrong…

Jai: Bani people are looking at us… they would think I did something to you… come on now plese stop crying and tell me what happened… ok in that case we'll go in the hospital again and see the doctor… come I need to find out what's wrong…

Bani just realised what her behavior has made him say…

Bani: Jai I'm sorry …we don't have to go in as it is I don't think it's necessary…

Jai rubbed her tears off from her cheek and took her inside the car…and he himself also got in…

Jai: now tell me what exactly happened…

Bani didn't wanted to tell him the truth… she knew it after seeing her tears… he would surely murder the doctor instantly if he finds out the truth …so she had to come up with some clever excuse…

Bani: Jai…the thing is I got scared remembering the killer lady… you know the one is after you life… saying that she started crying again… what if she…


Jai: Bani sshhh… please … this is not done… I'm with you at every step of the way honey… this women or any other psycho will not bne able to take you away from me… trust me Bani …now don't pay attention to such useless thing… and now I will drop you home and you will not think about any such stupid things and then cry over it… do you understand me… he made her undestand everything calmly… he took her in his srms and huggede her… just then they got interrapted the phone call… they moved away from each other as Jai answered his mobile…

Jai: yes Rita… yeah I'll be there…thanks for reminding me… you just keep the files ready and I'll be there as soon as possible… and he disconnected the call…

Jai: come on now I'll drop you home and I have to go to office as I have this important meeting otherwise I would've went home with you…

Bani: it's ok Jai… you go and attened the meeting and don't keep your moble turned off please… keep it switched on… so I can call you whenever I want to…

Jai: anything else my princess…

Bani nooded her head in a negative direction as Jai drove towrads Walia mention… sfter reaching there both came out of the car… bani was going passed him just then he held her wrist and pulled her towards him… and placed a kiss on her forehead asking: Bani you ok na…

Bani: I'm fine… you can go now …I'll see you in the afternoon…bye…

Jai: Bani … I think Adi is still in the house just tell him to get the organe file he'll understand… ok…bye and you take care… aur meri Bani ke ankno mein ansoon nahin aane dena… am I clear…

Bani: yes sir… and you too take care of yourself…

Jai smiled and drove away as Bani smilingly went in the house… and started walking towrds Jigs room to meet Aditya as she need to remind him to take orange file with him… she was about to knock on the door when she heard some commotion between Adi and Jigs…

Aditya: Jigyasa please mend your ways and just forget what happened in the past… and don't spoil ur present and future…

Jigs: I know Aditya what you mean… and believe me I'm trying to… believe me I am… I admit I hated Jai's very existance … never wanted to see him happy… or happily married … I just hated him to core…

Bani's heart sank listening to that… she placed her hand on her mouth and rushed out from there towarsd her bedroom… she hurriedly locked the door of her room and collasped on the floor leaning against the door… she started crying again…

Bani: Oh my God… that killer women is Jigyasa Di… how could she even think of killing her own brother… she is after his life… she never wanted me and Jai to be happy… that's why she must have paid the doctor to say all those separation thing to us… oh God how could she stoop so low… that too so much extent that she's ready to kil off her own brother… what do I do now… Jai loves his sister a lot… he won't be able to bear this shock and more importantly he won't blieve me if I say he's sister is after his life… please God help me what do I do…

Back in Adi Jigs' room

Jigs: Aditya I'm not as bad as you think… I may be Jai's step sister but I have a heart too you know… when I came to know of my mother I was so devastated that I went wild and I was filled with so much hatred… I thought because of Jai's mom … our dad betrayed my mom… but the reality was something else… it was my mom who came into Uday Walia's life for his money and status and ruined one loving family… I wasn't aware of all that Aditya… that's why I used to hate Jai … but when mom died she told me everything truthfully… and Aditya I believed her… coz in on'e death bed no-one lies… abd by telling this truth my mom wanted to attain peace…

Jigs: now Aditya you tell me wasn't my hatred for Jai justified? … I know I made mistakes and many times wished for Jai's ill… but believe me I habe changed and after all after so much has happened and even Jai has forgiven me for my stupid mistakes… believe me Aditya I have changed…

Aditya: if you have changed then that's good Jigyasa… otherwise your hatred will only destruction for this family… only destruction… saying that Aditya left from office……


At the office

after the presentation was done Jai was engrossed in Bani's thought and wanted to solve this problem most importantly he need to remove her fear regarding that women ... God know whether this exists or not but he had to find out the truth from Pushkar... so he dialled the police station's number...

constable: hello....police station...

Jai: yes...may I speak to inspector Pushkar Shukla please...

constable: may I know who is this...

Jai: it's Jai Walia...

so the constable handed the phone over to Pushkar....

Pushkar: yes Mr. Walia ... is everything OK....

ok I'll stop here...sorry if it was short...but will cont from here....do let me know how it was....😳😳😳.....


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey tam...........

lovely part..................

whoses the killer lady?????????//

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

sooa tlast bani knwos who si that eprson?

pls cotnineu soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago

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