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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

are cotnineu akrte ho yaa phir meri belen teri peecha aye..

davia

i agree with Davs. after that promo u want us to wait??!!

hey Davdi wait i m coming too

oyyeee Tammyy update karegi ya nehi batao. this is last warning 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

i agree with Davs. after that promo u want us to wait??!!

hey Davdi wait i m coming too

oyyeee Tammyy update karegi ya nehi batao. this is last warning 😆



So much Dhamkies!!! ... not fair...😭... chalo koi baat nahin...dair ho gayein yaar... 😆...maaf kardena.... sorrrrrrrrry....sorrrrrrrrrrrry.....aur kitna sorry bolu....I think that's enough.... right now I have to go out with my mom.... and i'll be back in 2 hours...and then update....well itna intezar tu karsakte ho na... since u guys have waited for so long...u can wait for 2 hours as well 😉 ... will be right back.... By the way Thanks for all ur dhamkies, warnings and Davia's belan ...😆...

Seee u all in 2 hours...😳



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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Hey Tam!!

Yeh theek nahin hai, na insaafi hai. Promo dikhlakar behlaana chaahti hai? I want update😭.But the promo is good!! and it looks like you are answering my question.

bye
Ranjana

Rona nahin rona chup ho ja meri shona....😆... Aaare yaar mein aanrein hoon na... bas 2 ghante aur...uske baad will update.... By the way Ran Thank you yaar so much You didn't give me any dhamkies or warning....😆... so sweet of you...😳


Originally posted by: SonamKHAN

very sweet promos plz update
sonam 😭 😭

Sonam don't cry yaar... otherwise I'll start crying as well 😭.... will be updating soon... 😆...


Originally posted by: livelikeaqueenn

Amazing story pls cont ....Thanks for ur lovely comments...will do...😃


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhijai

hi I am back sorry didn't comment earlier...went into silent mood for few weeks 😆 ...welcome back from ur silent mood...😆..
Awesome updates and like the promo ....Thanks Ridhi...
I am eager to know who is behind Jai's accident and what that person wants.
Jai and Bani so sweet like the way their relationship is working out...all thanks to Pushkar and Daksh
plz cont. soon...will do...thanks for ur comments...


Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

Hey
nice promo 👏

plz update soon ...Thanks Taj...glad u liked it...will update soon...


Taj



Originally posted by: Je_aime

continue soon. Cant wait for the real update...And can we have a veryyyy longgggg please 😳 😳 ...thanks for ur lovely comments...will update as soon as possible...Thanks😃


Originally posted by: siumi

wow 😳 😳 😳 Jai naughty naughty 😆 😆
update soon 😃 😳 ....Thanks will do...😃


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
I'm sorry I haven't replied to all of u individually 😕... but my whole heartedly thanks to all my wonderful friends and readers 😃.... Davia, Nikita, Taj, Sonam, Tropa, Ranjana, Jeenal, Phool, Dil, Nir, Simui, ja_aime, Ridhi, livelikeaqueen...... 🤗

Thank you guys so much for all ur wonderful comments and Thanks for waiting for the update...I really appreciate it a lot...I was a little busy...That's why couldn't update...but will update today for sure...no more waiting 😆... once I update will let u all know by PM... 😃

Bye... 😳
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
arre chaldi karo nah jaan! i can't wait to read the next part! 😳 😃
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Once again sorry for keeping you guys waiting....and here goes the next part.... ab gali mat dena...😆...sorry keh diya na...😆...and no dhamkies ...😆....enjoy this part...and do leave ur comment...and dhamkies are also most welcome...😆...

Jai felt like strangling Anu… who is totally unaware of the negative effect of her positive thought on Jai… only Jai knows what he'll go through once they got back home… Jai came out of his thought as both doctor and Bani came out of the examining room……………………………………………………………………………………

Chapter 33


Jai drove back home with Bani and Anu… this was his chance to talk to Bani and say sorry to her… but Thanks to Anu… Bani's anger level has increased…

At the living room everyone was sitting down as they were getting entertained by Rano… she was just cracking some of her jokes and making everyone laugh…Just then Anu, Bani and Jai walked in …

Masi: Aare beta tum log aan gayen… Bani ab teri tabiyat kaisie hai bahu… doctor ne kuch kahan kya…

Bani: Masi mein bilkul thik hoon aur chinta ki koi baat nahin… saying so she went and hugged Rano and asked how everything was…

Bani: Masi ab log bait kar baat kijein mein lunch serve karwati hoon…

Masi: aare bahu rook mein bhi tere saath chalti hoon… with that Masi and Bani left towards kitchen while Jai stared at her…

Rano: hey Jiju… you can check out Di later…come first talk to me… aare apki Sali hoon…kuch to respect dikhao… at this comment of Rano Jai turned and smiled at Rano…

Jai: tu Saliji kaise hain aap… aur itne dino baad hamari yaad kaise aangaein… waise zahir si baat hai aapko aapki 'UNKI' yadon se phoorsat mil gayein…hmm… (he meant Pushkar)…

Rano: jiju just shut up … just then Anu butt in…

Anu: mamaji yeh aap unki kinki baat karrein hai… yeh unki kaun hai… aare yaar Rano tujhe kiski yaadon se phoorsat nahin hai yaar… how come you don't tell me anything…

Rano: Anu dekh tu abhi tak bacchi hai… sari baat bachon ko samajh mein nahin aati… isi liey maine tujhe nahin batayan…

Anu: aacha mein bacchi hoon… aisa kaise ho skta hain …mein college jati hoon aur bacche college nahin jate…

Rano: Anu chup!!!!! Chal hum tere room mein jaa ke baat kartein hain …as it is I need some notes from you… Bye Jiju you can now go to kitchen and check out on ur wife… Jai laughed at Rano's comment and went to his room freshen up thinking only if Rano knew what he's going through…

Anu's Room:
Both Anu and Rano were sitting on the bed and started talking to each other Rano: Did you close the door properly……

Anu: haan meri ma… ba batao aisi kaun si zaroori baat hain …haan…

Rano: Anu mujhe tujhse yeh poochna hai ke kya aaj tujhse Moksh milne aayan tha?
Anu: haan… this morning I was helping mami with her saree and then I got a called from Moksh and he said he wanted to meet me so I went outside to see him… and when I came back strangely something happened to mami …we even went to doctors to make sure everything was fine with her…

Rano: ok ur are confusing me… first tell me kya Moksh ne tumse kuch kahan…

Anu: haan… he just came to pick up some of the notes from me and that's it…

Rano disappointedly asked kya usne aur kuch nahin kahan……

Anu: nahin… kyun?

Rano thinking… ish Moksh ko koi aur nahin mila tha pya karne ke liey …jo is Anu ko apna dil de beta… ab mein iese kaise samjhaue ke Moksh use pyar karta hai… Please God help me..

Anu: Rano kya hua…

Rano: Kuch nahin… yeh sab baat chor aur mejuhe yeh bata ki Di ke saath kya hua tha …

So Anu narrated the whole morning incident about the red mark… Jai laughing … and the doctor incident too….

Anu: you know Rano I'm glad nothing major happened to Bani mami and and I think doctor has given her some cream to apply on her those red marks… actually it was bee stung… so you don't worry about it…

Rano looked at Anu with pure horror… what is this girl made of…and started laughing… no wonder why her jiju was checking out her Di… her Di must be angry with him… all thanks to Anu……

Rano: aare Anu yaar… teri tabiyat tu thik hain na … tujhe love marks aur bee stung mein koi fark nahin dikhai deta kya…

Anu: yeh love mark kya hota hain…

Rano: woh ab mein tujhe kaise samjhau …

Just then Bani knocked on the door and Anu opened it…

Bani: come on now both of you let's go down …lunch is served… oh I forgot Anu… woh ladka kaun tha jo subha tumse milne aayan tha… mujhe tumse ish bare mein baat karni thi… I've seen you talking to him from my room window…

Anu: who Mami …he's my classmate… just wanted some notes…

Bani: oh ok… come let's go down and we'll eat… so all three went down…and sat around the dinning table… while Tony served them… the lunch was almost coming to an end when accidentally Jai dropped his glass of water resulting Bani getting wet as she was sitting next to Jai…

Bani: aare yeh kya kar diya aapne…

Jai: I'm so sorry Bani… I didn't do it intentionally…. I'm so sorry…

Masi: koi baat nahin beta… Jai take Bani to her room and help her changing…bahu tu Jai ke saath ja…

Bani: Masi I will go on my own … Jai you finish ur lunch …I'll manage…

Masi: bahu how can u …Jai u are still standing here… go quickly… I don't want bahu to catch cold…

…who can argue with Masi so both Jai Bani went to their room and Jai shut the door of their room…

Jai: Bani I'll get ur clothes out… what do you want to wear… this pink dress or the black one or do you want to wear a saree…

Bani got angry as Jai mentioned saree … and she threw a cold look at him… and instantly Jai understood the saree move was not good at all… so he just lowered his head and pull out a pink and blue churidar from the wardrobe…

Bani: aap bahar jaa sakte hain… I can change by myself…

Jai knew she was acting all stubborn because of the morning and doctor incident but…he knows she can't change by herself coz her hands are not well and it's Anu who's always been helping Bani with her dresses and everything… but now he can't even call Anu for help what would Masi think… so Jai decided he would help her change whether she likes it or not… so Jai advances his step towards her and removed her hair from her back and his fingers brushed on her back… and he undid the dori of her back… And then got hold of her saree pallu…

At the very instant Bani closed her eyes …coz whenever he's around her she just seems to be hypnotized… even if she wants to stop him… but can't…

Jai undid the pin of her pin that was holding her pallu and blouse together… and pull out the plates from her underskirt… all this time Bani's eye were closed… she could feel cold air passing by her body and she slowly open her eyes and looked at Jai and she got shocked at what she saw… Jai's eyes were closed he wasn't looking at her while he was helping her change…… and a small smile appeared on her face… Bani was looking at Jai through out while his eyes were closed…

After helping her with changing he opened his eyes and found Bani staring at him… Jai slowly placed his hands on both side of her cheeks and slowly placed a kiss on her forehead… saying you are looking beautiful…as Bani remained silent…

Afterwards he draped her dupatta around her and took her saree in the bathroom as it was wet… when he came out of the bathroom Bani thanked him… and Jai smiled at her…thinking finally Bani forgave him…

Bani: magar iska matlab yeh nahin ke maine aapko maaf kar diya… saying that she left the room…

Jai thinking: yeh itna gussa kyun karti hain… magar job hi hai gusse mein bhi bohot cute lahti hain… mindblowing… chalo lagta hai koi aur tarika doondna parega madam ko manane ke liey…. Thinking all that he also went downstairs…


I hope I haven't disappointed you all... this update doesn't have the promo part...but hopefully next one will....😆...plz do comment......😃😃😃.......


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

arre chaldi karo nah jaan! i can't wait to read the next part! 😳 😃 ...Dil meri Jaan ... update kar diya hai...😆...enjoy...😃😃😃...

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Posted: 17 years ago
Kya yaar, what a great part! 😳 Jai is so sweet!!! 😳 I think i am always saying this in ur FF. 😆 😳 He closed his eyes--- so cute! 😳 😆 😳 yeh anu bhi nah! says that she isn't a bachi, but her mind is exactly like one! 😆 😆 😆 Bechari ko pata bhi nahi ke love marks hota hai kya! 😳 Some one needs to shut her trap before she goes around the mansion like wild fire, telling everyone about Bani's bee stings! 😳 Now update SOON! not fair that promo wasn't in this one! and it was way too short! 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Jai fast manao bani varna next part we will not get what we want😉😳.cont soon
Edited by Hritzfan - 17 years ago

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