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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey
omg that was a mindblowing part 👏 Bani let it all out 😆 i wonder how will she take the news that shes pregnant 😕
i just hope she will be able to forgive Jai

plz cont

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey, TO all who read my FF's...silent and commenters...first of all...THANKS to everyone who comments...and all who read..

I have a new FF..called Lights..Camera...Sahddi!!??

Its a really new concept..I have posted the jist of.it..like the idea...and all..so please do read and comment..on it...

I'm sure you will like it....

Will be updating tommorw...

Thanks...

Nikita..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/917355/ff-lights-camera-shaddi-finale-pg30-8-9

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Posted: 17 years ago
I'm back with my commetn finally 😆 😆 already commented on your new FF 😛

Loved this update 👏 👏

I wish this Bani was in KS 😆 😆

Bani is pregnant đŸ„ł

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

AGIAN..befor this..

ALL please do read my latest FF...LIGHTS CAMERA SHADDI!!??

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/917355/ff-lights-camera-shaddi-finale-pg30-8-9

Hey
.Next part,..

Part 15

Jai-(moving back out of the room-)-(in his head)-Main under nahi ja sak tha, kya hak hai mera Bani par
Bani neh bhar ajj job hi kaha voh sach hi toh tha
Maine kabhie Bani par barosa nahi kiya..(he leaves the house, and goes somewhere)

Bani-(sitting up in bed)-Main, yahan?

Doctor-Mrs.Walia, app ma bane wali hain..

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Bani-(stunned)-Kya!!Main..maa??

Doctor-Ji
App ma bane wali hain..Ab hum Ganga ka treatment karva paengeh..(able to)

Bani-(still stunned, )-Ji..

Everyone was still in the hall, confused as Hell, whether they should go and congratulate her or not
Rano was obviously on Jai's side, she felt that Jai always loved her, and she shouldn't have done such a thing to him..Dadi, and Masi were sympathetic toward Bani
Suddenly
Bani's shout was heard...

Bani-GANGA!!!

Jai entered the house, hearing Bani shout..he ran up the stairs and saw Bani on the floor, with a piece of paper crumpled in her hand..

Bani-GANGA!! Meri bachi..

Jai-(running to her, sliding onto the floor)-Kya hua Bani..Tum ro (cry) kyun rahi ho?

Bani-(clutching Jai's shirt)-Mr.Walia..(crying hysterically) Ganga
Ganga
usshe..

Jai-(holding on to her..now tearing)-What happened to Ganga damnit..?

Bani-(burst of tears)Usshe kisnap kardiya..yeh
(sniffing)..letter..

The letter read..

I Have Ganga, if you don't want what happened to Krishna, and Atharva to happen to her, than come to Kali Mandir, with 2 crore ruppe,

And please no police, only Mr.and Mrs.Walia..I will call for the time,..

By now everyone was upstairs..and shocked..

Dadi-Hey Bagwan,.yeh..Ganga ke saath..kya hogaya..??

Jai-(letting go of Bani..getting up)-Main police ko phone..

Bani-(wiping her tears, sharply getting up)-Kya? App pagal toh nahi hogaye
Krishna aur Atharva ke time par kya hua tha..yaad hai na..Please Mr.Walia main Ganga ko nahi ko sak thi
App..asia math kijiye
Jab apke pass paise the..thab appne mere bachoon ko nahi bachaya..liken ab yeh paise mere hain..toh main Ganga ko kuch nahi ho ne doongi..

Jai-(mad)-Aur agar paise deneh ke bad, uss kidnapper neh Ganga ko phir bhi mar diya toh??

Bani-Kya app yeh kehna chathe hain, ki mere waje se bache ki death hui the, pichle bar??

Jai-Aur, tum mujhe police ke saath jane dethi to aaj, humare bache humare saath hote..

Bani-Aur agar app police ko nahi lathe to hajj bache humare saath hote


Jai-Tum, tum yeh kehna chathi ho, ki Krishna, aur Athrava mere waje se zinda nahi hai?

Bani-Dard hua nah, jaise appko abhi dard hua, wase mujhe ross, dard hua kartha tha, app ke waje se


Jai-(grew silent)

Bani-App police station nahi jaeengeh


Jai-Bani..

Bani-Nahi..Mr.Walia..maine kehdiya..toh kehdiya..ab hum paise ka intazam karthe hain, aur phir kidnapper ka wait karengeh


The money was arranged, and now the entire family sat downstairs..around the phone waiting for it to ring..Tony mad dinner..but no one ate
they just sat and waited
Bani was upstairs
her knees to her chest..she rested her chin on her knees..She was crying uncontrollably
The tears just flowed..she opened the draw beside her, and looked at the picture of Krishna and Atharva
she touched the faces, closing her eyes..she felt as if it was only yesterday she had brought them home from the hospital


Jai was looking around for Bani, seeing that the door of his room was opened he went upstairs to check on her


Precap-

Jai-(shouting, in pain)-GANGA!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Nikitaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
where's Gangaaaaaaaaa
noooooooooooooooo
not again!!!!!!
plzz dont kill Ganga 😭
u deffo hv to post the next part asap gal!!
varna......
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Nikita
im loving this Bani 😆 shes brilliant
now where is Ganga? and who has taken her? 😕 please dont let them kill her 😭
update soon please

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey niki
grate update
i like the way story is going hope nothing happens to ganga

docontinue
sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago
niki @least u r making the bani more stronger thn BT...gud work gurll :)
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Posted: 17 years ago

i knew that u will make ganga get kidnapped.. par nto fiar haan😭

ab kayhoga?

hope gagna is fien and she return safely and unites jb😭

pls cotnin u e soon

dav

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Niki
Gr8 part
And yeah sry 4 late coments i read this part yesterday bt cudnt coment

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