FF: Ek Kashish - Ch 20 & Epilogue pg 58

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#431

u ended it... 😲 😲
u always take me by surprise when u end it... i am literally taken aback everytime, u end a story... 😆

as usual a happy ending... but here ending with krishna and atharva... how sweet...

seems bani has learnt a lot to handle lalita bua.. 😆 all her inhibitions and fears at last subsided... 😊

this daksh... two-timing rat... 😡

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jani4eva

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Posted: 17 years ago

#432

oho yaar ...y did u end it...honeymoon to describe kardeti !! 😆 😳 😳 .....cant wait for ur next ff 😛

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 17 years ago

#433

👏 Very fast paced and gripping story!

I like your storytelling, at first I was a bit squeamish about the nymphomania and the wife abuser, but I liked the way JB grew to love each other and trusted each other. 👏 👏 👏

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

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Posted: 17 years ago

#434

Can I be bummed you ended it?

I think the title was absolutely perfect. It was an attraction, maybe not physical, but at least emotional, that brought them together. They had different, yet similar marriages where neither of them were happy with their spouses although they tried their best.

Loved the relationship and communication factor you brought in to their marriage. Its absolutely essential. You penned the whole thing beautifully! I really cnat wait for you to start a new one! 👏

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MusicIsDivine!

@MusicIsDivine!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#435

A very beautiful FF and a fabulous ending, Tintin!
👏
The theme is very novel and the title is very fitting too. I was shaking along with Bani at the thought that the JB marriage would be declared null. A very nice twist and a happy ending.
Looking forward to more such thought provoking FFs...
👏

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 17 years ago

#436

Hey Di,

that was an prefect ending to this amazing ff, the story of two ppl who fought all the ends and finally come together was penned so well. As for the time, personally I dont think Kashish is only physically, it could emotionally and mental as well. for Jai and Bani it was truly there pain that brought them together. the communcation was great in ff, so happy to see them happy with their kids.the part abt Bani coming in bathing suit, showed that she as accepted how she looks.truly enjoyed it,will be eagerly waiting for you to start another one. 👏

preet 😳

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#437

👏 👏 👏 Beautiful ending 👏 👏 👏

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#438

hi yaar...sad to see such a great story come to an end but as they say, all good things must come to an end...but this ff, like all your other ff's rocked...

a beautifully put story, and i hope you start another one soon
JAZ

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JAN_SA

@JAN_SA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#439

Hi Tinny,

Absolutely beautiful, 👏 👏 👏 though disappointed it ended so quickly 😭 😭 .

Please come back soon with another brilliant ff.

God bless

Jaan

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Rupal

@culgal86

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Posted: 17 years ago

#440

hey tin..................

awesome ending.................

loved it very much...............

how sick a person can has being proved by daksh.......he found pleasure by torturing bani.........

hope u start a new one soon............

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