FF: Ek Kashish - Ch 20 & Epilogue pg 58

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svayam

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Posted: 17 years ago

#321

Hope Jai finds strength to tell his past to Bani. Waiting for the next update.

-Svayam

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pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#322

Jai should pay heed to Adi's advice and share with Bani about his past. She has every right to know what has happened in his life. It's better she hears the matter directly from him rather than elsewhere. As for Bani, am glad she did not pay any notice to that moron Daksh's babblings, and straight away ran to her husband's arms when she saw him 😳 JB have missed each other greatly, its just that they need to communicate better.

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MusicIsDivine!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#323

Beautiful update Tintin. 👏 Jai rushes to Bani b'coz she didn't call him and he is worried she may be ill. Bani runs past Daksh into Jai's arms. Ah! JB have missed each other so much. Bani shows him the beautiful view of Dilwara Temple and they watch it together in each others arms..How lovely!
Hope Jai tells everything about his first wife to Bani soon....waiting eagerly...

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Judith Audrey

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Posted: 17 years ago

#324

That was so sweet
Jai and Bani are missing each other
Please continue soon

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daviashree

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Posted: 17 years ago

#325

i expected the the things u gave in update..

as i predict in my mind and it happen.. hope bani and jai be together.. hoep daksh doent to get violent with bani andmeera returning back sucht hings..

pls cotninue soon

davia

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jeenal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#326

woah yar
gr8 part
jai came to mt abu just because bani didnt call a day
plz cont soon
and keep this daksh out of their life

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Meghna

@555W59

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Posted: 17 years ago

#327

Jayati,

Amar ayi golpo khub bhalo Lagche. You are potraying their emotions so well. I am really liking the attitude that JW has towards what has happened in Bani's past. It is so nice to see this kind of understanding and care. Also loved the whole sequence of baini's realization about JW's thinking about her past and her body. It was so well written 👏 👏

This lalita bua is a weird character and it will be interesting to see what kind of twist you will use her to bring about.
Another brilliant story and you have pulled it off very very nicely.

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preet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#328

Hey Di,

another fabalous update,totally loved it.I am hoping that Jai will think abt Adi's suggestion to share his past with bani.hopin they dont have an communication barrier between them. Jai and Bani missing each other,dono complete duffers.Daksh less said is better, the temple part was beautifully written.hope they get to spend more time together in Mt.Abu.looking forward to the next part. 👏

preet 😳

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jani4eva

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Posted: 17 years ago

#329

Tin..ur amazing....im in love with ur ff....awesome.. 👏

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Rupal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#330

hey tin....

lovely part...............

bani and jai should open up now and share their past n the effect of it on them individually which the family members did not tell.................

update soon

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