Hey guyz!
I'm back wid another fanfic even though I'm still not done writing my fanfic QURBANI.Here is da link to da ff-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=664537I got da idea of writing another ff when I was writing da fanfic Qurbani.I sumhow had more thoughts abt da new ff I want 2 write than da one I'm writing. But don't wrry, I'll still continue writing my first ff.
This is much different than the last one that I am still writing and I hope that I can live up to all of your expectations. Comments, feed back, questions, etc are appreciated as always.Hopefully I can succeed writing much better than Qurbani and I also hope dat I can write really gud 2 impress u guyz!Hope u like it!INDEX-Pg 1- Prt 1,Pg 2- Prt 2,Pg 3- Prt 3,Pg 4- Prt 4,Pg 4- Prt 5,Pg 4- Important note,Pg 5-Prt 6
ISHQ HUA KAISE HUA
Anil Malhotra was coming up da stairs from da big crowd downstairs.He walked to Bani's room: Arre Bani beti!....Tu kahan hai?!Sab log tumhare liye niche intezar kar rahe hai.Aa ja beta.
As she spoke out...da camera juss showed her back. Da young gurl:Ji Papa..main bas abhi ayi!
A:Acha....lekin Pia aur Rano kahin nahin aa raha hai?!
Da young gurl:Ji woh mujhe madad kar rahi hai.Yeh log mere saath ayigi.Aap jayiye...hum log aate hai!Pia was shown putting on da gold jewelry on Bani's neck where as Rano was doing Bani's hair.Rano and Pia looked quite fine.
Then after a while a girl was shown running down da stairs who had gentle pink lips,murky brown eyes,black shiny hair,pale cheeks and da most thing dat stood out da most on her face was her warm-hearted smile.She was wearing a saree. She looked quite bubbly in it.Pink and baby light blue was da color for her, it wud make her stand out everytime wherever she goes. Pink always reflect feminity. Any women wud look pretty in this color. Pink outfits are quite popular these dayz and could be worn by ladies of all age groups.Its basically a color resembling femininity, festivity, delicacy and innocence.
(Bani is wearing da same saree as Kareena.So juss try 2 imagine her in it.)Bani just graduated from the London University.She had just cum back and on this occasion, Anil and Kiran decided to throw a party for her.She studied for business management.She chose 2 be a business woman so then she can give a hand to her brother and her dad in business.She luvs 2 do math...and dat is how she got more interested in business.All were excited for dat and then she will be starting 2 work in her own office of her dad's company.
Everyone looked at da stairs b/c Bani was cuming down.She was looking like a princess.She looked exactly like Kareena from da picture.
Anil and Kiran looked at da stairs and Anil said:Yeh lo....ab ayi mera beta.
Anil brought Bani up as a son, even though he had a son;he didn't like treating gurls different than boys. He liked treating them da same.Kiran on the other hand treated Bani as a daughter, she was everytime worried abt her. Nishu wud let her go 2 her college parties dat ended at 11:30 pm and Kiran didn't like dat. She wud usually make Bani cum home at 8:30 pm even though da party starts at 8 but wud like make her cum in after 30 minutes(lol).Bani being a gud gurl wud keep her mom's heart and cum back home at 9:30 pm. Pushkar was the older brother and he is married to Pia.
Last but not least,Rano.Rano was da ladli of da house.Rano was also treated like da same as Bani.She is quiet but intelligent(I heard dat da ones who r quiet r actually da smart ones....correct me if I am wrong).She doesn't wear glasses as 2 wat she wears on tv.Infact she is into fashion like Pia.Rano wud dress up like Rani and Kajol.Those were her favourite actresses.U cud say dat she can make anyone's day lifeless to interesting.Guyz wud fall for her,but unfortunately she rejects all of them.She is one of those gurls who needs a guy 2 impress her.
Pia was really a good wife,a virtuous sisiter-in-law, and an upright daughter-in-law.She really cares for da family, but there is this one thing dat she can't refuse 2 do;she can shop till she drops.(lol)
Bani had finally cum down along wid Pia and Rano.They had dressed up nicely 2! Bani came back home after 3 yrs and obviuosly she missed out a lot of things like her big bro's wedding.He got married juss da year before Bani graduated in University.
Anil took Bani wid him 2 introduce wid da ppl who r associated wid their company.Out of all da ppl dat Anil introduced Bani 2....he missed out one.It was Uday Walia.
Uday Walia then came forward and began 2 speak wid Anil:Toh mera dost humarein purana dosti bhul gaye hai kya?!Uday then looked at Bani for a moment and said 2 himself dat this must be my Jai's future wife.
Uday Walia was Anil's best friend ever since Anil was married.They used 2 knoe each other for quite long.Bani and Jai were quite gud friends,but after they left;sum things kind of changed.Uday and his family used 2 live in Mumbai, but moved to Rajasthan for business.They lived in Rajasthan for many years, and now they came back in Mumbai for sumthing dat Anil and Uday have been waiting to do for da past 26 yrs.
Anil in shock:Arre?!Tu...ttttu yahaan kaise?!
Kiran cums from behind:Ji....maine bulaya tha.Maine kaha tha na ke aapke liye ek surprise hai.Yeh hai aapka surprise.
Anil to Kiran:Tumne toh bohut achi surprise di hai...sach mein.
Krishna:Ji haan!Maine bhi unhe same surprise di jaise Kiran ne di.Krishna gave a very sweet smile 2 Bani b/c she found her quite pretty and was kind of impressed.
Anil to Krishna:Lekin aise kaise kiya?
Krishna:Darasal, jab hum Mumbai pohonche...tab mera pehla kaam yehi tha aap logon ko phone karna.Jab maine phone kiya tha, tab aap nahin the...lekin Kiran bhabi thi.Toh maine uske saath bohut der tak baat ki.Tab....
Kiran finished off for Krishna:Tab maine unlogon bulaya tha Bani ki welcum back party ke liye.Aur yeh baat hum dono nein tayar kiya tha ke hum dono ek doosre pati iss surprise ke bare mein nahin batayenge.
Uday:Bhai main toh man gaya...bohut acha surprise tha.
Then they all laugh along where as Bani was totally lost b/c she can't really remember Uday and Krishna.
Bani took Kiran aside and asked her in whisper:Mummy....yeh Aunty Uncle kaun hai?Main abhi tak nahin pehechan payi, lekin bohut pehechana sa lagta hai.
Kiran then chuckled 2 herself and then took Bani back to da lil gathering.
Kiran:Yeh hai humari beti Bani.
Bani then bent down and took Uday's and Krishna's blessing.They got impressed dat even though she studied in London,she still has da indian culture and traditions wid her.
Bani:Namaste Aunty..namaste Uncle.
Uday and Krishna:Namaste namaste!
Uday:Toh tum batao beti....tumhe yahaan acha lagta hai...ya London?
Bani smiled and answered:Sabka desh apna apna hota...waise hi India meri apni desh hai.
A child cums in da lil gathering and says: Haan!...like Mr.India....nahin?!
Everyone looked down 2 c, it was a lil child age of 7.Then they all laugh at wat he said.
Jigs was looking for her child.She loked everywhere,but cudn't find him.Then she saw Uday and Krishna,she went up 2 them and asked:Mummy..Papa,kya aap logon nein Rahul ko kahin dekha?Main toh usse dhund dhund ke thak chuki hoon.Yeh ladka na...din par din badmash hote jaa rahe hai!
Rahul popped from da gathering:Kya?!Main din oar din badmash hote jaa raha hoon?Nahin!Main toh bohut acha kadka hoon..kyun Dadi?
Krishna laughed and picked him up: Haan haan...tu toh mera acha bacha hai na?
Uday:Jigs....tu bhi na...woh abhi bhi chota hai.Shararat nahin karenge toh aur kya karenge?!Aur waise bhi...agar humare ghar mein woh nahin rehta, humare ghar bohut sona sona lagta hai.Chordo usse.
Jigs:Aap bhi na Papa!
Adi:Kya aap bhi na Papa?Arre Papa toh thik keh raha hai.Bachein toh bhagwan ki rup hota hai.Adi winked at Uday and Krishna, and all of them laughed.
Pia:Papa..Mamma, ayiye.Bani ko abhi cake katna hai...aur waise bhi bohut der ho chuki hai.
Kiran:Haan...thik kahe raho.Chaliye.Bani chalo.
Bani then cut da cake and fed sum cake 2 Kiran,Anil,Pia,Rano and Pushy.
Then they all had food and everyone had left except for Uday's family.The were sitting in da living room talking abt how 26 yrs past by.They shared each other's stories abt how they used 2 do soo many fun things 2gether.Then after he changed da topic and decided 2 say sumthin.
Uday:Anil.....main aur intezar nahin kar sakta.Main pichle 26 saalon se humare iss rishte ko rishtedaari mein badalna chahta hoon.Bani,Pia and Rano was wondering wat was he talking abt.
Krishna:Haan.Hum dononein socha ke humein ek khubsurat aur ek sanskari ladki chahiye.Humein toh ladki ko dhundna hi nahin para, kyunki humarein akhon ke samne humare ane wali bohu hai,Bani.
Bani blushed like dark red.She cudn't control dat and went up 2 her room.
Everyone laughed by seeing dat expresion on Bani's face.They understood dat it was a yes from Bani.Now it was just a confirmation from Anil and Kiran.
Uday:Anil...toh kya main iss rishte ko haan samjhoon?
Anil had tears in his eyes:Arre...yeh kya koi poochne waali baat hai?
Krishna:Kiran...toh thik hai.Humari dosti ab rishtadari mein badal gayi hai.
Kiran:Toh phir iss khushi mokein se mitaai khana padega.Pia...tum jaake mitaai lekar aana.
Pia wid a wide smile:Ji Mummy.
Then they all fed sweets 2 each other and Uday and his family left from there after dat.
Plz tell me if I shud continue or not. Hope u like it and hope 2 succeed in writing 2 gud.All comments r appreciated and accepted.Thx for ur cooperation.I will continue if I get enough comments.
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