Chhotu FF: Love follows (Pg13)

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Hey Ree, this is awesome..just read all the 3 chottu FF 😃
First one was excellent..loved the small nokh-jonkh of our JB..
Second one was really sweet...the college going JB 😳 😳
Third one was just hilarious 😆 😆 Yaar, just like Davs has mentioned, is he preggers or what??? 😆 😆

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#32

👏 ..... awwwnnn man.. dat was crzy.. 😆 .. jai addicted to banis pickles.. lmao.. nice FF.. lol.. we are rewarded w/ anoter one right.. hhehhehehh..

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Ree.. OMG I just read both of these.. Simply hilarious!! I hope you continue and write another Chottu FF! Its SO cute!!!! Loved both of them dearly! 😆 😆

*edited*

and JUST realized that there are 3!!!! Awesome! Each and every single one of them! Keep writing!

Edited by Hkaurk22 - 17 years ago

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#34

that was an hilarious ff
god cant imagine jai so much crazy for aam ka aachar
gr8 yaar
loved it

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#35

You normally hear of pregnant women being ready to kill for some achaar, but J too?? 😆 Taking it back from Tony???? And yeh Bani bak-bakking in front of her saas (kinda) about J 😆 - lottery lag hi gayi Munne ki...
Very creative, Ree...

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MusicIsDivine!

@MusicIsDivine!

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#36

Thank you, I read all the three stories and loved all of them. The first one is cute, the second one is sweet and the third one is hilarious. Jai and his love for aam ka achar! Excellent comedy!😆 😆 😆
Please continue...

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Henna 786

@Henna 786

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#37

🤣 Jai lattu for Achaar! 😆 took me a while to read and understand the hindi but it was well written! 👏

Loved the whole idea of the pickles.. simple and sweet [or kata 😆]

I was wondering if JW was preggers 🤣 transfer the load over as they say

Great wrk.. hilarious to read! 😆

Henna x

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#38

🤣

THat was the most beautifully written short story I have read in a long time.

I just loved it to pieces.

Especially the song you start out with, because it is very dear to me, my husband actually sings it to me all the time... 😳 😳

The whole premise of the pickles with Bani's innocent interjections and JW's blackmail of Tony....

I truly, truly, truly enjoyed and I think you are very talented. Please submit this short story (changing the names, of course) to a publication. It is that good! 😃 😃 😃

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#39

😆 man do u know how hard it is...

not to laugh

him and his pickles! 😆

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kiranc

@kiranc

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#40

Great update. Must defintely say one of the best that i have read
Jai latto over amm ka achaar. 😆
Bani the newly wed bride making her husband's fav achaar was sweet and cute of her.
I never knew that something about making achaar could be so romantic.
Lol Jai and Tony arguing for the achaar was so funny.

Thanks for such an awesome story.

Kiran

Edited by kiranc - 17 years ago

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