Jai’s Angel: Part 6~Updated~Preview Pg 27 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
gr8 start to ur unnamed ff!
👏

clearly an intriguing start...

enigmatic character of JW...

fulfilling the W triology: work, wine, women - jeez someones had a hard life 😉 😆

the all that 'glitters aint gold' worth of sonali... poor gal won't know what's hit her.

leaving in its wake the mystery woman thats irked the gr8 JW to no end.

can't wait to find out who it is! have a few inklings

will past and present collide to a cacophony of thunder,and utter fanfare with a crescendoing effect...or be more subtle like windchimes tinkling sweet music in a gentle breeze...

pls do continue with this ff 😃

much appreciated

ta.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
wow wow wow that was amazing
pleaseeeeeeeee update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
Jojo, had a busy day so just caught up with the first part. WOW 👏 👏 , it sounds really interesting. Loved JW's complete absorption in his first glimpse of Bani. Riveting, please continue soooooon
Somali
PS Hope your hand's better
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24

Thaaaaaaanks di!

I'm waithing for the next part....

Ashoo

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wowwwww .. amazing part I. JW is mesmerized by ( I am sure) Bani - I can see the electricity sizzle across the room ..... please do continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Happy reading folks...

There you have it.. whatever I could come with!

Alvida for now,

Jojo

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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Another fantastic update! Now you have me all curious about what happenned years ago between JW and Bani.. do continue...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Hey Jojo
yet again another mindblowing part 👏
what happend between jai and bani and her family 😕
was it bani that he saw and is it jai that she just bumped into? 🤔 i think so it was very confused 😕

cant wait to read more

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do cont

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
well written
another great part..
cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Finally my IF is working :) Now I can comment!

Yaar Jojo.. Ab JW ne kya kiya Bani ko? Awesome part.. her poor Chachu was afraid for her, and even she was more scared seeing she spilled the water on herself..

I guess Bani is the one that can get under JWs skin.. LOL Moreso her sister... Stupid sister... (im assuming its pia) Cant wait to see when they are face to face! Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls continue soon!
Edited by Hkaurk22 - 17 years ago

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