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Posted: 17 years ago
Here is the next part.......hope u like it

Part 13

Both was still kissing each other till they have to break apart to catch their breath. Jai touched his forehead with hers and stared into her eyes will stroking her cheeks softly with his thumb. He could feel Bani shivering under him so he took her in a hug and stroke her back to calm her.

Bani was so touched by his small act to calm her down that she hugged him as tightly as possible and whispered in his ears "Thank u". Jai understood what she meant and took her by his arms to look at her

Jai : Bani I have something that belongs to u

Bani was confuse as what was he referring to until she saw him taking out something from his pocket and showed her…..her payal.

Bani : Meri payal……I thought I lost it…….

Saying that she extended her hand to take the payal but Jai moved his hand back and told her "May I" pointing to her feet. She nodded and he took her to the table and sat her down while he kneeled down and put the payal at her left foot as the other foot already had one.

Once he fixed the hook properly he looked at her and extended his hand asking for a dance.

Jai : Will the lady honor me with a dance

Bani laughed and said : It will be my pleasure and extended her hands

They danced on this song


Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera
Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua
Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila
Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Choolon Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho
Hum Hai Re Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum ... -5


Jai held her by her waist and Bani kept both her hands behind his neck and both stared into each others eyes while dancing. Bani was having chills as his hands were at her bare waist and his cold hands were doing funny things to her system and her cheeks was turning red so hid her face in his chest and Jai took her in a tight hug and continued dancing.

They was lost in their own world when suddenly his phone started ringing loudly breaking the silence. Jai cursed under his breath while Bani laughed seeing him getting frustrated. Jai answered the phone and when he heard the other person saying something his face turn pale and he replied "We will be there soon" and cut the call.

Bani got scared seeing him like that and quickly asked him what happen once he kept his phone down. Jai looked at her and took hold of her hands and told her

Jai : Bani it was bhaiya…….he said Raashi bhabhi has been rushed to hospital as she was going into labor.

Bani who heard that just told him less go and prayed in her heart that everything will be fine. Both rushed to the hospital and all the way just hold each others hand indicating that they are there for each other and everything will be fine.


Sorry for any mistakes.....I know its short but I just needed to end their date and move the story.....so pls do comment



Edited by hipreet - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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now rashi kid will make jb kid get married haina..
dotn tell ur goign to go in the hum aapke hai koun style pls.. not atleast u...

pls cotnineu soon

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey .................

really sweet and romantic part...........

hope raashi is ok................

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 update......

the payal part was really good....

do cont soon.... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

hi,

great part

plsssssssssssss continue soon

bye n tc

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey great part 😉


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was awesome!!!!

i had read it.. but couldnt comment!!!!!


but u have to cont soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
I will like to thank
basket, jeenal20, davia389, culgal86, tam2, ridhijai, ejazanita, momtajbegum1, *Guli*
for reading and commenting.

Thanx to the silent readers too.

Harpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago
Here is the next part.....hope u like it

Part 14

Once they reached at the hospital both rushed to the reception to ask bout the patient. Once they got the room no. they ran to the room. When the entered the room they saw the whole family there and in the middle of the room lay Raashi with her new born baby boy. Bani ran to her sisters side

Bani : Didi aap kaisi ho aur yeh bacha kitna cute hai……saying that she hugged her and said congrats.

Meanwhile Jai went towards Ranveer and hugged him while congratulating him for being a father. The whole family kept looking at them as they want to know what happen between them. Raashi was the first one to speak

Raashi : Bani mein theek ho par tum batao kya mera munna tumhe massi bulayaga ya chachi

At first Bani was confuse as to why would he call her chachi but when Raashi indicated her to look at her hand than she realized what she meant. She just looked at Jai and saw him smiling mischievously so she just lowered her eyes and blushed.

Looking at her reaction and the ring at her finger everyone knew that she accepted jai whole heartily so soon everyone was congratulating them also and some was pulling their legs also like Pushkar.

Suddenly the baby started crying maybe cause he felt left out so everyone again concentrated at him and Jai and Bani sighed happily that for now they was left alone. Soon everyone was discussing what name will be suitable for the baby and started the argument about what the name they like till Raashi had enough of it and told everyone that she already chosen a name for him.

She cast a look at Ranveer and he nodded his head indicating go ahead and tell everyone as they already decide together what will they call him

Raashi : Ok everyone his name will be Varun Ranveer Walia

Everyone was happy with the name and started to talk with the baby while calling his name. It was already late at night so the nurse told them that they will have to leave so everyone left the room but Raashi asked Jai and Bani to stay back as she wanted to talk to them for a while.

Bani : Kya hua didi…….

Raashi : Bani aaj mein bohot khush ho kyunki tum aur Jai ek saat ho aur apni puri zindagi ek dusra ke saat bitana chatha hai……then she called Jai near her and said….Jai tum mera saat hamesha rathe ho jab mein pehli baar is ghar par dulhan ban kar aithi to tumne mujhe apni bhabhi hi nehi balki apni dost bi banaya tha…….us din mujhe bohot khushi hui kyunki mujhe itni achi family mili thi aur aab Bani bhi is family ka hisa banagi aur mujhe pura yakeen hai ka tum usa bohot khush rakoga par tum dono mujhse ek vada karo ka tum dono ek dusra ka saath kabhi nehi choroga

Jai and Bani who was overwhelmed that Raashi cared for them a lot that she cant even bare thinking them being separated promised her that they will never leave each others side ever.

With that both of them left the hospital together while Ranveer was there for Raashi and their baby. While driving back both of them was quiet as they was thinking about what Raashi told them and they was happy that the whole family accepted them being together.

Once reached Bani's house Jai got down and helped Bani out of the car. They stood staring at each other, they wanted to tell each other so many things but just couldn't find the right words. Bani finally spoke up

Bani : Jai its getting late I should go

Jai just nodded and she started going towards the house but just as she took two steps Jai hold her arms from behind and she turned around and looked straight at his eyes which was full of love and tenderness for her.

Jai : Bani good night and kissed her on the cheeks

Bani smiled at him and told him good night. Both went back to their respective houses. Before sleeping both remembered the beautiful date and how it has now changed their life. They fall asleep with a huge smile playing on their lips.


Sorry for any mistakes.......pls do comment
The next update will be on Monday as tomorrow I won't be able to update


Edited by hipreet - 17 years ago

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