SS - Happy Diwali (Part 2B) - Pg 11

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sweetu144

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Dearest....the creative team really need to take some ideas from you....and then KS will be the bomb 😉!

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***srk***

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

OMG! that was just... A.W.E.S.O.M.E ! gosh u write so well! jitna bhi padho, jee nahi bharta! 😳 😳 😳

u now just afte i finished reading the part, i hd such a beautiful feeling! that i have only afteri read ur ffs 😃 thanx MT for writing such a beautiful story 😃 nd plz do cont soon!

ps: jai to bara chupa rustam nikla! 😆 i lov im! 😛

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nema123

@nema123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Oh Dear MT.... You are back with awesome story 👏

It is 5 am here in US.. and I am laughing loud.. my husband is shouting now... 😆

You are the best MT.... 👏 Don't know why ekta hires brainless writters.. when there are so many talented writter exists on IF..

Thanks for the best Diwali Treat..You are so sweet 👏

Edited by nema123 - 17 years ago

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kiranc

@kiranc

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Hey MT,

The update it was too good as usual.

I guess Jai has a new way of playing rummy. 😆

Looking forward for all the games that Jai is going to play with Bani. 😳

Pia's description had me in splits.

Pls continue soon.

Kiran

PS: Really needed this sweet and sugary SS with KS being full of bitterness

Edited by kiranc - 17 years ago

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

MT,

Unbelievable ff, Thanks MT for such a good ff 👏
Take care,
Sukh

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silki

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

gr8 ff..
luv the way jai was flirting with bani behind the cards 😳 😃
do cont soon

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

I love it!!!!

The flirting behind the cards was soooo cute!!! 😳 .. even i couldn't stop laughing.. can only imagine Bani's haalat!🤣

Love the JB chemistry.... Hope you continue soon with looooong parts...(not divided into 2A and B) 😆 😆 (actually i changed my mind... i want parts A.B and C.. all the sub-parts being long😉😳)

I see RanRan are attracted to each other aswell.. and as for Pushkar.. I think he'll find someone better... 😉

Update sooooooooooooooooon 😃

Edited by bugs_bunny - 17 years ago

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watsonmamu

@watsonmamu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Awesome story, Rekha! What a treat for us! I love Sooraj Barjatiya films even though they are quite sappy! I love feel good films a lot1 So your SS is perfect!

Love Jai's flirting especially behind the fan of cards 😆 - too cute! Also loved Bani's reactions to Jai's flirting.

Really waiting to see how the story proceeds and I really hope we have a really happy ending (even with the evil Saahil and Jigyasa)!

Thank you for the wonderful treat!! 👏 👏 👏

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

as usual fabulous rekha... its nice to see JW flirting with our bani.. 😆 king of rummy busy flirting so losing the game... 😆

u r right... all the characters are very diabetic... thanks for the khata- teeks mirch from jigs and saahil... 😆

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#20

Reeeeeee just mindblowing 😊 . Glad that you are back with another new SS

Awesome storyling was reminding me of those olden-golden ages of KS 😃 . Loved it to the bits. It was a pleasure for my eyes to experience how the Khadoos JW is falling for his employee the down-market girl from MT Abu our very own Bani-rani the bond of the 21st century slowly slowly 😛 😉 😆

The Rummy and those six rounds of banters between JW and Bani Dixit were just amazingly penned and left me grinning from ear to ear 😆 .

So it's established now that JW the Khadoos has been keeping tabs on Bani's whereabouts very well 😕 😆 😆

P** I don't want to go even there at all as I don't care if this repto even exists there

Thanks for treating and sharing such a wonderful diwali gift of yours with us. Now can't wait to read the next part from you soon. Please do continue. A very well done job! 👍🏼

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