FFThe Foreign Self: Part XXII & Epilogue - Page 2

Fantastic part Armana,
loved it.
Emotions were beautifully penned...knew they will come face to face...expected some exchange of words or some argument...even trying to run away to not this...this was lovely.
Jai's heart was at erase as soon as he near Ninital...bc Bani was there...Jai might have some how control himself not to come infront of Bani...but his heart didn't go along with him this time...his want and his need is Bani...and this is proven in his every action from taking care of her to marrying her.
Love the way Bani give up and went along with him...good that she set some ground rule...no repeat marriage, no divorce and definatly no cheating 😆 😆
plz cont. soon

Beautiful.Just loved the part. How they realised the need to be together, love for each other after going throuh so much hurt, misunderstanding, hatred is portyaed really well.

They didn't need words. Just one look at her & all his doubts grudges were gone & all he had was urge to take care of her.

You are a great writer.

Wonderful update indeed. And very surprising. The meeting of Jai and Bani was expected but the outcome was totally unexpected. And a nice one that too. It is worth the wait. But please do update soon.

Wow...What a part... 😳 Really enjoyed it... 😃 Well done once again... 👏
Eagerly waiting to see what's next... 😉

Armana, another beautiful part penned by you. The meeting of Jai and Bani sent shivers down my spine especially with Jai noticing how frail and weak Bani has become, knowing that he is the reason behind her condition. Loved Bani's retort to Jai when he initially tried helping her out. I guess that and when he found Bani with high fever and very weak got him thinking deeply about his life and what Bani means to him. His tender care for her spoke volumes, even though the dolt refuses to feel that he loves her and the manner in which they got married admist the bautiful mountains in the quaint temple was wonderful

Bani has suffered a lot in comparision to Jai Walia and deserves every iota of care that is given to her.

These two? they will never learn na/ But then this obstinacy in their characters in what makes them so endearing. And I love them for that. 👏

Armana, a very beautiful part, another addition to the printed part. This is such a wodnerful story and the emotions are so real, don't know how you manage to write them. 😊

Loved the way Jai and Bani got married in the lap of nature, far away from all external embellishments. Loved the way Jai took care of Bani and the way he realised in those moments that she was what he needed in his life. 😳

The love bit has also been handled so well, but will he actually come to know that she is his angel??? Bani already knows that he is the stranger. Now, what about Jai? 😊

its very beautiful Armana,
the pain d loneliness n d emotions of both Jai n Bani

u hav done an excellent job ..

i loved d description of d place n d rains its like i was there experiencin all tht

n please continue it dont end it there

benazir

hi,

agin nice part👏 im vry impressed with the way u shows their feelings n emotions towards eachother as if like im watchin KS episod btw im really angry with u?😡 how come u didnt send me PM to tell abt that u hav already post n next part like be4 u did? tx god i was surfin through pgs n saw ur part updated!!! i feel like cryin that u forgot me?😭😆 anywaz just kiddin bt ya im upset with u bt nt angry anymore after readin such a wonderful part😉 so atleast weddin happed!!! bt wat is this? Jai is like he doesnt trust bani or love her? n wat does his words mean by? that he needs HER😡 he just think of only sleepin or wat?coz it sounds to me like that as he already denied the other feelings!!!! anywaz so plssssssssssssss update next part vry soon as im vry keen to readin next1😳

btw wn is Jai goin to find out abt the truth? abt bani n angel is the same person!!!! n also abt PIA's lie😡

bye n tc

Dear Armana,

Awesome update once again. You are a fantastic writer. Wish you had wriiten the screenplay of KS. They definitely need you. Bunch of craps ruling KS nowadays. Will jai find out that bani his his angel in the next part???
Please update the next soon. Waiting to read!!!!

ss

Hey Armana.

Great parts. Read last three, just perfectly written.
Best part -in the last part Bani said she is over Jai- Jai said the same about being over Bani but still felt each others presence and moment later after they met they were like normal fighting couple who would not budge to the other one

."The simple lack of her is more to me than others' presence".
-Edward Thomas

Marriage was totally unexpected. Trust you to bring humour in the most serious situations.

I have few questions though -where is the root cause of all problem - Pia? Will she be making a comeback. Bring Rumaan back pleaseee. And is it just a co-incidence or planned that JB always meet in a cold chilly weather. Seems like author has patented this weather for these two.

Update soon.