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.noone.

@.noone.

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#201

Gr8 part
I m loving Rano because of her acts
plz cont soon 😊

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Benazir

@mohabbat_bs

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#202

Bani is Back n she stood against Jigz tht a good sign

hope Jai cums to know everythin but then it would b d end of d FF na so u can carry on d way u r goin

do continue soon
benazir

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#203

Hey Dil,

another fabalous update,beautifully written.so Cupid Massi is here,its so cute to see Jai's trying his hardest to control his anger.hehe.lovin it.So happy to see Bani speaking upto Jigs,very well written.looking forward to the next part. 😊

preet 😳

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Nandita

@nandita1209

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#204

The scene at the breakfast table was hilarious…Jai suppressing his anger for his Massi's sake, Rano's stomping Sahil's feet, Massi pampering Bani to no end and finally the great Jai Walia being forced to take permission from his wife when he wants to leave….

Jig' s is a pain in the neck.. Why cannot she mind her own business instead of instigating Jai against Bani every time??? It was wonderful of how Bani showed that Jig's has no right to slap Rano… Hope henceforth she does not take the barbs from Jig's and Jai when they malice her character…

Nice update…. Will be waiting for the next one….

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@jazzy28

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#205

hey i hv alwayz been a sliient reader of ur fanfic but superb yaar...u have truly recreated the happiness of ks ...lookin 4ward 2 jb moments..u go gal..and ya hw's alwayz a bother..lol

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***srk***

@***srk***

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#206

awesommmme! yaar yeh jigz apna muh band nahi rakh sakti! gosh for once jai was looking at bani with gratitude and jigz spoiled it! ughhhh!

hahah jai asking bani's permission to leave? and he saw she was hiding her smile! hahah thats sooo funny! 😆 😆 😆

i loved it! plz do cont soon! and btw thank god masi came! jai is gonna re become an human! 😃 😆

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Bristy

@the_rain

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#207

I read your FF today, from part 1 to part 8

You've written very well, enjoyed it completely....😊

Great job, continue soon

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Nikita

@InTheZone123

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#208

for the first time when Jai is actually grateful that Bani saved his maasi, Jigs just had to come and ruin everything

Massi is so sweet to Bani, i also think Jai is jealous because massi showers all off her love on Bani (maybe u can add a scene like that, when Jai gets jealous of Bani because of maasi...just a thought)
Why can't Jai see that Bani is not like pia

Rano is just great, lol she stepped on Jigs sari and it ripped and that cheap sari comment from Rano was just great.... and then Bani comes up to Jigs and has an iron grip on her hand, and jigs was actually scared, that's a first, but know she knows not to mess with Bani!

niks

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kiranc

@kiranc

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#209

Read the parts in one go, simply loved it.

looking forward for the next part.

pls continue soon

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shobana

@Ammukutty

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#210

It was a great part!! 👏 👏 ....Mausi is doing a great job...hope she brings them closer....I liked the way he was trying to control his anger .....liked JB scenes.....last part was hilarious....I enjoyed it....I hate jigs...keep it up bani......waiting for the next part... 😊

luv,
Ammu.

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