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tam2

@tam2

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#1041

*savings*

going to sleep right now...will read and comment in the morning... 🥱 ...

*Edited*
hey Dil....🤗...Thanks for the update Jani....
I loved ur towel scene... 😳 ... very nice indeed...yeh Jai bhi na sirf sochta hi reh geya .... 😆.... kuch kar nahin paya 😆 ... i'm sure his time will come soon....😉😳😆... loved the other part too where Bani was massaging Jai's head...😳....it was really cute...Do cont soon...🤗🤗🤗...

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#1042

Dil,

Another beautifully written chapter, very sweet, caring, tender and romantic.

First the towel clad Bani all shy with Jai and he is latoo over her and then Ranveer and Rano's cute encounter and lastly Bani massaging Jai's kid and her caressing his hair, combing her fingers through it; all scenes were written very very sweetly, just loved the entire chapter.

Please continue soon, I love reading your story, it's a feel good story that wants you to keep on reading.

-- Di

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Nazneen

@chickster

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#1043

That was an awesome update - sure makes up for keeping us waiting for so long 😉

I loved both scenes with Jai & Bani - i love watching this cute, subtle flirting that is going on between them 😳

Ranveer & rano were cute as well 😆

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Miss_Diey

@Miss_Diey

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#1044

Dil,
What can i say that you don't know🤔🤔🤔
It was superb 😉
The scene of the towel was so intense.
Poor Bani, she was so shy 😳 😳 .
So this sight make Jai's day difficult to concentrate on his work.
The scene of the massage was so cute 😳 😳 😳 .
It's good to see they are not afraid anymore.
I can't wait to see Jai more flirting with her 😉
great part 👏
I really love it 😃
Take care

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#1045

Helooo Ji, long time nooo see.I miss talking to you all.I dont like Exams 😡 😡

haila kitna pyaara update,simply loved every bit of it. Munna surely doesn't have an sharmi does he,pehla watching her sleep aur phir litterally staring at her when she was in the towel 😳 😳 😳 Bani rani surely kaam si gayi,love the stubble flirting between them.Ranveer and Rano,kuch kuch zarora hoai 😛 😛 Munna and her massi pulling their bahu's leg,simply too cute and funny.Haila massage scene,bery bery cute.he cant seem to get enough of those soft hands 😳 😳 😳 lookin forward to the next part. 👏

preet 😳

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#1046

Great part.
liked it.
Jai teasing Bani was just 😳 😳 😳
looks like Bani slowly making her way into JW's heart...to stay there forever 😉 😊
Rano and Ranveer 😆 😆 😆
plz cont. soon

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#1047

that was awesome jaani!!!!!

haila!! i read it at jaz's work wen i went there as she was a little busy!! but then i re read it again!!

but jaani that was short

i loved it all!

but longer next time plz! 😳

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#1048

gr88 part
plz cont soon
loved it

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#1049

Hayeee loved it jaani!!!!!

OMG...their oil moment was the bomb yaar!! ☺️...sometimes silence says it all☺️

Agree with Guliooo..it was too short!! 😭

Continue SOON! 👍🏼

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#1050

happy to see Jai getting back to himself - naughty self... the mild teasing and loving gazes... so sweet. 😳 cute too 😛

i was laughing when adi told jai to come soon when bani was waiting in the room draped in a towel 😆 😆 😆 thank lord jai dint make adi wait... for long 😉

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