SS:love always finds a way,my 1st

Hey guys,

This is my very first fanfic, actually it's a very short story. It's quite lyrical. I hope you guys like it. Please tell me your response. I am open to criticism. Well your response will tell if I will continue to write or not.

Our very own sexy jai walia -a famous writer for a change, rich, shamelessly handsome, grey eyes as deep as the ocean, tall, rest I leave it to your imagination…

Our sweet bani dixit- owns a chain of famous restaurants,very pretty,dark brown big and expressive eyes,keep imagining…

"Hold fast to dreams,

For when dreams go,

Life is a barren land,

Frozen with snow."

LOVE ALWAYS FINDS A WAY

14^th February 1997.

The Valentine's day party brought jai and bani
together when they were just eighteen.
He thought that her shoebox of string, tape and lace
was "pretty" and cookies "just fine."
bani noticed how nimbly his fingers untied
the shoelace that held the lid tight,
and how, though the cookies were burnt to a crisp,
he smiled as he ate the last bite.

Now, poor bani was from the wrong side of the tracks,
and all the school children did say
that jai, born on the right side of the town,
was nice "'cause it's Valentine's Day."
Though the party had brought them together that once,
the social rules kept them apart,
and so they each went to their predestined life
with an empty place deep in their heart.

14^th February 2007.

Now, bani never married, but learned how to cook and started her own chain of restaurants which in no time became famous .
and everyone wanted Ms.Bani dixit.

She was booked for a book-launch -- Valentine's Day.
The author had specified her.
He was Edgar'd and feted -- a writer of note --
so shy bani was forced to concur.

bani organized everything as the writer read lines,
then nimbly signed books for the crowd,
but a puzzle it was, how this mystery man
was making her heart beat so loud.
She busied her hands with the lace and the silk,
though they shook as she touched each part.
She turned from the table as a voice in her ear
whispered, "bani, please be my sweetheart."

He held in his two hands -- this mystery man --
a box that was faded and worn,
and when jai walia smiled at bani once again
she saw her young jai reborn.
It's a mystery to some how jai and bani.
found each other in this strange way,
but to all who love (or wish for love) it's
the magic of Valentine's Day.

Sorry for the mistakes.

God bless.

dhani

That was very interesting...Unique... 😛 Liked the way it was lyrical... 😊 Well done... 👏

that was nice starting......liked it...continue soon 😊

Wow I loved this FF!

Very poetic and different. It is like a breadth of fresh air. Please do continue
writing. 👏

Originally posted by: putturani

Wow I loved this FF!

Very poetic and different. It is like a breadth of fresh air. Please do continue
writing. 👏

Exactly my thoughts. Very sweet.

👏👏👏

Great ff.
liked it.
very different.
plz cont. soon

Great start.
I like the poetic way in which the story was written.

Pls continue soon.

Kiran

wow very inspiring and sensitive 👏 👏 👏
continue soon 😃 😃

hey guys,

thanx a lot for the encouragement.love u all.

sorry guys this was just a 2 para story.

but after your response i will surely start a new one.but it will not be lyrical and totally original,unlike this which was literally inspired and not copied.

thanx guys.

god bless.

dhani.

Loved it. It has uniqueness which is different. Thanks dear.
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