FF - At 17, update Pt 27/pg 60 Nov 8 End - Page 20

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divan thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well I am happy to know that all of you wonderful people are enjoying them. It time it to write makes it worth when you appreciate it.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: divan

Jigna: "hmm divan yeh sameer kaun hai???? " thought I introduce a hunk to make life more interesting for Jai.

I think I have retired Taz to a happy married life with Moksh and Ranveer is well on being happy with his biwi so got to have a new virtual pal to play around with. 😃



😆😆😆
then come on down sameer (heh the price is right!)😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Divan,

now that update made my day,too good.I love Jealous JW,so hot.haila,faint.Lookin forward to how he is goin to say sorry to his bani rani.too cute.cant wait. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Jai is bitten by the jelousy bug?? 😆 uh-oh

But kaun se papad belne padayge Bani rani ko manane ke liye? 😆

Great part
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi divan…fabulous update 👏 👏 …jealous Jaiiiiiiiiii…😉 and we love a jealous looking Jai. Sameer aka Mr. Ripped Jeans…ooh la la…sounded quite nice! 😳 😍 Sharam kar Tazoo…ur married now!!😆

So Sameer is doing up the mount abu haveli…nice.
Jai and Bani had a tiff over Sameer. 😕 😕 Jai made it clear that Bani was flirting and she didn't like the way Jai was behaving. Argument got a little too much and Bani spent the night in the guest room. 😕

The next morning when Jai found out she left for work without even seeing he knew he had behaved like at duffer and now has to manao her. That part when he asked Rano what he should do was too good! 👍🏼
Yeah we'd like to see him get down on his knees and grovel 😆 😆 Bani would surely love that😉…wonder if Jai actually would do that though, 🤔

Cont soon…can't wait to read what happens next.

Tazoo 😊
Edited by Taz234 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago


Pt 9 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&TPN=1 9
Pt 10 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&TPN=2 1
Pt 11 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&TPN=2 3
Pt 12 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&TPN=2 3
Pt 13 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&TPN=2 35


Another racy episode in the saga of Jai and Bani life. Thanks everyone for wonderful comments.

AT Seventeen Pt 14

Meri ye deewangi kabhi na hogi kam
Jitne bhi chaahe tum karlo sitamb
Meri ye deewangi kabhi na hogi kam
Jitne bhi chaahe tum karlo sitamb
Mujhse bolo ya na bolo
Mujhko dekho ya na dekho
Ye bhi maana mujhse milne aaoge nahin
Saare sitamb hanske main sahoon to
Rooth na jaana tumse kahoon to (1942 Love Story)


The beautiful arrangement of white lilies was returned back to Jai's office with a note, I think you need this more than me Mr Walia. Unlike you I don't have a guilty conscious. Jai banged his head on the desk mumbling "mei maar gaya."

The chocolates too came back with a card. This time Bani had really gone out of the way to let him know what a fool he had been. He was in the process of devouring his six chocolate that Adi walked in. Looking at half eaten box of chocolates Adi remarked, "Jai are you celebrating some good news alone?"
"No just feeding my depression with sugar." Jai barked.
"Isn't that something the women do. Ahem don't you feel you could be like…who is that guy…Mel…last name yaad nahi aata…"
"Gibson." Jai hissed.
Adi finished off his thought, "Mel Gibson in the movie…What Woman Wants…very funny movie. To know the inner secrets of a woman, now wouldn't that make the life easier."
"I am not being Mel Gibson…I know what my woman…" Jai trailed off miserably.
Adi picked up the card and read the lines and burst out laughing. Jai glowered at him, "saala meri haal nahi dekhta aur Bani ki card par kar hasne laaga. Get out Aditya Bali."


main kyaa karun raam mujhe buddha mil gayaa
haay, haay buddhu mil gayaa

main gudiyaa hasin meri morani si chaal hai
sar mein chale usake bigade vichaar ve
sameer ko bhaga diya mujhe buddhu mil gayaa
main kyaa karun raam mujhe buddhu mil gayaa...

mei biwi haseen meraa buddhu gussa aa gaya
diye mujhe phuul buddhu soch kaar mei jaunigi unki paas re
main maanugi nahi uski baath mujhe buddhu mil gaya
main kya karun raam mujhe buddhu mil gaya ...

restaurant pe mujhe buddhu le kar aa gaya
main ne jo uthaya ghuunghat buddhu gussaa khaa gaya
ab dekho uksa gussa hona ka anjaam mujhe buddhu mil gaya
main kya karun raam mujhe buddhu mil gaya...


ps if you are planning a romantic dinner at a retaurant forget it…you'll be eating romantic dinner alone.

Adi laughed some more and said, "Kya kamaal ki hai teri biwi, absolutely dham dhama dham. A guy comes near your wife and you pagla jump to wrong conclusion. Hey I think you should borrow the book you gave Ranveer, 'The ABC of Marriage'. You really need desperate help Jai."
Jai picked up paperweight from his desk and raised his hand as if to throw, "You namaak haraam, pouring salt on my bleeding heart….chup chap nikaal jaa…nahin toh…" Adi quickly exited slamming the door.
A while late Rano came to the office to call him for a meeting. Seeing the flowers she remarked, "Nice flowers Mr Walia. I guess the groveling worked."
A dark look from the boss and she realized he was still in deep waters. Feeling sorry for him she asked, "what else did you try"
"Chocolates! And before you ask where they are, I ate them all."
"Well all that sugar must be making your brain gallop like a horse. Haven't you come with any ideas at all about how to pacify your biwi?" The question remained unanswered.
"Well I am sure we can think of something but first you have a meeting to attend. First floor conference room…We hope to you there in few minute." Rano smiled and
left.
Rest of the day the work tied him down a little, but in between he did rack his brains to come up with hacker proof solution to his problem…no Microsoft Windows solution here, if all fails reboot the pc.
And so it was in the late afternoon, Jai Walia called the publisher of Love Games 101 to find out the author Sheena Row's phone number or email…may be she can give him an idea of how to patofy his rani….
XXXXX


Carefully following the plan laid out by Sheena, Jai left his office and got his driver to drop him off at the Harley-Davidson India. A spanking new 2008 model, red FLHTC Classic bike was waiting for him. The manager handed him the keys and a bag which contained designer jackets for him and her, compliments of the management. Rocky the mechanic at the shop took Jai out for the test ride.



Hour later, Jai complete with his Harley-Davidson jacket parked the bike outside AD Group offices. The staff at the offices gawked at Jai dressed in jeans and biker jacket. Couple of the guys who had spied the bike parked outside, rushed outside and admired the bike and soon a crowd had gathered around the bike.

Jai:


Bani:


Jai had colluded with Pushkar and AD and made sure Bani was not occupied with any work and therefore Bani was surprised to see Jai walking in with a gift bag. Handing her the gift, Jai watched as she took out the jacket and threw a suspicious glare at him. "Yeh kya hai Jai."
Jai smirked and said, "Jacket! I am taking you for a ride. Put the jacket on and lets go."
Crossing her arms, she said, "I don't want to go anywhere with you. I am still mad. Don't think you are forgiven just because you bought me a jacket."
Scooping her up, Jai snapped, "Well if you want to do it this way, no problem. One way or other we are going for a ride."
Jai strode out of the office carrying Bani in his arms. Seeing all her co-workers staring at her, Bani hid her face in his chest and asked him to put her down.
The staff whooped and whistled at the pair. Bani was too embarrassed to look at anyone and told Jai, she will get him for this. Jai just laughed and said he will look forward to his punishment.
The crowd parted as Jai walked up to the bike. Putting Bani down and held the jacket out for her to put on. Sitting down on the bike, he asked her sit behind him. With every one watching Bani had no option but to get on the bike and as Jai revved up the bike she clung to him tightly as they zoomed off.
Ten minutes later Bani's nerves had calmed down enough for her to look ahead and asked Jai, "Where are we going?'
Jai just turned on the Harmon/Kardon audio system and said "This is where we are going."

Ay Kya Bolti Tu
Ay Kya Main Boloon
Sun
Suna
Aati Kya Khandala
Kya Karoon Aake Main Khandala
Ghoomenge Phirenge Naachenge Gaayenge
Aish Karenge Aur Kya

Ay Kya Bolti Tu ...

Barsaat Ka Season Hai
Khandala Jaake Kya Karna
Barsaat Ke Season Mein Hi To Maza Hai Meri Maina
Bhigoongi Main Sardi Khaansi Ho Jaayegi Mujhko
Chhata Leke Jaayenge Paagal Samjhi Kya Mujhko
Kya Karoon Samajh Mein Aaye Na
Kya Karoon Tujhse Main Jaanu Na
Arre Itna Tu Kyon Soche Main Aage Tu Peechhe
Bas Ab Nikalte Hain Aur Kya

Ay Kya Bolti Tu ..,

Lonavala Mein Chikki Khaayenge Waterfall Pe Jaayenge
Khandala Ke Gnat Ke Oopar Photo Kheench Ke Aayenge
Haan Bhi Karta Na Bhi Karta Dil Mera Deewana
Dil Bhi Saala Party Badle Kaisa Hai Zamaana
Phone Laga Tu Apne Dil Ko Zara
Poochh Le Aakhir Hai Kya Maajra
Arre Pal Mein Phisalta Hai Pal Mein Sambhalta Hai
Confuse Karta Hai Bas Kya


Bani could not believe Jai could be serious about going to Khandala on the bike and asked loudly. "Are you serious? We are going to Khandala on the bike?"
Over the noise of the bike, Jai shouted, "Yep. You better hang on tight because once I am clear off the city, we are going to fly."

Khandala







To be continued…What do you think, shall we make him grovel once he lands in Khandala?

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Posted: 17 years ago

Yay... I'm first!!

YES! we should make him grovel! on his knees, promosing he'll never do it again!😉😆

Jai couldn't think of any plans on his own and had to go to Sheena Aunty for help! awww...😆😳

Wow.. what a bike! JB on that?😲 can't imagine it!😆

Continue soon! - see.. I'm keeping up!👍🏼

Edited by bugs_bunny - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
"awesome" 👏
Jai you you...such a darling 😳 ....
I'd love to go on ride on that bike 😃 😳 😳
do continue ASAp!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 😆 😆
sush di kya idea tha
hehe
i wanna go khandala!
actually i just want to go on fasttttttttttttt bike ride
got to get one of the guys at uni who drives them 😉
saw hot one 😳
continue soon divan 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
How cute, haaaaaaaaaaaa 😆 I can't believe JB are going to Khandala on a bike. My poor Jai has suffered enough no more making him grovel.

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