FF - At 17, update Pt 27/pg 60 Nov 8 End - Page 17

Hi Divan…see u have updated again 😃…twice woh bhi? Dil thaam ke padh na para mujhe…pata nahin kya roop dekhne ko mile apna 😆

Part 9

The JB scene was really sweet again 😳…Jai lazy to get up …then admiring Bani's behind in that tight looking skirt! 😉 😉Poor Bani had so much work to get through at the office. All them files to attend to. Nice of Pushkar to help out 😃 and go through them. JB both tried calling each other both were busy throughout the day. 😔

As for my entry..haila 😳…that was interesting again!! 😆 😳

It was on his return from lunch that he spied Taz walking towards Moksh's office.
"Hi Taz!" he called out. Hi Jaiiiiiiiiii!!!! 😍
Taz batted her long lashes at him and blew him a kiss and said in her sultry voice,Mwah!!! 😳 "Hello Mr Walia. Just popped in to see Moksh for a minute, I hope you don't mind." Yep come to see hubby dearest! 😳
"No problem Taz."
Taz knocked on the office door and a female voice called out to come in. Opening the door, Taz stared at Pia, sitting at Moksh's desk and admiring her nails. yeh chudail yahaan kya kar rahi hai? 😡 Giving Taz a look over, Pia said coldly, "Can I help you?"
Taz smirked back and said, "No I don't think so. I don't need no manicure or pedicure today. Great line!!! 🤣 🤣 Yes pedicure manicure sab hogaya aaj…bas ab tera chehra naunch na baaki hai! 😡 😆 Actually I am looking for Moksh."
"What business do you have with Moksh?"
Getting a little irate, Taz said, "I don't think that is any of your business. Actually what are you doing in his office, sitting at his desk." Yes Pia !!! No hanging around in my hubby's office! Scram!! 😡
Pia fluffing her hair said, "I am waiting for Moksh so we can go out for lunch." Not if I can help it!
Taz making herself comfortable on the chair at side, 'Well then we can wait together, since I want to take him out for lunch." And he will certainly go with me! 😉 Guess she doesn't know we tied the knot hey?
Pia's brows knitted tightly and she threw Taz a spiteful glare. Nazar neeche kar!!! Ankhen phor doongi!! 😡 😆
Few minutes later Moksh came to his office to find the two of them locked in a silent duel. Clearing his throat, he pecked Taz on the cheek and said warmly, "Nice surprise honey." Awwww…my sweety!!! 🤗 Mwah!!!
Taz pulled Moksh close to her and wrapping her arms around his neck and purred, 'Hello dahling…thought I would surprise you by taking you out to lunch." Blushing slightly Moksh looked at Pia's stunned face Ha ha! and stood up pulling Taz close to him,hai…mein marjawana…making Pia a little jealous are we? 😉 "Pia meet my wife Taz.Pia…marr gaya kya yeh sun kar? 😆 Taz this is one of my friend, Pia." No need to tell me who this kebab mein haddi is… 😡
Taz extended her hand to Pia and said, "Nice to meet you Pia." Pia ignored Taz's extended hand Chal accha hai…haath mila ti toh shayad todh hi deti! 😃 and walked around the desk and looked at Moksh and said, "I'll catch up with you later." And Taz shot a look at Pia, which construed, "you come near my guy again and you're dead meat lady." Yeah…I'll send my dhanno after u! Kuchal ke rakhdegi woh

Loved this part👏👏👏….was hilarious I must say!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣

Jai stopping by at Bani's office to find her still engrossed in those files…poor woman didn't even realize the time. Seems she needs a little tlc now! 😉 😉

Ok now for Part 10.

Love the choice of song…one of my faves from Love in Tokyo…very romantic number that. 😍
Raashi is feeling a little sad with the Ranveer's behaviour towards her. 😔 The girl needs some tlc too it seems…lekin Ranveer ko fursat mile tab na…still eyeing girls in the office! 😡 Kambhakt kahin ka! Bani discussing it with Jai for him to have a chat to Ranveer…he already did… but now it seems he will need to talk about a lot more!

Jai buying them books for Ranveer!! 🤣 🤣 Kya kitaabe thi! 👏 'ABC's of marriage by Sabs and Karuna', Yep got that right!!! 😆 'Love Games 101 by Sheena Row' Sheena ko 101 games aate hai? I didn't know…😲😆 and CD titled, 'Pravachans on Relationships by Maasi Maata.'Sure this book isn't by Kiran Dixit? 🤔😆 Pravachans ke maamle mein… she takes the cake. 😆

Yeh pia ki toh mein!!!!! 😡 Mere pati ke peeche pari hai!!! 😡 I hope that taxi wala drives u straight in to hell…chowpatty pe nahin. Wait a minute… kahin iss taxi waale ko maine to kareeb nahin liya? 🤔 😉 In that case Pia aaja chowpatty…bahut achhi bhel puri khilaungi!!🤣

More of Taz in next update......the whip will be flying again. Hmmmm…I like the sound of that!!!! 😆 🤣 Looking forward to it

Great updates again… 👏 👏 👏 Cracked me up as usual…😆…what a character I have become in this ff! 😆 Do cont soon! 😉

Tazoo! 🤗

It was Jai who finally pulled Ranveer into his office and had a frank discussion about women, marriage, s** and pregnancy. He tried to emphasize how important it was for Ranveer to be close to Raashi for the well being of their child. Jai picked up couple of books and handed them to Ranveer, "Bedtime reading…current bestsellers." Ranveer looked at the title, 'ABC's of marriage by Sabs and Karuna', 'Love Games 101 by Sheena Row' and CD titled, 'Pravachans on Relationships by Maasi Maata.'

Ranveer flitted through the pages of Love Games and his eyes boggled at some to the titles of the chapters, '101 Kiss Games', '101 Places for Making Love' and '101 Ways to Spice Her Up'. He read few of lines on '101 Ways to Spice Her Up' and turned red, "Mamaji have you tried any on these yourself?"

OMG, 😆

Jai is such a liar, he learned everything from my book and he refuses to acknowledge it. 😡

Divan,

You are cracking me up royally these days. Loved the update. So Pia is being delivered on the beach for the
'Visarjan' or what? She will be immersed in the ocean for sure!!

Loved it.

At Seventeen – PT 11

The car stopped at the Chowpatty Beach and Pia jumped out of the car and slammed the door. Looking at the driver she screamed, "Ek hi paisa meh nehi milenga, jaana kahaan tha aur leiya kahan aur." The driver just looked at Pia as if she was some nakhrewali chaalu aurat and told her coldly, "Jaa yahan se, mujhe tere gandi paise nahi chahiyan. Ganga mei jake bhi tuh khabhi tere paap nehi dhulage…" The cab took off leaving Pia being gawked at by the passerbys.
"Aaye babu, aye baby, aaj dekho yeh Basanti ka kamal. Layi hu sirf tumari liye ek naya khel. Kitne dino baad yeh meri hunter ko milega kisko nachana…aaye babu…aaye baby, aaj bajungi mei kisseka bandbaja." The woman was dressed as a banjaran complete with heavy silver kadas and loud gungaroos. The men whistled at the way she wielded her jet black whip, whirling overhead in intricate shapes.
Pia walked over to where the crowd was gathering listening to the woman's lilting voice mixed in with the biting sound of the whip. Her eyes widen in shock as she recognized Taz in the colourful clothes. Taz signalled a young boy to start the portable CD player and masti filled voice boomed out loudly, the crowd joined in whistling and clapping as the whip once again flew.


aaj na chhodungi tujhe dam dama dam
tune kya samajhi hai mujhe dam dama dam - 2
dil mein hain toofaan bhara dam dama dam
naach meri soutan jara dam dama dam - 2
aaj na chhodungi tujhe dam dama dam
tune kya samajhi hai mujhe dam dama dam
dil mein hain toofaan bhara dam dama dam
naach meri soutan jara dam dama dam) - 2

chikani chikani patali kamar aise na hila
aaja mere taal pe tu nachegi to Pia- 2
dance sikhaaungi tujhe dam dama dam
aaj bataaungi tujhe dam dama dam
dil mein hain toofaan bhara dam dama dam
naach meri soutan jara dam dama dam - 2

chalati bhirati bijaliyon ko aankh na dikha
patali gali se chala ja saamane na aa - 2
pal mein jalaaungi tujhe dam dama dam
raakh banaaungi tujhe dam dama dam
dil mein hain toofaan bhara dam dama dam
naach meri soutan jara dam dama dam - 2

doom dabaake bhaagegi tu kahan meri maan
aa gayi hoon todane main tere sab hadkiyan- 2
bachke rehna dungi nahi tujhe dam dama dam
aaj tera sir thod ke mei nachoogein yahaan dam dama dam
dil mein hain toofaan bhara dam dama dam
naach meri soutan jara dam dama dam - 2

phir kisi ladaka ko na tu chhedega soutan
yaad dila dungi tujhe zindagi bhar yeh huntervali - 2
dhul dikhaaungi tujhe dam dama dam
aaj mitaaungi tujhe dam dama dam
dil mein hain toofaan bhara dam dama dam
naach meri soutan jara dam dama dam - 2
dam dama dam ...(Hindi Movie/Album Name: DIL )


Pulling Pia inside the circle Taz smiled wickedly and said, "Pia dahling, aaj tu nahi bachengi…aaj meh tera aisa haal kardoongi ke doobara tuh kisi aur ka maal pe haath rekhna bhul jayengi." As the Taz swung the whip, Pia felt the smooth leather brush her leg making her jump. Poor Pia jumped and twisted as the whip flew in sync with the music. Initially the whip just brushed her skin but as the crowd grew louder the whip flew faster and Pia's skin felt the burn from the whip. Taz just glided around the circle, elegantly weaving the whip around Pia. With fire blazing from her eyes and her hands flashing in pattern about her as she worked the whip, the crowd was totally mesmerized by the show. As the last lyric of song finished, the whip flashed in a finale overhead of Pia and the crowd erupted in shouts of dam dhama dam, clapping and whistling. Taz came and picked Pia up from the sand where she had collapsed and made her bow to the crowd.
When the crowd dispersed, Taz sat Pia down on the sand and looked at her pitifully, "Did you think I wouldn't know if you tried digging your claws into Moksh. I warned you the other day to keep away but you couldn't could you. Just remember this Pia, Moskh is for my eyes only…for my eyes only."

No more Pia after this as Taz has given her fabulous lesson to keep away from married men.

Taz dear, your comments are killers, my daily dose of laughter medicine.

I hope you like the next update because girl you are the star.

Divan,

I am shocked. our Bholi bhali Taz knows how to crack the whip!! 😲


I can imagine Pia's face and I am rolling after I read Taz's dialogues, for her eyes only!! 🤣

You are on a roll babes!!

Sheena "I am shocked. our Bholi bhali Taz knows how to crack the whip!!" I guess when Sangs mentioned huntervali, it just happened, I remember seeing that movie couple of times, it has Dilip kumar in it, don't know who the girl was but she did play pretty good angry young woman role.

Taz is being such a good sport.

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Divan,

I am shocked. our Bholi bhali Taz knows how to crack the whip!! 😲


I can imagine Pia's face and I am rolling after I read Taz's dialogues, for her eyes only!! 🤣

You are on a roll babes!!

Sheena Divan...gave me heart attack with that part..." for my eyes only"...toh phir sab ne kyun parha!! 🤣 🤣 Had me blushing!!!😳😳
Aur mein bholi bhali hi hoon...divan ne mere haathon mein chaabuk thama diya! 🤣



Divan...that dilip kumar movie...i think its Aan na? Nadira was the heroine...she played an angry princess. Love that movie...seen it many a times😃

Ok now i am commenting on the last part again...i commented but pata nahin post kyun nahin hua...😕...doing it again!

Oh mannnnnnnnn....me dressed in a banjaran's outfit!! 😳 👍🏼 Cool...always wanted to sport that look once in my life....meri yeh tamana poori kardi! 😆 😆

Pia paunch gayi chowpatty...loved how the taxiwala refused to touch the money she was giving👏👏...loved that line he said:

Ganga mei jake bhi tuh khabhi tere paap nehi dhulage…"

My entrance!!! Wow!!!😳 Kya dialogue tha!!!
"Aaye babu, aye baby, aaj dekho yeh Basanti ka kamal" .

The men whistled at the way she wielded her jet black whip, whirling overhead in intricate shapes. Pia runnnnnnnnn....meri chaabuk ki awaaz sunay de rahi haina?Pia sach mein gayi kaam se dam dama dam!!! 🤣 🤣 Fab song!!! 👏

When the crowd dispersed, Taz sat Pia down on the sand and looked at her pitifully, "Did you think I wouldn't know if you tried digging your claws into Moksh.I keep my eyes open all the time dear...sab cheez par nazar hai meri!😉 I warned you the other day to keep away but you couldn't could you. Just remember this Pia, Moskh is for my eyes only…for my eyes only."Yes...doobara nazar maari Moksh par toh aankhen nikaal ke gotiya khelungi like Crimemaster gogo! 🤣😆

Divan...super yaar👏 ...bada mazaa aya whipping Pia...😃 After that i am sure she will keep well away from my Moksh! 😳 After such a whipping, ff mein hi nazar nahin ayegi!!!

Great update👏👏

Tazoo 🤗

Divan,

Read the last three parts, enjoyed reading them 😆 😆 😆 . Loved your book titles 👏 👏 . pia will never in her life even look at a married man after the whip attack by Taz.

Kiran

Little bit of hanky panky going on with Ranveer, so little ones keep away.


Pt 9 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&TPN=1 9
Pt 10 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&TPN=2 1
Pt 11 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=726714&TPN=2 3

At Seventeen – PT 12

Teri kurty sexy lagdi ve kurty sexy - 2
Teri chunri sexy lagdi ve chunri sexy -2
Lagdi ve lagde ve, lagde ve lagde ve teri chunri sexy
Oy kee bolyo sonhiya
Tera cheara sexy lagda ve chehra sexy -2
Tera hasna sexy lagda ve hasna sexy-2
Ohh lagda ve lagda ve, lagda ve lagda ve tera chera sexy
Teri kurty sexy lagdi ve kurty sexy (kurty)
Teri kurty sexy lagdi ve kurty sexy (kurty)
(sexy).

Akhion me tasara hai
tasara mein sajara hai
sajara ke sath hai mene rahna

pyasa pyasa tan mera
pyasi dhadkan meri
ishq se hai mera kahna

Tera liya hi meri mohabat
Tuhi zindagani meri
Tujhse kahani meri
Sab kuch hai yehi khena

Lagdi ve lagdi ve, lagdi ve lagdi ve
Teri aakhiyan sexy (VADA)

Ranveer was behaving oddly and Raashi could not for the life of her figure out what her miya was upto. Lately he wasn't running away when she came near him or touched him and he had paid compliment when she had worn the new baby pink kurti and pants. Bani had taken her shopping and they had visited couple of designer shops which carried a selection for mum tobe…the clothes were in colours and very trendy. Bani had persuaded Raashi to get the flowy short kurtis and comfortable crop pants and skirts telling her she shouldn't care what the others thought and should dress to please Ranveer. In fact the other day he surprised her by bringing flowers, her favourite…yellow roses.
Bani had caught him a couple of times sitting late in the study, engrossed in the books Jai had given him. Couple of weeks later Bani persuaded Raashi to set up an intimate dinner in the balcony of their bedroom. They went out and got some scented candles, flowers, bottle of Ranveer's favourite chocolate cake and some fragranced massage oil. Raashi had learnt from attending Taking Care During Pregnancy classes that having regular foot massage helps reduce swelling feet problem. Plus her Bani mami hinted that she did not have to restrict herself to foot massages.
They went to the bookstore and picked up a book on making cocktails and got Tony, the butler to order the required liquors. They tested out some the cocktails on Tony, who picked Pineapple Leap and Tequila Furnace as his favourites. He suggested making some Pineaaple Leap substituting sparkling grape juice instead of alcohol for Raashi.

Pineapple Leap

1 1/4 oz tequila
2 oz pineapple juice
1/4 lemon
1/4 oz grenadine

In a shaker with ice squeeze juice of lemon. Add other ingrdients. Shake well and strain in a tall glass on the rocks.


Tequila Furnace

1 shot tequila
5-10 drops Tabasco hot pepper sauce
salt
lime wedge

In a chilled shot glass drip tabasco. Top with tequila. Consumed in the classic lick(salt), shoot(tequila) and suck (on the lime).

Ranveer's almost stepped out of his room seeing the glow from the candles and fragrant scent wafting in the air. He could see Raashi standing in the balcony and walking up to her, he took in her glowing look. Wearing a flowy floral chiffon dress that clung to her curvy bre**** and the fell softly on her rounded stomach.
"Raashi what is all this?" he asked pointing at the table set for two.
"Only dinner! Thought we could have special night together, seeing that we hardly get to go out." Raashi walked over and put her arms around his neck, which made Ranveer take a quick gulp of air and blurt out, "Err…Raashi thank you."
Raashi gushed in her breathless voice, "You can thank me later Ranveer…" She went to take his briefcase from his hand and Ranveer tried to stop her, "No Raashi I can put it away…" but the bag fell on the floor and flew open scattering the contents. Raashi looked petrified, "Oh no…Ranveer I am so sorry…" she bent down and started picking up papers and books. Putting them on the table, she glanced at the title of the book, 'Love Games 101' and her eyes widened and stared at Ranveer. Ranveer's face turned red with embarrassment. "Where did you get this book from?" Ranveer scratched his head and mumbled, "mamaji gave it to me."
It was Raashi's turn to blush, "Mamji, oh my God Ranveer I don't think I can face mamji again."
Ranveer felt a tinge of laughter tickle the back of his throat, trying to be casual, he flicked the pages and said, "Acutally its amazing this book. This author is amazing…come look at this…" and he held the book open for her to read.
Raashi took read a few lines and then pushed the book away, "No I don't want to read anymore. That is so..." Raashi could not utter the wild thoughts going through her mind. She felt hot even though the evening air was cool. She walked over to the table and gulped down a glass of her non-alcoholic cocktail. Filled up the glass again and drank some more. She picked up the other glass that held the tequila cocktail and held it out for Ranveer, "Here try this. It's a new drink for you to try."
Sniffing the liquid, Ranveer asked, "Smells like tequila. What else is in there?"
"Little bit of hot sauce. It's called Tequila Furnace, you lick the salt, knock back the tequila and then suck the lime." Picking up the lime slice from the glass, Raashi licked the slice little bit, satisfying her craving for something sour and stuck the slice back on the rim of the glass.
With little hesitation, Ranveer drank his tequila and sputtered slightly as he felt the kick from the hot sauce burn his tongue. Instead of sucking on the lime he picked up Raashi's drink and gulped it down. They both looked at each other and burst out laughing, Ranveer pulling Raashi close to him whispered in her ears, "I don't think Tequila Furnace any more when I have you to warm me up." Raashi clinging to him whispered back, "After dinner we are going to read that book together and may be play out couple of those games."
XXXXX
Bani had gone down to talk to Tony and find out if Raashi had taken the drinks and food for her little dinner party. Assuring Bani that everything was taken care of and since Ranveer had gone up, neither had come down, she should not stress…things must have gone according to Raashi mam's wish.
When she stepped into her room, Bani saw Jai out on the balcony using his binocular. Creeping up to him she saw he was looking in the direction of Ranveer's balcony. Snatching the bins away, Bani scolded, "That is very naughty of you Mr Walia. Didn't know you were a peeping tom." Jai tried to grab the bins back but Bani was too quick and ran inside the room.
Bani pushing the bins under the pillow and lying "You can't have them. I am not letting you spy on Ranveer."
Jai sitting next to her and trying to get his hands under the pillow, "Oh come on Bani, don't be a spoil sport. Just a little peek…I just want to see what he is up to with all that laughter coming from there."
Slapping his hands lightly, Bani pushed him, "They are only having a romantic dinner. I suggested it to Raashi, to give Ranveer a little push. And if they are laughing than it must be working. May be Raashi will get lucky tonight."
Jai now pinning her down, growled at her, "Mrs Walia you can plan romantic dinner for my nephew and forget about doing anything romantic for me." Bani wrapping her arms around his neck, "I could make a new cocktail to try, it's called The Goody, it's a New Orleans special."

(The Goody

Cocktail Glass with Sunset in it.

1 oz dark rum
1 oz light rum
1 oz orgeat
2 oz orange juice
1 oz pineapple juice

Mix well and serve in a tall glass over ice. )

Jai running his tongue over her lips, murmured, "I think I will give it a miss. There something better her for me to taste…"

Happy readings. Do let me know if you liked the update, especially from the readers who wanted me to carry on…where are you guys.