FF: The paths of life Pt 3 updated!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys,

I have been reading a lot of FF's and I thought I would try a hand and see if I could write one. I have a few chapters in mind and so I have decided to post it. The first part was an idea borrowed from my friend who got it from somewhere. I would like to give credit to whoever thought of it (who I have no idea….), nywayz, the rest of the chapters are figments of my imagination and other inspirations. I don't know how good I am with writing these, but I have 2 try right?? Hehe….😆Nyways, hope you guys enjoy it and let me know whether I should continue or not…..Have fun!

-Sia

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14 years ago

We, the members of The Charter, do hereby solemnly swear that we shall follow every one of these rules and shall live to protect our secrecy. Any rule breaking will result in the culprit owing every one else $1000 and shall be put into a sticky position as a member. The rules are as follow:

    We shall always be there for one another before anything else. We shall not let anyone push us around and shall do whatever we choose to do. We shall not allow females to come and interfere in our mission of life. We shall not get married before 30, unless we are forced to, in which case we shall not be happy about it. We shall meet every year regardless of the situations in life, if god forbids we are separated. We shall promise to achieve something great in life with honesty, integrity and hard-work. We shall live our life with pride and dignity.
  1. We shall make heads turn, but never succumb to anyone's wiles.

And so on and so forth……

To amend any of these rules, we shall have a majority vote by all four of the members and allow the amendment to sit in temporarily for a while to make sure it is acceptable by all. If one of us isn't happy with the results, we shall forget the amendment and the charter will stay as it was.

Signed by blood and promised by heart, Jai Walia (age 12), Ranveer Bali (age 11 years, 9 months), Pushkar Shukla (age 11 years, 7 months) and Sahil Dixit (age 11 years, 4 months).

Present day

The door opens to a wide, open and inviting house to reveal an old lady, kind in features and open in countenance going up rich, dark mahagony spiral stairs to a room that looked like a mini-house itself. Furnished with dark brown leather chairs, shelfs full of books, a huge plasma tv and a stereo system, leading to another room that held a king size bed and a rocker chair. And as she usually found the room in, it was a mess. She shook her head and went to open the curtains to let the bright, spring sun to shine down on her grandson.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great beginning!! aww they had a club! how sweet! 😆 and i love the rules.. esp the marriage one 'we shal not be happy about it!' 😆 😆

waiting to read more! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww...jai, sahil, ranveer and pushy...all under 15 yrs of age..awww...how cute naa... 😳 😳 😳 like the idea...cant wait for part 2
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 start to ur ff! 👏

n welcome to the forum 😃

ahhhhhhhh the kiddo's made a pact, so sweet!!!!

unbeknown to them, their pact of sorts is laiden with major pitfalls.....especially with rule 3 n 4 🤣 😆

boys jus wait for the joys of teenage adolescence!!!! pact, what pact!!!

pls continue soon

ta.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part 👏 👏 👏

awww so cute
there little club and pact

great start luved it

ctn soon

dammy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

great beginning!! aww they had a club! how sweet! 😆 and i love the rules.. esp the marriage one 'we shal not be happy about it!' 😆 😆

waiting to read more! 😛

Aww….thnx!! Sweet hai na?? lol…..yep…the last part of that rule is going 2 be hard to follow J

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jnawaz

awww...jai, sahil, ranveer and pushy...all under 15 yrs of age..awww...how cute naa... 😳 😳 😳 like the idea...cant wait for part 2
JAZ

Thnx jnawaz!! Lol…yep they are all under 15 ;)….their thoughts and ideas are definetly going 2 change J

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: static_chaos23

gr8 start to ur ff! 👏

n welcome to the forum 😃

ahhhhhhhh the kiddo's made a pact, so sweet!!!!

unbeknown to them, their pact of sorts is laiden with major pitfalls.....especially with rule 3 n 4 🤣 😆


boys jus wait for the joys of teenage adolescence!!!! pact, what pact!!!

pls continue soon

ta.

thnx and thnx 4 the welcome!!!! Lol….yep, they made a pact J now it is to how much any of them can follow (especially 3 n 4 J )…..hehe…..they def will be going wat pact?? Hehe……shall put up the next part soon!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: damilola

awesome part 👏 👏 👏

awww so cute
there little club and pact

great start luved it

ctn soon

dammy

Thnx dammy!!! Will be continuing ASAP!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys,

here is part 2!!! hope u enjoy it!!! don't 4 get 2

leave ur comments both good and bad 😆 ...i know

there are no JB parts yet, but will come soon...i

needed 2 set up his life style 😊

-sia

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hey guys,

here is part 2!!! hope u enjoy it!!! don't 4 get 2 leave ur comments both good and bad 😆

-sia

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DM (dadi ma): Munna, wake up..she said removing the sheets to find two pillows stacked vertically to resemble a person sleeping there.

O this boy, she thought exasperate yet affectionately and went down the stairs to see her husband shut his phone off.

DM: Who were you talking to? she asked as she set breakfast for him.

GD(grand dad): oh, no one sweetheart, he said trying to conceal his conversation with his grandson with a grin.

And as always, she could read through him.

DM: Where is he? What did he do this time?

GD: you won't believe where he is! He went down to Australia on a whim yesterday night and he was just telling me about the business deal……

DM: You know instead of allowing him to jump from one country to another on a whim for business, he should be married by now and living a life that is meant to be. Instead you encourage him to be drowned in work and allow him to live in that office of his. I can't wait till he settles down. Yesterday, I saw a girl at the temple. She would suit him very well. I want you to talk to him about this.

GD: Of course I'll talk to him. You are right! He should definitely get married. He said chuckling at his wife's worries. It wasn't surprising that she wanted him to settle down, but they both knew Jai Walia at the moment wasn't interested in getting married.

DM: You know, whenever I ask him to get married he changes the subject by praising me..this boy! I don't know what we should do. He is 26, handsome, has an empire after his name, has the heart of gold, any girl he wants would accept his proposal. But, he doesn't want anyone! She said frustrated.

GD: You and I both know what kind of life he has lived with Krishna and Uday. They both barely got along all their married life and have given the impression that marriage only leads to pain.

DM: but, he has lived with us since he has turned 18! Now, he is 26. Seeing us, he sure must have understood that marriage isn't synonymous to hurt and pain.

GD: really now? He said as though thoughtfully…

DM: What does that mean Raichand Walia?? She said anger flaring at her nose.

GD: Nothing sweetheart, absolutely nothing, he said smiling charmingly at her.

DM: Oh, you and your grandson…she huffed not understanding how her husband could joke at a moment like this. This was important.

GD: Aww…I am sorry, he said pulling his ears and making a puppy dog face, what should I do to make up to you? He asked charmingly.

DM: Hmph…she replied and said…get him to agree to this marriage.

GD: Done. He said.

DM: Uh-huh. She knew how many times he had said that…and then conversation was interrupted…

JW: Hey, dadi, granddad!

DM: Hmph..she turned her head around.

JW looked at his GD who was making a cutting sign at his neck which told him that his dear dadi was mad at him.

JW: I am sorry dadi, he said pulling the same puppy dog expression that his granddad had worn a few minutes ago.

She couldn't help but laugh at this. They were one of a kind.

DM: I am going to slap you Jai Walia for giving me a scare today morning!

JW: Slap me later dadi, as for now, I am tired. Just finished a deal and I have to fly back to Sydney today night.

DM: Y didn't you just come back tomorrow?

JW: because I missed my sweetheart!

Edited by yme123 - 18 years ago

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