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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

me first

haila...jai...😆...he went to australia 😆...im sure i can picture dadi all 😡...becuase he didnt tell them...lol...jai and dada are to funny...cant wait to see what ahppns here...dadi a girl at the mandir huh 😉😉😉...any chance this girl is our famous bani...lol...cant wait til next update

JAZ

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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Love the rules, can't wait to see who breaks em first. Rules are meant to be broken!

Love dadi and dadi spoiling the grandkid.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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australia? 😆 😆 !! dada going to agree him for marriage! lets see how successful that is! LOL

girl at the mandir? is it bani 😉

cont. soon, cant wait to read about the other boys! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
great part 👏 👏 👏

omg he went to australia 😆 😆 😆
nice,great place to get away

the grandparents are soo adorable
funny 😆 😆

other boys i think they are ranveer,adi,and of course my pooch 😳
and the girl just has to be bani innit

awesome part

ctn soon

dammy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
"me first

haila...jai......he went to australia ...im sure i can picture dadi all ...becuase he didnt tell them...lol...jai and dada are to funny...cant wait to see what ahppns here...dadi a girl at the mandir huh ...any chance this girl is our famous bani...lol...cant wait til next update

JAZ"
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yep you're first ....you are right abt dadi, poor thing she is always last to find out things, but her love for them makes everything okay ....it might just be bani, but it might not ;)

thnx 4 ur comments!

-sia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: divan

Love the rules, can't wait to see who breaks em first. Rules are meant to be broken!

Love dadi and dadi spoiling the grandkid.

totally agree with you! rules are meant to be broken!! let's see how their lives are going to spiral into 😆

thnx 4 ur comments!

-sia

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Posted: 18 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

australia? 😆 😆 !! dada going to agree him for marriage! lets see how successful that is! LOL

girl at the mandir? is it bani 😉

cont. soon, cant wait to read about the other boys! 😆

poor dada is always stuck in in the middle :) ...we'll see wat he can do...and as 4 teh mandir girl, maybe it is bani, maybe not 😉

next update coming up 😳

-sia

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Posted: 18 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: damilola

great part 👏 👏 👏

omg he went to australia 😆 😆 😆
nice,great place to get away

the grandparents are soo adorable
funny 😆 😆

other boys i think they are ranveer,adi,and of course my pooch 😳
and the girl just has to be bani innit

awesome part

ctn soon

dammy

thnk u!! hehe....yep, jai likes to jump from one place to another...poor soul doesn't know where he belongs 😆...soon he will 😉....the boys are all coming up in the next chapter...hope u enjoy :) only ur pushkar will make an entrance in the chapter after this (after all he is special haina?? 😆...

enjoy,

-sia

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Posted: 18 years ago
#19

Hey guys, here is part 3! I am trying to get all the characters in and it is going to be long …I tried my best to get all the characters in. I still haven't brought in pushkar, I will in the next update and ofcourse JB

Hope you guys enjoy it! Don't forget to leave comments on your way out.

Thnx,

-Sia

DM: You like someone?? She asked excited, atleast her grandson was taking interest in someone, now it would be easier to convince him to get married.

JW: Of course, I told granddad. He said no! he said putting a sad face on!

DM: Raichand Walia, how can you stop our grandson from….

GD: of course, I couldn't allow him to sweep her off her feet!

DM: Y, god forbid, not?

JW: Because you are my sweetheart!

GD: See!! Who am I supposed to annoy if he steals you??? And with that Jai and Raichand Walia laughed at the expression she had!

DM: Oh! I am done with the both of you and she walked away!

Jai and Raichand looked at each other and Jai was going to cajole his grandmom, but his grandpa was already at it.

GD: Oh, come on it was a joke! I am sorry! He said trying to control the smile that was sneaking on his lips.

DM: Look, to make up for this, you have to promise me that Jai will agree to a marriage.

GD: Yes, like I said before and he walked away smiling…

In Jai's room

GD: Jai Walia! You listen to me! Your grandmom and I think it is high time for you to get married." He said shouting at the top of his lungs so that his wife could hear him and then in a softer tone asked Jai how the business meeting went.

Jai used to this smiled at his granddad and refused loudly just like he did everytime, with a retort coming back from his granddad and then him closing the door with a loud bang and his granddad doing the same.

Of course dadi knew what happened upstairs and shook her head. She couldn't wait for Jai to get married. She was nearly 76 and she knew she didn't have much time, especially after going through a bypass surgery. She really wanted to see him settled and have some sort of stability in his personal life.

In the DixitMansion

Bani: SAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!! I am going to hurt you!!!!!!!!!!!

S: Mom, protect me from this monster I have 2 call my cousin sister!!!!!

B: Sahil, you turned my hair PINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How the heck am I supposed to go 2 work?????? AHhhhhhhhh

S: Bani, there is a reason 4 doing that. Sahil replied innocently.

B: Oh, I am waiting 4 the reason…she said murderously holding the cricket bat in her hand.

S: well, you see, when you to the hospital to take care of your patients, instead of seeing your boring brown hair and being bored, they will laugh at your sight!! Isn't that wonderful???? You are the one who keeps saying laughter is the best medicine!! What do you say ma??

Sahil's Mom: Aap log nahi sudarenge!! Sahil, your are 25, what's with all this mischief?? Bani, beta go to a salon before you go 2 work!!

B: Maasi, I am already late!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sahil!!! You better run for your life!!! Not only should I save lives, I should know how 2 kill too?? Don't u think????

S: Mommmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!! He screamed and ran to get away from his cousin!

Just then his phone shrills in his ear (assume he is wearing headphones on (because of the iphone )

S: Ahh….how many people want to hurt me?? Who is this?? He demanded rather rudely while escaping for safety!'

J: Oi Sahil!!!!

S: Jai??? He stopped abrubtly, just enough for Bani to pull the carpet from underneath his leg so he would fall flat on his butt.

S: Ouch!!

J: What me calling you is ouch????? I am going to hurt you dude!

B: That should do for now, Bani thought contently… I am not done Sahil, she shouted at Sahil on her way out!!

S was now hearing way too many comments, and none of them being positive and his butt hurt!!!

S: I sure have a lot of people who wan to hurt me, he muttered to himself.

J: What?? He asked??

S: Sorry Jai, what's up dude?? He asked wincing slightly

J: You are coming this Saturday aren't you? I just wanted to remind you of our annual meeting according to the charter…you still coming right??

S: Yaar, we both see each other every day!

J: I know, but it has been 6 months since we have seen Pushkar, and a year with Ranveer. We have to continue our tradition.

S: Yep, true. Definetly will be there…

J: Good, I am going to call up Pushkar and Ranveer. Confirm with them too.

S: Cool, meeting at the club?? As always??

J: no, why don't we all go to the farmhouse…dadi has been bugging me to go there and visit the temple at the village! Koi, mannat or something..

S: Cool, no problem dude. See ya later. I have to go and meet Pia! She is going to murder me if I am late. Then he suddenly realizes again that everyone who he is meeting or will meet will be having murderous thoughts about him…he sighs to himself to meet his high strung girlfriend Pia.

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R: I am so sorry Rano, I didn't mean to disturb all your papers.

Ranveer said apologetically to Rano, his 13 year old neice's tuiton teacher. She had been teaching Rhea for the past 6 years and had been living in their outhouse as a all purpose worker, even though she had come to teach. But, she didn't mind, because the extra earning allowed her to still go to college and try to pursue her dream. She took pride in earning her way, even though she cleaned the house or tutored Rhea. For her any job that held dignity was good enough for her.

Ranv: Let me help you, he said offering assistance with all the papers she was picking up after Rhea.

Rano: No, Ranveer let it be. It was another part of pride, she was paid to do her job, and she wouldn't allow help.

Ranv: Don't be stubborn Rano, I am just helping you clean up.

Rano: No, Ranveer let it be. Why don't you go and relax? I will finish up here and finish cooking.

Ranv: That's okay, Rhea, and I will get take out food.

Rano: No, I promised Rhea that I would make some parathas, it won't take that long. Anyways, I promised your bhai and bhabi that I wouldn't let you guys' health spoil and I don't want to disappoint them.

Ranv: You know they wouldn't be disappointed by you Rano.

Rano: I know, they care too much, but I earn my way here Ranveer and I don't want to be a burden. Let it be, why don't you go to and watch TV. I'll get dinner in a half-hour.

Ranv: Rano, don't you have class in the evening?

Rano: Yep, that is why I am going to cook and then head over to college.

Ranv: You know if you cook, you have to eat too?

Rano: I'll eat something later, Ranveer don't worry. You go on.

Ranveer shook his head and walked out. Before he left, he took one last look at her beautiful face and walked out.

Rano stared after him and wished things were different. She was his maid (well, not really, but kind of), she wasn't embarrassed because she made an honest living, but he was the heir to a multi-million dollar industry and she was just a woman who cleaned after him. IF only….she smiled at her Cinderella state and went back to work….

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Posted: 18 years ago
#20

yah !!

my pooch is cuming soon😳

aww jai is so sweet to his grandma- sweeping her off her feet😆

his and his granddad is so funny😆..........they really want him to et married dnt they😉......oh no !!! grandma is sick- surgery😕

😆 sahil😆😆 he is one of the kids isnt he ? 😆😆...... ew pia 🤢

well now im happy dat they made the rule cos noone wil be marrying pia innit

aww my poor ranveer and rano

shes his cleaner..... poor gurl😕

she soo likes him and its so obvious dat he likes her too..... but he is richand she is not so she might think he likes her

awesome part 👏

luved it 😉

ctn soon

dammy

Edited by damilola - 18 years ago

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