Short FF: Choosing Sides

Hi people.. I wanted to try and right a ff.. it might be really bad, so please forgive me if it is.. but if its good, then give me some compliments to keep me going.. i'll understand if no comments are left..

here i go.....

Bani stared at the mailman in disbelief. "Who could have sent these flowers? And that, TWO BOUQUETS? Who could it be?"

"Excuse me maam, please sign here."

"Ohh, ya sure.." Bani quickly scribbled her signature on the dotted line and took her gifts in..

She opened the card:

Dear Bani,

Your lovely features taunt me everyday. My life has stopped after meeting you. If you feel the same way about me, then meet at the Terrace Garden Restaurant at 6:00.

Love,

Jai Walia

"Okay," Bani thought, " the biggest business tycoon in the city just wrote me a love note.. He does have a great personality and very cute eyes."

She opened the next letter:

Bani,

I know you must be thinking, the hottest guy in the college sent me flowers. He's so cute!!

Even though your right, I still want you to know that I kinda like you. If you reject me, don't feel bad, I'll understand. Meet me at the Taj Restaurant at 6:00.

Love,

Sahil

"Oh no," Bani exclaimed, "it's 5:45 now! In 15 minutes I have to choose who I like AND get ready.. Hay Bhagvan Mujhe Bhaajow!!"

DONE!!!!

i hope its not too bad..

if there are atleast five comments (good ones) i'll continue.. if not, i'll give up!

😆 Bani phas gayi tu 😆

Nice start 👏 👏
Continue soon

omg.awesme start.plz plz plz upfate soon. 😛

Great start
Bani phas gayi 😆
plz cont. soon

PART TWO:

*Recap* Bani recieved two love notes from two different people. Who will she go out with?

Bani quickly got ready. And might I add she looked STUNNING! 😉

She ran outside and caught a taxi, which took her to her destination, Terrace Gardens.

At the Terrace Gardens, Jai was patiently waiting for Bani in his beige suit and maroon tie. When Bani entered his palms began to sweat and his heart was thumping faster and faster.

"Hello Jai," Bani greeted camly.

"Hh-Lemmepullyourchair." He was so nervous that all the words came out at once! Nevertheless, he bravely got out of his seat and pulled a chair out for Bani. Actually pulled isn't the word, YANKED is! He pulled the chair with so much force that the chair stubbed Bani's toe!

"OOOOWWWWWW!!!" Bani yelled.
"I'm sorry, I mean, welll..."
"Its okay. Its okay."

Suddenly, Bani remembered that she had another hot date waiting for her: Sahil! (she still didnt know that they were uncle-nephew 😉 )A sneaky thought emerged into her mind, but she dismissed the idea. The idea kept knocking until finally she gave in and decided to go through with the plan.

"Mr. Walia," Bani said innocently, "can you escort me to the washroom, I'm kinda scared."

After a moment of disbelief and shock (lolz.. just kidding!!) Jai Walia nodded and did what he was asked.

Bani took a deep breath and opened the washroom door and..........

PUSHED MR. WALIA IN!! 😆

She quickly locked the door and put the "Out of Order" sign (from the door of the mens washroom beside her) on the door. With a slight giggle, Bani ran from there.

"Bani...Someone pushed me in here... Its kinda dark...Hello?? Bani??? Are you there...Helloo..."

AT THE TAJ RESTAURANT
Bani rushed in through the entrance only pausing to look at her watch. It was 6:15.. Only 15 minutes late.. "Not bad.. Not bad," she thought, "considering I just locked my date in the women's bathroom.. not bad!"

"HEEYY," said a voice, "there's my beautiful lady!"

"Sahil!!" Bani exclaimed.

"God, you know what's wrong with you women. You're always late. At that because you have to fix your hair, or your makeup, or your clothes, or your jewellery..."

Sahil went on and on until Bani got fed up and said,
"Look, I'm here - alright- I didn't come all this way to here your theories on why women are late."

"Oooo! Someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed today!! That's okay I like cranky women.. I find them attractive.."

Bani shuddered. "This guy is such a creep," Bani thought," I'm gonna make an excuse and check on my other date.."

to be continued....

PART TWO:

*Recap* Bani recieved two love notes from two different people. Who will she go out with?

Bani quickly got ready. And might I add she looked STUNNING!

She ran outside and caught a taxi, which took her to her destination, Terrace Gardens.

At the Terrace Gardens, Jai was patiently waiting for Bani in his beige suit and maroon tie. When Bani entered his palms began to sweat and his heart was thumping faster and faster.

"Hello Jai," Bani greeted camly.

"Hh-Lemmepullyourchair." He was so nervous that all the words came out at once! Nevertheless, he bravely got out of his seat and pulled a chair out for Bani. Actually pulled isn't the word, YANKED is! He pulled the chair with so much force that the chair stubbed Bani's toe!

"OOOOWWWWWW!!!" Bani yelled.
"I'm sorry, I mean, welll..."
"Its okay. Its okay."

Suddenly, Bani remembered that she had another hot date waiting for her: Sahil! (she still didnt know that they were uncle-nephew )A sneaky thought emerged into her mind, but she dismissed the idea. The idea kept knocking until finally she gave in and decided to go through with the plan.

"Mr. Walia," Bani said innocently, "can you escort me to the washroom, I'm kinda scared."

After a moment of disbelief and shock (lolz.. just kidding!!) Jai Walia nodded and did what he was asked.

Bani took a deep breath and opened the washroom door and..........

PUSHED MR. WALIA IN!!

She quickly locked the door and put the "Out of Order" sign (from the door of the mens washroom beside her) on the door. With a slight giggle, Bani ran from there.

"Bani...Someone pushed me in here... Its kinda dark...Hello?? Bani??? Are you there...Helloo..."

AT THE TAJ RESTAURANT
Bani rushed in through the entrance only pausing to look at her watch. It was 6:15.. Only 15 minutes late.. "Not bad.. Not bad," she thought, "considering I just locked my date in the women's bathroom.. not bad!"

"HEEYY," said a voice, "there's my beautiful lady!"

"Sahil!!" Bani exclaimed.

"God, you know what's wrong with you women. You're always late. At that because you have to fix your hair, or your makeup, or your clothes, or your jewellery..."

Sahil went on and on until Bani got fed up and said,
"Look, I'm here - alright- I didn't come all this way to here your theories on why women are late."

"Oooo! Someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed today!! That's okay I like cranky women.. I find them attractive.."

Bani shuddered. "This guy is such a creep," Bani thought," I'm gonna make an excuse and check on my other date.."

to be continued....

😆 😆 😆 I loved it...Bani pushed JW in the ladies restroom..n she is having 2 dates at the same time..one with uncle n the other with the nephew..
Pls continue..would love to see what excuses now Bnai will give to Sahil n meet JW..bechara is in dark in a ladies restroom.. 😉 😉 😉